i wlkd in2 da rm n saw kris lukin at me. I rli wnted him 2 b myn 4eva. bt dat wa neva gona apen was it. e lykd jess nt me. i ws a ugly gal dat lyked futbal nt fashion lyk im. jess ws perfect 4 im. Zak lykd me dough bt i dnt lyk hm bt i cud neva tel im dat it wud break im. kris luked at me wiv jess in is arms. i wlkd away n wnt 2 ma rm. i h8d cin im wiv er lyk dis. i h8ed it.

lmao well done

I didn't uderstand a word of it

please continue, I'm dying to know what happens.

I don't think I could live without this fic.

I'm sorry lizzy your gonan have to survive..
I might write some more when I get bored in a week or two

lmao

I don't think I could wait that long for your fantastic and gramatically correct writing

bump!

Come on people! read it! it's amazing.

wow im surprised at how many people dont like it
but lizzy youll always be my fan

U should use less text language it takes so long to read but its good

Thanks Jodie

thank you racheyooo

anyone think i should continue?

yeah!!

ok den..more shud b up sn

Da nxt day n it ws da sme as usual. kris n Jess huggd up on da sofa, Zak owt playin futie n lonly old me sat round drinkin.
'Morning' Zoe said 2 kris n jess
'Mornin luvly day ay? fancy a ryd owt?'
'O Kris n since wen cud u drive?' Jess said 2 kris
'hu said id b drivin? i cn get sum1 else 2 u no.' kris gt up of da sofa n 2 the dor 2 get a coat.
'cme on u 2 were of on an adventur.' dey both gt up n wnt owt da dr wiv kris

wow, beautifully written, not one single bit of imperfect spelling or grammar.

I don't know how you do it!

wow well goood story line n i cant w8 2 read more...

beckie x

p.s i agree that u shud use less txt language, but thats just a small point lol x

sorry beckie lol
it was a dare but Ive decided I kind of like what I came up with in my moment of madness so i may continue

hahaha really?!?! even the textiness?

quote:

wow, beautifully written, not one single bit of imperfect spelling or grammar.

I don't know how you do it!

I agree. I mean, just... wow. MORE because I understood it perfectly.

yay i think you should continue... i have moments of madness all the time lol =] they are very fun lol

.x. beckie .x.

lol
I might lay off the teaxt talk a bit though lol

Coolio Stuff XD