Hey as yooh obvi no im like a new memba on here and ive been readin sum of yoor stories and dere gr8 so im gna try and do ma own so here goes...
Part One
Louise is sittin at the bathroom at the Valentines staring at a pregnancy test thts in her hands
Louise: Come on Come on why are you taking so long...
A couple of minutes past and finally she had her answer she burst in too floods of tears. She sat there for about 5 minutes just staring at it.
When suddenly Calvin burst through the door
Calvin: Louise... What are you doing? Whats wrong?
He looks down at her hands and runs over 2 her
Calvin: Louise this is great i cnt believe it im gna b a dad!
He picks her up and hugs her as she cry silently behind his bk
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Calvin continues to hug louise for like a minute or so before finally pullin away where Louise was subtley wiping her eyes.
Calvin: Whats wrong lou?
Louise: Nothing
Calvin: There is dont lie to me
Louise: IM not its just the baby cme as a bit of a shock
Calvin: OH! so r u sayin u dnt want it
Louise: NO did u not listen 2 me just drop it Calvin!
With that Louise left the bathroom, leaving Calvin looking confused

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Louise was sitting in Evissa really not in the mood for anything although she has sorted evrything out with Calvin.
But who should walk through the door...Warren.

W: Dont we look happy today!
L:Leave me alone Warren
W:Alrite i was only tryin 2 b friendly
L:Sorry, i know u r
W:Anyway wots up with u, i dnt like seein u upset
L:nothing
W:Oh ok
Louises attention had been diverted coz Carmel had just walked through the door
L:Hey Carm!
C:Hey Lou!
L:We're doin facials 2day so go n get ready
Carmel left to go and get ready and warren turned to louise
W:Now ino there is summin up ure never snappy wit carmel
L: Im Pregnant
Louise drew her hand to her mouth and warren just stood there looking stunned

A couple of seconds passed...
L:Well say summin then
W:Oh! Sorry, well i know no why u were snappy
Warren gave a cheesy little grin
W:You dont know whos it is do you, Louise dont worry i mean would it be so bad if it were mine
L:I dno but please just leave me alone...
W:OK, but we do need 2 tlk Louise

With that Warren left Evissa leaving Louise looking stunned, Calvin would have never taken it like that, he would have gone mental.
Did she really want this baby to be Calvins or Warrens.

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Louise left Evissa and she had all of these thoughts running through her mind about the baby, Calvin, Warren and she dint know what to do but what she did know was that she didnt properly love Calvin she never could... she would go home pack and tell Calvin the truth. She finally realised that warren was the one she wanted 2 be with and she had known that all along although she cared about Calvin her feelings ran deeper for Warren. Louise had a plan she went to her old flat where she lived with mel and sophie and before she moved out the landlord sed that she could have it back anytime she wanted so thats what she would do.
She went to see the landlord and she got her old flat back and with that she went back to pack her main essentials and then she had to wait until calvin came back... which she knew wouldnt be pleasant!

3 Hours Later...
Louise was still sitting at home waiting for Calvin and wondered where he could be. She was so nervous because she didnt know what Calvin was capable of.
Warren was working at the loft and he too like louise could only think about her and how muhc he loved her but he didnt know whether she felt the same way. That night at the loft they had a stag night in
Groom: Alrite Mate! Wanna join us you look like s***
W: Yeh alrite then! Lets get some shots round here- Justin you can take over
Warren had been drinking now for 2 hours and he was drunk out of his head and who should walk through the door but Mercedes McQueen...

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Hey, i will try n do sum more 2nite but if i dnt i will defo do sum more 2moz so keep lukin out and also it is gna b like reli kool wit da hole warren/mercedes ting coz summin is gna happen so keep looking out!
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Louise sat at the valentines by herself for ages until Calvin finally arrived and she became nervous more nervous than she had ever been in her entire life.
C:Hey babe, you ok? How are you feeling today? Why are you sitting in the dark?
L:Calvin there something i need 2 tell you
C:Whats wrong? Is it the baby?
L:Well yes Calvin please sit down because wot i am about 2 tell you u wont like
C:OK! Why is your suitcase there
L: Cal..Calvin the baby may not be yours
C:What! so you lied to me
L:Know i didnt, it could be yours but it could also be
C:Warrens! How could i guess how long ave u 2 been togetha then
L:It was the one time when we broke up im reli sorry but i love him!
C:And what about me
L:I care about you alot but
C:I dnt even wanna here it! just get out of my house i dnt even care if the baby your carrying is mine, i dnt want 2 see you or it again
L:Calvin...please
C:Just get out... oh no where are you gonna go? Bet i can guess
With that he picked up louises suitcase and threw it out of the door along with her she fell to the ground and hit her head, it started to bleed but only slighly. She got up and wiped the tears away from her eyes! As Calvin stormed back into the house with rage waking up sasha
S:Whats going on
Calvin slummed back into a chair bursting into a fit of tears
Louise was down the bottom of the stairs heading for the loft when she looked up at the house and whispered
L:Sorry!
She left Calvin and headed for the loft where the stag party had moved on and the two that were left were Warren and Mercedes sitting on the sofa about to get to cosy...

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Louise was walking through hollyoaks passing drive n buy and walking up the steps to the loft where this was happening...
Mercedes and Warren were now on the sofa half naked and it was about to get more intense if you know what i mean
W:Oh u r such a bad girl
M: (snogging warren) Me and you are destined to be togetha
W:Yeh we r
Mercedes looks at Warren
M:Oh! I love you Mr Fox
Louise comes into the loft and its shocked the man that she loves and thought that loved her is ontop of another woman
L:And i thought i lovd you to mr fox
M:Shuve off louise
W:LOUISE! (looking shocked)
L:Your a bloody pig and i hate you i cnt even believe this i just broke up with Calvin and came to tell you that i love you and want to be with you and your here ontop of that S***! How could you i never want to talk to you again
(Louise storms out of the loft crying and rubbing her stomach)
W:Wait louise please come back! Get off of me Mercedes
Warren shuves his trousers back on and gets his shirt back on and runs out of the loft after louise leaving mercedes standing there looking like a piece of cheap meat
W:LOUISE! wait please
L:I have nothing to say to you just leave me alone! what did i ever see in you
W:Louise please i love you to we can work this out
L:No we cant! I never want to speak to you again (raising her hand to her head and wincing, still in fits of tears)
She turns round and pushes Warren away from her and runs away to her new falt leaving warren crying in the middle of Hollyoaks village
Will Warren and Louise ever make up? and next Louises first scan and the arrival of the new valentines...

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poor louise tut tut warren lol brill do more soon

Hey thnx 4 all ure nice comments im reli busy 2day so i shuld ave the next 2 parts up 2moz so keep on wotchin thnx

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Louise was now four months pregnant and it was showing now and still had no idea hu the father was. She hadnt spoken to warren since the night that he was with Mercedes although he sent her flowers, pleaded with her in public she wasnt having any of it! It was the day of the first scan and louise was standing outside of drive n buy waiting for a taxi when Warren came over to her, Louise just ignored him.
W:where are you going
L:Its none of your business, Warren ive told you before just leave me alone
W:It was a drunken mistake, please just listen to me
L:I hate you, just leave me alone
Although louise said this to his face she didnt mean any of it and she knew it
W:Lou..Please
Lidnt you just hear me
W:But i love you
Louise looked at him wanting to throw her arms round him and kiss him but she just couldnt forgive him however much she wanted to
W:Please just think about me and think about what im saying i know you want to
L:JUST GO!
She was tryin to fight back the tears and with that warren left finally feeling as if he had got through to Louise
Louise stood there for a further 5 mins when Katy came over
K:Hey Lou, where you off to
L:Erm, im going for the babys first scan but please dont tell warren
Kh ok i wont but ave u still not made up with him for the whole mercedes thing
L:NO and i wont
K:He reli loves you, you know, but i know u 2 will work it out u always do
L:Yeh ok whatever anyways, im reli nervous and dont wanna go on my own can u come with me
K:Yeh Please i would love to
The taxi turned up and both Louise and Katy got in and went to the hospital.
At The Hospital
Nurse:Ok miss summers heres your baby (turning the screen to her and katy)
L:Its amazing i cant believe thats my baby there
K:Wow
Nurse:OK everything is fine, ure fine and so's baby so im just going to get some copies of this picture for you, you will need to come back in 3 months time for another one, so just take it easy
L: (under her breath) I wish warren was her
K: What was
Louise just ignored her, she pulled her top down and rubbed her belly looking at a picture of her baby
Whilst this was going on something was also going on at the valentines
C: I DONT WANT THEM HERE DAD, get rid of them now!

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The Arrival of the New Valentines
C: Dad did you just not here me i dont even know who they are
Leo: Well i do they are my children just the same as you, please son let them just stay here for a week or so lauren can stay in Sashas room, who was looking forward to having a new brother and sister and Danny can stay in Sonnys old room
C:A week and thats it
L: thanks son
C: you dont ave the right to call me that
D: Whos says we even wana stay here, u guys r a bunch of freaks u do realise that
C: you wanna watch your mouth
With that Calvin stormed out. Calvin came back three hours later and was drunk out of his head. Sasha, Leo, Lauren and Danny were sitting eating dinner.
C: I cnnt believe u wuld sleep with their s*** of a mother over ours look at them... their rats
Danny: Thats its knowone insults my family
C: Theyre not your family theyre mine
Danny swung for Calvin and hit him square in the mouth. Calvin fell to the floor and wiped his mouth, Danny ran upstairs closely followed by Lauren.
Leo: I cnt believe you
C: Me your the one who had children we dint even know about (getting up and looking straight at his dad)
Leo: Grow up son!
S: Are you ok
C: Get off of me
With that the whole valentine clan ran upstairs apart from Calvin, who slept downstairs, clutching a picture of him and Louise...

fab hope you do more soon