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well as much as i love the kress fanfics ive decided 2 write 1 about amy n leah. could u please comment on it and tell me 2 continue or not. its quite bad lol

*Amy is lieing on the floor, Sarah is holding the baby, Mike is next 2 amy, amy has just given birth*

Sarah: Its a girl, Amy its a girl
Amy: oh (she felt a slight smile start 2 appear on her face. she had 2 hide it, she couldnt have feelings for the baby)
Sarah: Oh amy come on. youve ot a beautiful baby girl. look (sarah shows amy her daughter she turns away)
Amy: no get it away please.
Sarah: why? shes yours
Amy: just leave it. i want nothing 2 do with her. she isnt mine.
Sarah: Amy, i know it hard but you'll get through it. we wil all help.
(at this moment Kathy came through the door)
Kathy: hello any1 here?
Amy: *wispering 2 sarah* now what do i do? shes gonna kill me.
Sarah: its ok Ams. it will b ok. honest
Amy: oh my god what am i gonna do?
*just then Kathy walks in2 the kitchen n freezes*
*mike explains everything he knows*
Kathy: no this aint true it cant b. what wil every1 think?
Amy: for gods sake stop thinkin about what every1 will think i dont care. let them think what they want.
Kathy: Amy how could u be so stupid?
Sarah: mum leave it
Kathy: no sarah i wont leave it. every1 is gonna blame me.
Amy: well mum every1 wont have 2 kjnow. im not keepin her.
Sarah: ( lookin shocked) what do u mean? u cant have her adopted amy. just think about it
Kathy: sarah shut up. its amys desicion.
*sarah turns n looks at amy then at the baby.
Kathy: how did this happen? whos the father?
Amy: mum. im sorry.
Kathy: tell me amy now (starting 2 shout)
Sarah: mum calm down.
Kathy: clam down? calm down? my 15 year old daughter has just birth in my kitchen n doesnt know who the father is.
Amy: yh i do.
*Just then the ambalence men came knocking at the door*
Mike: just leave it for now kathy. we will tlk about this later. We are in here.
*they take amy n the baby off in the ambalence*

TBC
do u want me 2 write more or not?
i know its rubbish but wat do u lot think?
 
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Yeah, write more please this is good x


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kk ill start writing in a min shud be bout 10-15 mins. i need more comments lol
 
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please write more!


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sorry my mind has totally died. cant cant think of anything 2 write. as soon as i think or something ill write some more.
 
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