i dont have any ideas sorry, unless whin/if jess wakes up she gets mad at her parents, im not good at writing, much prefer reading them
hope your writers block goes soon becaue i want to read more

i think ive got it now... ill try nd write some now, so it mite be up in a bout 30 mins hopefully!

cant wait

surely jen wudnt have changed much in appearance in the last 3 years since she was 12? Maybe they know who she is but didnt want her and block her out and didnt want her there incase jess didnt know. For all they knew she could have found jess and brought her to hospital cudnt she? maybe her parents dont want jess to know jen for some reason

i duno bwt u, but ive changed alot in the last 3 years lol

me too, i look nothing like i did when i was 15.

so we'll just say shes changed lol, but i like the bit bwt them not wanting her to know jess

ooooh hows the writing going do u still want ideas...

maybe her mum could here and they have an argument and jess wakes up,and her mum plays dum?maybe on the way out of the room her dad could come in and recognise her and then her mum and dad talk,and jess dies?i dunno,just some ideas-but dont let jess die,cuz then this fic'll have to end!!

ive finally got it!!! woop!! writers block has gone!!!! yay!! just writing now... will be up by 6!

yay cant wait x

as promised... everything will become clear in the chapter after this....

Chapter 14
Jen stood up her eyes stinging from crying so much, she wiped her tears. Her breathing was not calm, and she shuddered as the occasional tear fell. She turned towards the door, anger suddenly started to boil up inside her. She opened the door.

“Why?!” she demanded angrily, taking her parents by surprise.
“Excuse me?” Her dad said taken aback. “What are you talking about?”
“You know damn well what I’m talking about” she replied quietly.
“We don’t even know you” her mum piped in.
“Yes you do” Jen said coldly.

Her mum and her dad looked at each other, and looked at the floor.

“We know” her mum said.
“Why then, why did you do it?” Jen responded angrily, completely forgetting that she was in a hospital.
“We had to…” her mum began
“No, no you didn’t.”
“We had to put Benjy up for adoption, so we decided it would be best for you to go with him”
“What?” Jen interrupted her dad.
“We had to put Benjy up for adoption…”
“Why? Why did you put me and my brother up for adoption, give me one reason”
“He’s not your brother” her mum said quickly.
“What..?” Jen looked up, confused.
“He’s you nephew.” Said a voice

They all looked behind them, at the bed.

“Jess!” Jen exclaimed.
“He’s your nephew” she repeated, her eyes flickering slightly.

Jen looked at Jess, her mouth fell open.


hope this is ok...

wow!! what a twist. i need more im an addict now lol x

woop, my first addict!! lol, probs more after the hollyoaks show on e4... so 7.30 ish? is dat good?

yay! lol im not online till bout 8 but i will just have to catch up! xx

good twist keep it going

ooooooo,how good is this getting?!i am offically addicted!lol

really good cant wait to read more

ok, bit later than promised, ok alot later lol

Chapter 15
Jen looked at Jess, her eyes wide with disbelief.

“What?” she asked.
“He’s your nephew, not your brother.” Jess said again.
“But that would mean, he’s your…”
“Son” Jess finished her sentence. She nodded, and half smiled at the expression on Jen’s face.
“But… how?”
“When I was 16, I found out I was pregnant. The father was this guy that was friends with my best mate’s sister’s boyfriend. He was my age. He was quiet and he was just sitting in the corner, alone. He was different; I was immediately attracted to him. Anyway, when I found out, they agreed it was best for it to be adopted so I could go to college and get my degree.”
“So why was I put up for adoption too then?” Jen asked.
“That was mum’s idea…again.”
“We thought it would be best, so you could look after him.” Her mum added.
“Look after him? You got rid of me, to look after my nephew. I don’t get this.”

Jen looked at her parents to Jess. She shook her head slightly.

“Believe me Jen, I didn’t want you to go, I didn’t even want to get rid of Benjy.”

Jen nodded understandingly.

“Jennifer, we’re sorry, you have to understand it was best for…” her dad tried.
“For who? Not for me. Did you stop to think about how I would take this?” Jen responded angrily.
“We’re sorry” her mum began.
“Save it” Jen looked at Jess again.

“So who is the father” Jen quizzed
“I don’t kn…” Jess stopped, she looked up. She suddenly realised. “Oh my god”


hope this is good so far....

Omg sorry i missed a few chapters just caught up and its still really good cant wait for more!

is everyone still enjoying this...? i can do anuva one for tomorow... so expect anuva one by 12 tmoro

omg!!elliot??
sorry if it is and ive ruined it,its probably just my mind going into overtime!!
please write more!!i love this,i need to know what happens or tomorrow at work,ill be all out of it!!