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i know i set up a poll to decide what fic i should do and this is in it, but I'm gonna do this and the one people vote for.

This is about Hannah and Melissa in Milan. Just before Melissa died they were going to milan, but in this fic i'm gonna make it seem that melissa was not near a death experience.

On the Plane
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hannah: i can't belive we made it, we're going to Milan

Melissa: i know, now we can do whatever we want and no one can stop us. everyone in milan is like us, they all know what it is like to look good

hannah: i'm so glad to get away from that stupid family of mine

melissa: at least now you're starting to realise, if they actually cared about you they would let you not eat

hannah: you are such a good mate

melissa: so are you

air hostess: anything to eat or drink

hannah: i would like a...

melissa: hannah, just water please

hannah: sorry

melissa: what were you playing at

hannah: i was out of the zone for a moment

melissa: well i can't be with you every single moment, learn to control yourself
 
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great start please update soon
 
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this is a good start!
 
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the ashworths
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suzanne: hannah's nearly been gone for two hours, i worried she's seeing melissa

ryhs: i'll check her room, mabey she's left a note or something

ryhs went into hannah's room, all her draws were emptied out, all her CD's were gone and so was her passport. but all her clothes were still in the wardrobe. suddenly ryhs noticed a note on the bed. It read:

Dear everyone,

i have gone to italy with melissa, so don't start searching for me. you left me no choice, you made me eat and wouldn't let me out of the house. i wasn't happy with you but I'm gonna start a new life in milan. i might even get a modelling job. everyone there knows how i feel, and knows what it is like to stay thin. i will be happy, you are out of my life. i love you all but you didn't make me happy.

hannah xxxx

ryhs: MUM!!!

suzanne: what's wrong

suzanne, neville and josh read the note. suzanne burst into tears.

suzanne: my baby's gone, i'm never gonna see her again.
 
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Love it!


Annie…Xx
*Lorna**Gaby**Tori**Lozza**Nikki**Michelle**Lucie**Daisy**Louise**Lucy**Natalie**Beth**Melissa**Erin**Steve*
*Lexie**Occy**Lolly**Hannah**Brooklyn**Katrina**Maddii**Sarah**Alex**Yasmin**Rielle**Kirsty*
 
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In Milan
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hannah: this hotel is so nice

melissa: i know

hannah: what you looking at

melissa: modelling jobs

hannah: you'll gt them easily

melissa: there not for me, there for you

hannah: me, i wouldn't know what to do and...

melissa: and what, have you eaten

hannah: before i took you out of hospital i ate a bar of chocolate, i was stressed

melissa: do you know how many calories chocolate has, they won't book you if you're fat

FAT, that one word, the word hannah dreaded the most, she felt a stabbing pain when she that word

melissa: looks like we need a trip to the bathroom

ashworths
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ryhs had phoned nearly all of hannah's friends to see if they knew anything. josh was searching hannah's room for clues. suzanne was calling nearly every airline.

suzanne: have two young girls, hannah ashworth and melissa hurts boarded a plane to milan

airline: let me just check the system.... yes, they boarded earlier this afternoon

suzanne: oh my god, are you serious

airline: yep, would you like me to book you a ticket for the next flight

suzanne: what time does it leave

airline: hour and a half

suzanne: book me three

airline: ok

aeroplane
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ryhs: mum, josh keeps calling me

suzanne: someone has to look after the house and her parents need to be there

ryhs: she could be in any hotel

suzanne: the minute we get there we are going to phone every hotel in milan

ryhs: i've already phoned three and there is no sign of her, they're gonna get in touch if they find out anything

suzanne: i could just kill that melissa, how dare she take away hannah from us

ryhs: they're both ill

neville: we'll find them, don't worry
 
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Milan
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hannah: you got any spare clothes for clubbing

melissa: yeah, put this on

hannah put them on and came out of the bathroom. melissa had a huge smile on her face

hannah: what are you so happy about

melissa: that dress your wearing is size zero

hannah: are you serious, there is a slight problem though

melissa: spill

hannah: it dosen't zip up from the back

melissa: come her

melissa zipped it right up. it fitted hannah perfectly. hannah was so proud. finally, she was a size 0
 
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rhys: I'VE GOT IT!!!

suzanne: our baby's coming home

suzanne had arrived at the hotel hannah and melissa were staying in.

suzanne: is hannah ashworth staying here

hotel woman: umm...let me check the system....yes, would you like there room number

hannah: mum...hannah and melissa ran back to there room

ryhs: run

hannah and melissa ran as fast as they could, finally they reached their room. they were too slow, rhys and suzanne just managed to come into the room. neville was in the lobby booking a taxi. he was confident she was coming home

hannah: get out, go home!!!

melissa: you're not wanted here

suzanne: you're ill, both of you, come home and we can sort this out. you too melissa

hannah: leave us alone, everyone here knows how we feel, not like you

ryhs: please han, we can help

hannah: i've started a life here, this is where i belong

melissa: she's even got a meeting with a leading fashion magazine in milan. her life is only just starting

ryhs: like you know anything about hannah

hannah: we're best mates, just stay out

suzanne: sit down han, let's just talk, it might help

melissa: (whispering to hannah) just do it, it might make them go

hannah: fine, you have half and hour
 
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Annie…Xx
*Lorna**Gaby**Tori**Lozza**Nikki**Michelle**Lucie**Daisy**Louise**Lucy**Natalie**Beth**Melissa**Erin**Steve*
*Lexie**Occy**Lolly**Hannah**Brooklyn**Katrina**Maddii**Sarah**Alex**Yasmin**Rielle**Kirsty*
 
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