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Hiya everyone this is a new fanfic ive started. Im not going to say who it is about , all will become clear in the final chapter. Hope you enjoy it and dont forget to keep the comments coming lol !! xxx

CHAPTER 1

It’s the summer of 2046. Outside the church the streets are packed with people waiting to go in. The heat was blazing outside and people were instructed to wear black linen trousers if they preferred so that they were comfortable and that is what most did but some preferred to wear full suits as a sign of respect. Most people attending were familiar faces who they had kept in contact with for all these years but a fair few people who they hadn’t seen in years , had fights with and had even never really spoken to where there – it just proved how well loved he was by everyone. What wasn’t to love? He spoke his mind , was always there and the best father and grandfather anyone could ever imagine. Waiting at the door of the church was an average height elderly with grey , bouncy straight hair kept down. She was there with her children , Jessie , 29 , Alfie , 31 and Kristian , 29 who came along with their children; Angel who was 3 and Kristians daughter and Kerry , 5 , Jessies daughter. Kristian had blonde styled spikey hair and ocean blue eyes. Jessie was a born platinum blonde but she had begun to dye it brown from the age of twelve. She was the spitting image of her mother when she was younger and the same could be said for Kristian and his father. Alfie was a mixture of both mother and father with brown hair and piercing blue eyes. The lady stood next to her now downsized family clasping a locker, tears brimmed her eyes. It was thirty nine years to the day that she had met her husband but who could have forecast that today would also be the day she would be saying goodbye.
 
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OH NO! IS IT KRIS?!?!?!

Hunni xxx
 
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i think it is!


Hug to my buddies pieces of rainbow, OoORosieOoO, Hunni and Kay Big Grin
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omg
this is so sad and so well written
continue soon.
 
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omg!
this is so sad and so well written
continue soon.
 
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please huryr up with more soon im so not cheesered"!

Hunni xxx
 
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omg this is great Big Grin..a bit confusin lol..but great start Big Grin..cant wait for more x
 
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bump
 
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this is soo gurd i hope ya do some more soon!

BUMP!

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Awwwwwwwwww Frown its sad...think i know who it is Frown

great writing Lauren xx


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I got a feelin its kris..and when are youu gonna do more cause its really gud Big Grin
 
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Chapter 2

Sorry for forgetting about this fic guys , but heres the next chapter , again, sorry for the wait!

As the time approached midday the woman couldnt control herself and all 250 attendees gave their best attempts to console her but none worked , the only person in the world she wanted was her husband even though she knew what happened had happened and he wasnt coming back. No more little arguments , kisses , cuddles or drives in the country. Nothing. No more. She didnt want to face the truth but today was her final goodbye. As the bell chimed , the memories from that eventful day came flooding back.

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July 7th 2046. It was roughly half past 12 and it was a great day for a drive in the near countryside. The two of them had been driving for a few hours and had decided to stop in a field nearby and have a little romantic picnic. They may have been nearing OAP status but they still liked romantic gestures. They were celebrating their 35th wedding wedding anniversary. Each year they would sit in the field and have a picnic; they had their first date their and , not that the twins knew it but they were conceived in that very field. It was clean cut , fresh , serene looking and a great escape from the busy , hectic world out there. He worked in the television industry, using his experience from media studies back at uni to create scripts for well known soaps and style programmes. After uni , the woman went onto write novels based on her own experiences and was a celebrated author across europe. They earned alot of money between them but longed for the weekends to come when they spent all of their time with each other and their families.So , after finishing their food they headed back to the car to give each other their cards and presents. After doing so she sat in the car and waited for him to get in after packing everything away in the boot of the car. Thats when she heard a loud thud. She went out and saw him, laying strewn across the road as the people in the speeding car drove off , without even taking the car to even look back at the damage they had caused. Just about able to get a signal on her phone, she rang an ambulance. All she could do was hold onto her husband firmly in her arms. She held onto him firmly as the tears fell from her eyes. She could feel the life drain from his body. She leant her head against his. She felt nothing. He was gone.
 
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Omg, that's so sad.
Brilliant writing.


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*Tash*
 
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glad you have written some more
this is soo sad
continue soon please
 
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please continue xx


i am the coolest randomner =]
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kris fisher rocks my socks
i'm beckie Smile
 
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EekCrying This fic is so emotional!Crying
Hope you do more!


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just read it all
its really good but sooo sad at the same time
hope there is more soon


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