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My first Rhys/Beth fic so don't be mean to me Big Grin

Beth

Flashback - 2008

I stare towards Rhys his body was almost touching mine. It wasn't right for us to be together. No - he was my brother. But I loved him so much more. It didn't seem wrong. But I could never forget that day his exact face when Gilly proposed to me. That was two years ago and now we're not going nowhere. I tell myself - This life's going no-where

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Sounding Goodd!! i hope more tonite :P:P


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great start. please continue soon.
 
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Thanks for the comments Big Grin

Rhys

I'm flicking through these photo's each one brings back a memory. There's Hannah with John-Paul just before her anoerexia. Then I stop at one picture. I stare at the picture, tears in my eye as I remember the day I first lost Beth

Flashback - 2008

I stare at Beth and Gilly my heart filled of nothing but envy of him. I know she's my sister - but I can't help it - I think I am in love with my sister

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oooh, very good


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ι'νє вєєи ℓσσкιиg fσя тнαт ѕσмєσиє
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oooh very goood x
 
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Gilly - Present Day

I look at Beth (my wife). She seemed withdrawn but when I asked her what was up she shrugged her shoulders and called out daughter Ebony for tea. She seemed smiley towards Eb but I knew there was something behind it. Much more behind her smile

Rhys - Present Day

I am alone
Again. Why oh why did I give Beth up? I keep asking myself that question every day. I cry myself to sleep. My world has fell apart

Beth - Present day

I open this letter I got through the post. Gilly is watching the football with our tomboy daughtor Ebony. I know who it's from - the D.N.A specialists. I wanted to be certain if Rhys was my brother

I stare at the results. I can see them as clear as crystal

Rhys Ashworth is not your brother
 
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Omgg !!! More Pleaseee !¬!!!:P:P i need to no what happens lol :PBig Grin


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Wow. Great Twist. Hope you continue soon. Can't wait to see what will happen now.
 
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I Hope You Havent Forgotten This I Am Looking Forward To More :P


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No I haven't lol
I wanted to wait until I got my new star until I updated my fics.
I have the star now so do you want any more?
 
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Beth

My hands were trembling with joy as I read the last bit of that letter. I could love him freely. Nothing could stop us now.

But then Ebony comes up to me. She is the spit of her daddy. I couldn't do this to them. Or could I? No I couldn't Rhys was Eby's uncle, he couldn't be her stepdad. It would be too confusing to her. She is only two

Gilly

Why has Beth become all happy all of a sudden. I am not being paranoid but I need to know what is happening. She's not my wife any more. I have been unfaithful to her. I cheated on her with Sarah Barnes. It would break her heart

Sarah

Where is Gilly? He was meant to be meeting me here 10 minutes ago. Probably that stupid wife of his Beth. And his stupid daughter come to that. Sarah Barnes gets her own way even if it means ruining people's lives. I march up to their house. I am going to tell beth exactly what is happening
 
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Fab! More soon please.
 
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Ebony, Gilly, Srah, Beth

Ebony: MUMMY!

Beth: What!

Ebony: Sarah at the door

Beth: Oh what does she want?

Ebony: Me dunno mummy

Beth went to the door. Sarah looked angry

Sarah: Where's Gilly?

Beth: Upstairs watching the footie. Why?

Sarah: I am so sorry

Beth: What for?

Sarah: He is cheating on you

Beth stared at her dumbstruck

Beth: Lies

Sarah: I swear

Beth gets angry

Beth: Who with?

Sarah: Me

Gilly came down stairs

Gilly: Who's at the door?

Sarah and Beth looked at him. He knew what this was about

Gilly: Im so sorry Beth
 
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Omgggg More Please !! i hope beth and rhys can get together now!!!!


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ι'νє вєєи ℓσσкιиg fσя тнαт ѕσмєσиє
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Tar for the comments

Will do some more later
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