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She stepped out of the cab and smirked, she looked around and shrugged. Her black short inverted bobbed hair with violet highlights shone the sunlight off her. She put her black 'D+G' sunglasses on her head and smirked, her bright blue eyes glinting.

She smoothed out her black tight lowcut halter neck and looked down, she shifted her top and made her assets bulge. She then smoothed out her jeans and turned to the cab driver. She paid him and got her suitcases from the trunk and put them on the pavement.

"Cheers."She said to him, her blood red lips uttering the words while her red nail varnished fingers joined her lips with blowing him a kiss.

"No problem Kala."He said, before driving off, and she turned around to look at the village of Hollyoaks.

'Well this is the village known as Hollyoaks. Well Kala Michaela Cunningham start walking.'She thought and she picked up her suitcases up before her black DCs started moving.


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good start !!!!!!!!!!
sound veri intresting !
can not wait til the next part !
 
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Max was woken up by banging on his door. He got out of bed and slipped on his pajama bottoms (Nice visual aye ladies?!) before walking out of the bedroom and to his front door.

"Okay okay. Hold your blinking horses."Max opened the door and his mouth dropped.

"UNCLE MAX!"Kala exclaimed and jumped into his arms. She hugged him and smiled as she couldn't believe that she had finally found him.

"Kala Michaela Cunningham you have grown."Max said in a very surprised voice.

Kala smiled and picked her suitcases up.

"Were you thrown out?"He asked and she nodded, tears built in her eyes before she wiped them away. "Hey Kal, come on tell me about it."She walked in and sat down, her eyes flickering around and her lips curled up into a soft smile.

"Oh god, Max, it's so frustrating."Kala said as she looked down, her joy was short lived as per usual. "Max, my mum threw me out because, because, because I'm pregnant, she refused to let me live at home with a 'burden' and she went mad, my dad as per usual was too scared to say anything."Max was shocked and he looked down at her stomach. She pulled her halterneck up and he touched her small but visible bump.

"You can stay here as long as you want, I will provide."

Kala cut him off angrily.

"I'm not here for charity, I had a job, I saved up a hell of a lot. I have a couple thousand quid in my suitcase, I'm only asking you to support me and give me a roof. I will pay you rent, every week, if you want it."Max was shocked at Kala's outburst but smiled.

"Wow, one teenager in the world who has the right idea."She smiled and hugged him.

"I'm 18 Max."Max laughed and turned around to see Steph standing there.

"Steph, meet my niece Kala."Kala smiled and held her hand out, Steph shook her hand.

"So what have I missed?"Max's blonde fiancee asked.

"Well she got chucked out because she is pregnant."Steph sighed and sat down next to Max and smiled.

"Well you got our support."Max held Stephs hand and Kala smiled.

"So where's Tom?"Max laughed at Kala's question.

"In bed."Max replied and Kala nodded.

"I'll sleep on the couch."Kala said smiling as Max and Steph went back to bed, Kala got out a sheet and put it on the couch, she put three pillows and a duvet on it. She got her pajamas on and looked around.

"Mum, why refuse me?"She asked before crying softly to herself.


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Thank you thank you so much hollyoakschick.

I was wary of writing this but I have had it in my file for a few weeks.

If you want me to continue, tell me,


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welcome but please write more !!!!!!!!!!!
i am wondering what JP and Kieron r doing in it !? but i will just have to wait Razz Big Grin Big Grin
 
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Absolutely Brilliant!!!!! x
 
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(Oh Elliot is still a bit geeky, I love him.)

The next morning Kala woke up and looked around she saw a note.

Hey Kaykay, just gone to the dog (a local pub can't miss it) Meet us there when you wake up. Love ya Guzzy-bear. XX Max+Steph

Kala smiled and got dressed into a red top with straps across the back and a pair of black hot pants and a pair of red converses. She got her denim jacket on and reapplied her make up. She straightened her front bits of her hair and ruffled the back bits.

She walked around and finally found the pub. She bumped into someone and she fell over.

"Oh I am so sorry."Came a strong welsh accent and she looked up. Her heart melted at the sight of the shy looking guy. He wore a black and red striped hat and some glasses.

"Oh it's okay. I should have been looking where I was going."She said apologizing to him.

"Umm I'm Elliot, Elliot Bevan."

"Kala, Kala Cunningham."She replied and they smiled. She stood up and she brushed herself off.

"Well bye."Elliot said softly to her and she blushed.

"Bye Elliot."She walked to the pub and watched Elliot walk off.

She walked in and smiled as she saw Steph by the bar. She walked over.

"Hey Steph."Steph turned around and hugged Kala. They hugged for a while and then broke away.

"So where is Max?"Steph smiled at the question.

"Toilet, men are terrible."Steph replied and then asked. "What you drinking?"

"Orange juice please."Steph ordered their drinks and they sat down as the got them.

Max joined them a few minutes after and they began talking.


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still loving it !!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
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(Off topic talk for a second, who wants Newt to show up because i have a HUGE story for him that i would like to add, just tell me your thoughts.)
(Kieron and JP will have a HUGE part in this story, just watch out for it.)


"Um Max, what do you know of Elliot Bevan?"Kala asked and Max's eyes bulged out of their sockets, his fashionable, pregnant, popular niece would be interested in Elliot.

"Well he's sweet, welsh, a bit of a geek, but in a good way. He loves sci fi and aliens and he's cool."Steph replied for Max, smiling at him with a glint her eyes.

"Well I'm interested in him."Kala said and Steph awwed. "Do you think I should go for it?"She asked and Steph answered again.

"Well just get to know him a bit better first. Then think about it."Kala smiled and gave Steph a fiver.

"Cheers for the drinks, I need to see if there are any jobs for me."Kala said and bounded out of the pub with a smile.

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"Elliot!"Kala shouted and the welsh boy turned around and smiled as he saw Kala.

"Hey Kala. Where you going?"He asked and she shrugged.

"Looking for a job, gotta get money somewhere and sitting on my bum all day won't get me any."Kala said and Elliot laughed.

"Well I would wish you luck but you don't need any, your beauty would convince anyone to give you a job."Elliot said and Kala's heart broke at those kind words.

"Thank you."She said and hugged him. "You're a lovely bloke Elliot."She whispered into his ear. "Don't let anyone tell you any different."

She walked off and missed the smile of Elliots face.

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Kala walked out of pub with a smile on her face, she had a job at the dog, good pay and close to her house. She went home and heard giggling and kissing.

"I'll leave them to it."She said and walked to the fountain. She saw a cute blonde haired boy. Her gaydar went mad. She walked up to him.

"Hi, is this seat taken?"She asked and he shook his head. "I'm Kala."

The blonde haired boy looked up and said softly.

"John Paul."She held out her hand and he shook it.

"Cool name, where's George and Ringo?"John Paul laughed and soon the both of them were laughing.

"Dunno probably singing."Kala sobered up from laughing.

"Wanna come back to mine? You look miserable and you look like you need a shoulder."John Paul mentioned and Kala nodded. They walked to John Pauls house and went up to John Pauls room.

"I'm pregnant, 18 and my mother hates me."She said and burst into tears.

"Oh hon, how you lived like that."He said and hugged her.

"Now tell me your rubbish."She said and he looked at her.

"Well, I fell in love with my best mate, broke his relationship with his girlfriend by sleeping with him, he left for Dublin now I bedded the local priest and he hates me."Kala's eyes went wide and her mouth dropped open.

"Wow."John Paul nodded. "Well you have to get back with this priest because life is too short."She added and they started to plan how they would get their lives on track.


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yea get JP and the gorge Kieron back together

still luvin it !!!!!!! keep up the brill work
 
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Still Love it
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That was Brilliant again!
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There will be more in about ten-fifteen minutes cause I gotta go walk my dog, so when I come back there will be more more more.

Oh and let me put it this way, Kala is a girl that Niall won't want to cross.


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more please i wanna know whats happening with jp and fk !!!
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John Paul and Kala walked through the village to the dog for a drink or two (Orange juice for Kala.)

John Paul walked in first and opened the door for Kala and the girl smiled at him. They walked up to the bar and ordered their drinks.

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Kieron walked in and looked over at the bar, he saw John Paul talking to a young girl so he decided to go over to see who she was.

"Hey John Paul, who's this?"Kieron asked and Kala turned around.

"Names Kala, you must be Kieron?"She replied and Kieron nodded.

"John Paul you've been talking about me."He said as he felt a bit anxious.

"All good things."Kala replied to the priest and she smiled. "So how are you?"She asked him and John Paul smiled, their drinks came and Kala paid for them. "Anything for you Kieron?"She asked.

"A pint please."He replied and she ordered his drink. It came and she paid for his pint.

They walked over to a table and sat down.

"Kieron, Kala is Max's niece and she's moved here."John Paul said, keeping out the pregnancy part out, that was Kala's job.

"My mother found out I am pregnant and she said she didn't want a disgrace like me in the house so my uncle was the best person to go to."She said and Kieron nodded, hardly one to talk considering he would be called a disgrace if he came out to his parents.

"Well I hope you do what you need to do."He said and looked at John Paul lovingly, the teen missed the look as he was taking a gulp of beer. Kala didn't miss it, she smirked and got out a pad, adding to the plan. She put her pad back in her bag and continued to drink her orange juice.

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Elliot walked in and smiled as he saw Kala he walked over.

"Hey Kala."He said and Kala looked up, almost spitting out her orange juice. She was so happy to see him.

"Elliot."She said as she stood up to hug him, Elliot gave her a hug and they broke apart. "I got a job, here I start next Monday, so wanna come and see me for my first day?"She asked and Elliot nodded.

"Sure, I come here sometimes but I will come here especially for you."He said, blabbering as he smiled at her.

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Kieron smiled at them and looked over at John Paul.

He slid his hand under the table and gripped his knee. John Paul looked over and Kieron smiled at him.

John Paul motioned towards the door and Kieron nodded, the two finished up their drinks and they went out towards the McQueens.

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Kala turned around to see the two guys gone and she smiled.

'Finally.'She thought.

"So Elliot you wanna go to the SUBar I have heard so much about?"She asked and they started to walk there.


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