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Zoe Carpenter you have been found guilty and will therefore be scentenced to a minimum of 7 years in prison. Take her down

Zoe - No no no you cant. He tried to kill me i was trying to defend myself.

Jess - ARE YOU ALL STUPID

Zac - Zoe I'll wait for you i promise forever and ever babe

Kris - ZOE NO

Mr Hacket you are free to go.

Zac - What are you playing it he tried to kill her you idiots.

Be Quite or we shall hold you in contempt

Zoe - I'LL GET YOU FOR THIS WILL I SWEAR YOU'LL PAY

Will walks out of the courtroom with a lock of mock sadness on his face before smirking evilly the plan had worker perfectly in just 6 months Zoe was out of his life forever and he was a free man. It had all worked perfectly.


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Will and Zoe were over indisputably over. Zac knew this yet still felt Will's presence between them. He knew their was something not right about him he just couldn't quite place it. When he lay in bed with Zoe in his arms her blonde hair falling over his chest he felt it the feeling of not quite being alone. When she kissed him he felt something jolt in his stomach and his heart skip but he still also fault that dreadful feeling of having unwelcome company. When they went to bed together he felt the pleasure associated with the carnal activities they were engaging in bu still didn't feel free and unhindered. Zac was sure he was madly in love With Zoe, knew their would never be anybody else for him but this third presence made the relationship feel sordid and wrong and this is not how he wanted his relationship with Zoe to be. Maybe it was Hall's maybe they had to get away from the surroundings. Stop sleeping in the same bed that Zoe's ex had once held her in. Maybe they could never move on with each other unless they left the Halls. Left Hollyoaks. Left for good.

Will Hackett was no mind reader. But he sensed Zac anxiety. He picked up on it through the slight hints he had heard him say to Zoe. He knew that Zoe would jump at the chance to leave with Zac. After all they were in love. This thought clouded his mind day in and day out and affected the way he thought. Rationality had abandoned him the moment he set eye's on Zoe. Now he was well and truly mad for her. He knew Zac and Zoe leaving would destroy him. If he lost the chance to even be near Zoe he would curl up and die. He had to do something to make sure he always knew where she was. Something that would keep her close at hand. Somewhere she would be trapped unable to escape him but where. Will was a smart man that much was undeniable and within minutes an idea began to form in his mind of how to deal with the situation. The problem now in his path was manipulating it. Leaving his escape from any blame as watertight as it possibly could be. He had time and Will was not afraid of playing the long game. As long as Will only ever played to win.

Zoe Carpenter often thought of Will but the thoughts of the man now made her shiver than fill her with warmth. She no longer felt safe around him she felt quite the opposite. He scared her. She lay with her eye's shut but her mind racing in the arms of the man she loved. The man she knew would never hurt her. She knew deep down that they wouldn't last forever. She had ambition and a drive that unfortunately Zac did not. She knew sooner or later she would get to fast for Zac to keep up with. For the moment however she was blissfully happy and put all thoughts of them parting ways out of her mind. Why couldn't love just be enough? Zoe lay with her eyes closed imitating sleep feeling an unease that was unrelated to Zac and her future. Why couldn't she get Will out of her head? Why was she still worried about him? Why did she still care?

Will was no mind reader but if he had have been he may have been given a hope that would have saved Zoe. Little did she know that in 6 months from now she would be stuck in a cell staring at the Wall's seething and silently hating Will Hacket.


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Hi i worked really hard on this so please comment it and tell me what you thought of it. It would mean alot to me


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Interesting :-) definitely will read more when you write again


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hey i hope some people have read this and some people have enjoyed this i will write more when i get in from work xxxxxx please if you have read this and liked it comment it because it's rather dis-heartening to not receive many comments


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Zac - Zoe?

Zoe - yeah?

Zac - are you awake?

Zoe - well now i am

Zac - Love you

Zoe love you too

In the next room will was watching this scene. Smirking.

Will - love you too my darling


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A week on and Will is set to begin the first stage in hi plan.

Will is sat slumped against the door in tears.

Jess - Hey i'm home but i'm off out again in...Will? Will wants wrong?

Will - It's Zoe she hates.

Jess - she dosen't hate you

Will - she told me she...she...

Jess - she told you what?

Will - wished i was dead

Jess - hey i'm sure she didn't mean it

Will - you didn't see her, I love her Jess

Jess - Come here

Zoe walks in see's will and Jess embraced in a tight hug jess gives Zoe a scathing look and Zoe turns on her heel and walks straight back out.

Will - See you tell me she wouldn't do anything to get me out of the way

Will then stands up and goes into his room smirking get making loud sobbing noises.

Jess stands and walks to the breakfast bar looking utterly baffled


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I've decided that im going to finsh this regardless of recieving comments or not. I hope people do like it as i do but if they don't i know for sure one person does me


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I really like it. The prologue was amazing - totally got me hooked. And I look forward to reading what is to come but I'm going to apologise in advance because I so often forget to comment!! But I'll try to! Big Grin


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Zoe stood outside the door to halls and leant on it. What was she thinking? Why was Will in her head still. Why did seeing him sat their crying still tare her apart? Why was Zac not enough for her?. Zoe didn't know the answers to these questions and although of course she wished she did, she decided that maybe the questions were just as important as the answers. Should she make another go of it with Will? but then what about Zac? She loved him! that she knew. But what about Will. Quite suddenly the door behind her flew open and Zoe stumbled backwards and would have fallen had she not been suported by muscular arms. She stood and turned round to face the man who had caught her.

Zoe - thanks

Will - don't worry anyway i should go

Zoe - Yeah, i mean it's not that i want you to go i meant if you have to be somewhere

Will - Don't worry zo, i get it you don't want to be around me.

Zoe - Look bygones be bygones?

Will - sounds good

Zoe - Great well unless you do have to be somewhere fancy some wine.

Will - I could be tempted

Zoe - Great i think i have a bottle in my room! Is jess still here

Jess comes out of her room.

Jess - not for long.

Will gives Jess a pleading look whilst Zoe goes into her room to fetch the wine from under her bed.

WIll -you sure you cant stay?

Jess - No why?

Will - oh nothing i'm sure it will be fine

Jess - alright...see you later then. Jess spoke with puzzlement and perhaps just the hint of concern

Zoe - aha Wine!

Will suddenly smiling again - Excellent... shall we

It was a shame for Zoe that she couldn't have been busy. for tonight was when Will's plan was to fully begin. The night she would find herself living through hell. When in fact compared to what would follow the actions of tonight she was simply walking through the gates.


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Ooo, wonder what his plan is Confused


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Zoe is getting quite drunk will reamains however shockingly sober

Zoe - You know i always thought you were cute

Will - Did you now?

Zoe since i first saw you? I knew...

Suddenly Will spins round the bottle in his hand and smacks Zoe across the head knocking her out cold


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Omg Eek Didn't expect that!!


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Their were three seconds inbetween Zoe Carpenter being hit with the bottle and her becoming unconcious. and in these three seconds as she fell to the floor she thought she was sure to die. She thought about Zac kissing her, she thought about Will slumped on the floor outside her room and she thought about herself. And Amongst the pain the confusion she felt stupid. Stupid for once again trusting Will when her head had told her she shouldn't.

As Zoe fell Will's mind was also racing. What would Zoe have said? Was it just the Wine talking? Was this an unnescesary action? But also how much time did he have to do what he planned. 5 minutes tops to have it ready or else the plan would fall to peices.

Will - sorry zo

unbeknown to either of the two in that three seconds she fell Zac ramsay was also having a thought of his own which he voiced.

Zac - about time we all got back then?


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Will was breathing rather heavily as he stared unthinkingly at The Lifeless form of Zoe. He was upset and more shocked then he had imagined he would be but he had no time for that now. He quickly went to the Kitchen and Pulled out a knife placing it in Zoe's left hand. He then smacked his own hand into the work surface wincing at the pain as he felt the bone bruise. Fighting through the pain he lifted Zoe's nails and began to scratch away at his arms torso and face he made sure he drew blood. What was the point in not leaving the marks.

Zac - No way should i have had that last pint guys

Jess - Oh shut up you daft scouse just open the door

Will heard the voices and froze. He had seconds left before they opened that door. He lifted Zoe's left arm and Pushed it straight into his stomach struggling to keep his screams inside him. He knew the knife would have narrowly missed any vital organs. He wasn't stupid he knew what he was doing. HE felt himself fall to the floor and as the door opened he lost consciousness just as Zoe began to regain her own.

Kriss - Oh shut up princess you don't know what you're talk... Oh my God...


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new fanfic to be honest i had exams and ignored this and so when i added to it it was no good


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I for one would love to see what happens!!!


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