Michaela: where is every one Sonny: Calvin at Louise an sasha at Amy’s Michaela :do you want to go out Sonny: where to Michaela: maybe park Sonny: well Wayne will be there Michaela : so what Sonny: well he doesn’t know im goin out wi you Michaela : well tell him Sonny : i cant he like you Michaela: no he doesn’t . you ashamed of me Sonny: no Michaela rove it . let go to park Sonny: ok then
I do like this , I really do as I'm a sucker for Sonny/Michaela and you're good but do you mind if I give you a little advice?
I ♥ movies & getting caught in the rain, just hold back on the pina colada There's nothing more sexy than a time travelling glasses wearing time lord lol
There's nothing that can't be solved with a little rock salt, a gun and Sam & Dean, oh yeah! Fanatical about Torchwood & Jack/Ianto-because stopwatches can be VERY fun!
just put a little more depth in, set the scene and use a little bit description of what's going on and you'll be set, this has real potential and i'll be reading religiously
I ♥ movies & getting caught in the rain, just hold back on the pina colada There's nothing more sexy than a time travelling glasses wearing time lord lol
There's nothing that can't be solved with a little rock salt, a gun and Sam & Dean, oh yeah! Fanatical about Torchwood & Jack/Ianto-because stopwatches can be VERY fun!
At park Wayne and some of his mate are sat the park bench . Sonny and Michaela walk over to them:
Sonny : hiya Wayne: what you doing with her Sonny : I’m going out wi her Wayne : what. Am I hearing thing Sonny: i like her so what Wayne :your mental Sonny: why am i ( sonny getting angry ) Wayne cos she a slag Sonny no she not (sonny punch Wayne) Wayne : sorry mate Sonny: you should be Wayne: ok can we all just hang out cos i cnt be bother to fight wi you over a lass Sonny: ok Sonny kisses Michaela
They all start walk down the road .they stop because wayne want to steal a car:
Wayne: shall we take it Sonny: your mad Michaela : im not goin in a stolen car Wayne: why not Michaela: let mi think what happen the last time i was in a stolen car plus ( nearly crying ) Wayne : sorry i forgot Michaela: it ok Sonny : babe you ok Michaela: ye y Sonny: it just you look upset Wayne talking to one of his mates: how could i forget that. When one of mi mates are inside for it. One of Wayne mate to Wayne : it bin ages those They stop talking and sonny is talking to Michaela : Sonny to Michaela : do you want to go back to mine Michaela: ye Sonny and Michaela walk off
Wayne shout to sonny : where you to goin Sonny: back to mine Wayne : catch you later then
Back at sonny’s . sonny and Michaela are sat on sofa watching a film
Michaela: what do you wanna do? Sonny: just sit her watching this film wi you Michaela: ok.. (cuddles up with sonny).
After a few minutes
Michaela: do you wanna go upstairs. Sonny: errr, why? Michaela: you know. Sonny: no im comfortable here thanks. Michaela: Sonny Sonny: yeah Michaela: don't you wanna go upstairs Sonny: yeah course I do but I don’t want to rush things Michaela: well you're not I asked, not you Sonny: are you sure? Michaela: yeah Sonny: come on then (takes her by the hand leads her upstairs.)
At school the next day sonny is talking to Wayne an some of his mates in one of the classrooms :
Wayne: what did you get up to last nite Sonny: nothing why Wayne: well you and Michaela didn’t stay at park long. Sonny: so Wayne: come on sonny Sonny: im not saying anything it private Wayne i was right you and Michaela have done something Sonny : shut up Wayne: was she good Sonny: Wayne shut up I’m not talking about owt mi and Michaela do ok Wayne: sorry mate
Michaela enter the classroom
Michaela to sonny: hi Sonny: hiya babe Michaela what ya doin after school Sonny: nothing much why Michaela: just thought you might want to come to park for a bit Sonny oh i just remembered i got footie training to nite soz babe Michaela: it ok
Michaela walk out of the classroom as she does the bell goes.
Michaela walk out of the classroom as she does the bell goes.
Football training sonny is goin on a john Paul because he is gay
Sonny: i didn’t know gays did fottie(laughing) Jp: go away Sonny: no Jp : even though you are goin out wi mi sister you still bully me for being gay Sonny: why you bring her in to this Jp: she my sister and I don’t want her goin out wi a loser like you Sonny: she can make her own choices on who she goes out wi Jp: wat a loser like you Sonny: get lost gay boy . Jp hit sonny sonny unconscious on the ground . the coach come over to see what goin off
Coach: what the hell happen here Jp: i didn’t mean 2 it just he was takin piss out of mi Coach: some one call an ambulance and try and get hold of his brother
Jp phones Michaela
Michaela: hiya what up Jp: there bin an fight involving sonny Michaela: are you ok Jp: ye but sonny been taken to hospital Michaela: (start crying) is he ok Jp: i duno he unconscious can you try and get hold of sasha cos we cant get hold of calvin Michaela : ye sure Michaela: hangs up and dials sasha number
Sasha: hiya Michaela: you need to phone calvin and get to hospital it sonny he bin in a fight and he unconscious Sasha: ok i will who was he fighting wi Michaela: john paul Sasha: ok i will see you there bye Michaela: bye
At the hospital calvin and sasha rush to reception asking where sonny was then calvin see Michaela
Calvin: have you seen him Michaela: ye it this way They enter the room sonny is in he is hooked up on wires and still his unconscious Michaela: i can’t lose him Calvin: he be ok he a fighter Michaela: have you told ya dad Calvin i left a message on his phone Doctor enter
Calvin: is he goin to be ok Doctor: he is stable Calvin: thank
Sonny start to wake up
He asking for Michaela
Michaela : im here im not goin any where Sonny : im sorry Michaela : wat for Sonny : pickin on jp Michaela: it ok sasha and Calvin are here Later on Calvin i think we should go and let him get some rest Sasha : ok see you 2moz bye Michaela : i will come an see you 2moz good night Kiss sonny
Next day at hospital Doctor sonny calvin sasha leo sonny dad and Michaela are in the room
Leo: when can he come home Doctor: once he has bin discharge about 12:30 Leo: thank you Michaela to sonny : I thought I lost you Sonny : it take more than that to get rid of me They kiss
At 12 :30 sonny id discharged on there way home they bump in to john paul
Jp: im so sorry Sonny: it ok Jp: but i should have hit you Sonny: it wasn’t your fault i started it Michaela: come on sonny oh hiya bro Jp: hiya Michaela what you 2 talkin about Jp : i was just sayin sorry to sonny Michaela: ok but sonny you need to get home and rest Sonny: Ok babe im coming
At 4 o clock pm wayne knock on sonny door
Sonny: hiya Wayne : u ok Sonny: ye Wayne im goin to kill gay boy Sonny : just leave it Wayne : why Sonny : because im wi Michaela and he her brother Wayne: ok . you really love don’t you Sonny : ye Wayne : your goin soft
While sonny is talking to Wayne at hi house Michaela at Amy tell her that she pregnant.
Michaela : i don’t want a child im too young Amy : have you told sonny yet Michaela: haven’t had the chance. He only got out of hospital 2 day Amy: wat do ya fink he will say Michaela: i daren’t tell him he might leave me Amy : if he love you he want. go and tell him. Get it over with Michaela ok see ya later
hiya this is really good but just one thing, you're missing out words at places and it's hard to follow, i'm not criticising or anything so please don't take offence x
All our dreams can come true, if we have the courage to pursue them - Walt Disney
Hob Nobs are like Marines - Peter Kay
Just when you think you know the answers, I change the questions - Rowdy Roddy Piper
Michaela arrives at sonny she knock on the door . sonny answer he invites her in when she goes in she see Wayne there
Wayne: im off cya later Sonny: bye Michaela: bye Michaela turn to sonny : we need to talk Sonny getting worried: wat about Michaela : im so sorry Sonny : wat are sorry about Michaela start to cry : im pregnant Sonny: what Michaela: im so sorry (crying) Sonny: babe dnt cry Michaela : plz dnt leave me Sonny : im not goin to babe Michaela: what am i goin to do Sonny : well do you want to keep it Michaela: ye but how will we cope Sonny : we will manage . i love you i do owt for you Michaela and sonny cuddle up on sofa Calvin walks in
Calvin : what goin off here . Michaela you ok Sonny : we got some thing to tell you Calvin : what Sonny : Michaela pregnant Calvin: what she under age and you are 18 Sonny: so what i love her Calvin it against the law Sonny: stuff the law i love her Calvin : Michaela im sorry for the way i just acted Michaela : it ok it a shock to us all
Sasha walks in
Sasha: hiya what up wi ya all Sonny : Michaela pregnant Sasha : what . you got my best mate pregnant Michaela : sasha calm dowm plz Sasha : calm down mi brother got mi mate pregnant Sonny: sasha Sasha : get lost Sasha storm out of the house Michaela goes after her
Michaela: sasha wait plz Sasha: get back to sonny Michaela: i didn’t mean to get pregnant Sasha: so what Michaela starting to cry: plz sasha i don’t want to fall out you . i am scared . i am only 15 and i am pregnant Sash: sorry(they hug)
rove it . let go to park 
lol 
