This is my first hollyoaks fic sorry for any mistakes

Kieron was sitting in his house thinking about John Paul and about whether he should give up being a priest he loved JP but he also loved being a priest “ill think about what ill do tomorrow” Kieron thought before he turned out the light.

John Paul was sitting in his room withy his new boyfriend Jaime and they were kissing but JP only had one thing on his mind that was Kieron and he wished so badly that it was him he was kissing “wait I don’t love Kieron “ JP thought. JP broke the kiss. “What’s wrong” Jamie asked “it’s nothing ive just got a lot to think about” JP said “should I go?” Jamie asked “you don’t have too” JP said “I have to go anyway my mums expecting me back bye JP” Jamie said giving JP a quick kiss on the cheek “bye Jamie” John Paul said opening the door to let Jamie out and Jamie left and John Paul ran upstairs and grabbed a jacket and left the house.

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Name: Nikki Walker
Age: 17
Clothing Style: Rock Chick style but still a little girly also sporty


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Name: Nikki Walker
Age: 17
Clothing Style: Rock Chick style but still a little girly also sporty

yeah thanks for that info

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chapter 2 hope you like it thanks for the reviews

A girl was sitting in the dog she had long black hair with red streaks in and she was wearing a black trousers and a red top with a white bow on it she also had two suitcases with her and her mobile started to ring so she answered it “look Lee I’m not getting back together with you not after what you did” she said “look babe I didn’t mean to hit you” Lee said “you always say that I’m not falling for it this time don’t bother trying to find me bye Lee” and she hung up on him and she put her phone in her pocket and picked up her suitcases and walked out of the dog.

She bumped into someone. “Sorry” they both said then the guy looked at her “don’t I know you I swear you look familiar” the guy said “you do too did you go to Greenfield primary school” the girl asked “yeah I did” Michelle said then it clicked “Michelle Evans is that you”? The guy asked Michelle thought for a moment “John Paul McQueen I can’t believe this how are you”? Michelle said giving him a hug “how long has it been 8 years” John Paul said “yeah I think so” Michelle said “so why you here” John Paul asked “ive just transferred to HCC and im staying with my cousin Zak Ramsey maybe you know him” Michelle said “yeah I do want me to walk with you to halls” John Paul asked yeah that would be great Michelle said John Paul took one of her suitcases off her “so what’s changed in 8 years” she asked him “well im gay I fell for my best friend he left for Dublin and now ive fallen for a priest well he fell for me first and he broke his vow and I told him that in didn’t want to continue our relationship he’s left now he’s living with a guy called Niall. What about you”? John Paul asked "wow a lot has happened to you well ive just gotten out of a bad relationship and my parents died when I was 15" Michelle said im sorry John Paul said "its ok kinda ive gotten over it" Michelle said opening the door of the building and they walked up 2 plights of stairs and Michelle knocked on the door

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A man with blonde hair answered the door “hey John Paul who’s your friend” the man had an Irish accent “hey Kris this is Michelle she’s an old friend of mine” JP said “is Zak Ramsey in?” Michelle asked “yeah he is come in and I’ll go get him” Kris said "thanks" Michelle said

Kris knocked on Zak’s door “Zak there’s a girl called Michelle here to see you” Kris said and Zak came out of his room and walked to the seating area where JP and Michelle were “hey Michelle” Zak said giving her a hug “hey Zak” Michelle said “so how are you” Zak asked “I’m fine I’ve finally left Lee” Michelle said “that’s good at least you don’t have too put up with him anymore we should go out later to celebrate you being here” Zak said “ok JP Kris do you want to come” Michelle asked “can I invite my girlfriend Lorna” Kris asked “yeah” Zak said then a man walked though the door “hey Elliot want to come to the subar with us later about 8.00”? Kris asked “yeah ok” Elliot said and he went to his room.

lorna can you tell me abit about your character please.

name
age
hair colour
clothing style

Lorna Brown
im 17 really but 19 in fics
mid length brown
Normal, Jeans and a top

Thanks lorna heres chapter 4 please read and tell me what you think

Kieron woke up early and he had a wash and got dressed and he picked up his mobile and dialled a number “hey Nikki sorry if I woke you up” he said “well there had better be a good reason for this” Nikki said “can I see you” Kieron asked “yeah I’ll meet you at the usual place in 30 mins” Nikki said “thanks Nikki you’re the best” Kieron said and he hung up and setted off.

“Mum can I have a couple of quid for bus fair”? Nikki asked “your 17 you should be working at your age” her mum said “that’s why I need bus fare so I can go look for a job” Nikki said “here’s £5” her mum said handing her the money “thanks mum you’re the best” Nikki said putting on her pink converse and grabbing a jacket and she left the house. She walked to the bus stop and waited for the 32 bus 10 minutes later it came and she got on and asked for a day saver she took her ticket and change and walked to the back of the bus and sat down.

The bus was near her stop so she pressed the bell and waited for the bus to stop she got off and walked to the place which was a small coffee shop in hollyoaks she walked in and she saw Kieron and she sat down “hey Kieron what did you want to see me about?” Nikki asked “hey Nikki do you remember me telling you about me and John Paul and when we kissed” “yeah” Nikki said well after that I fell for him and we slept with each other and he thinks it was a mistake and it should have never happened but I still like him and I don’t know if I should give up being a priest just for him” Kieron said “I think you should see him he might feel the same way deep down come on were going” Nikki said getting up from her chair and Kieron got up too “lead the way Kieron” Nikki said

John Paul had left halls and he went home and went into his room and he put on his radio and lay on his bed and thought about Kieron.

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forgot to ask when u putting up the next part?

hey nikki the next part will be up soon and i hope ive written you ok

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u have written me brilliant!

I need some fic to cheer me up!