all the students were on the sofa talking about what to do this weekend.

jess:why don't we all to blackpool.

kris:nah.i have a better idea.

zoe:what you talking about kris.

kris:just pack your bags now.

zak:why.

kris:JUST PACK YOUR BAGS!!

jess:why

kris:bags...pack...now.ok!

zakk then.

all the students go and pack.

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all the students are done packing.

zak,jess,zoe and elliotk we are done packing

jess:kris now wiil you tell us where we are going.

kris:no! its a surpirse.

kris:zoe where is the yellow pages i need to phone for something.

zoe:under the table.phone for something what do you mean?

kris:thanks.and me pnoneing for something is not of your bee's wax.

kris is flicking through the yellow pages and stops as he finds a van hire place.

kris starts to dial the number.

jess:kris what are you doing.

kris:shut up!

kris:hello i would like to hire a van please.

man:how long for sir.

kris:4 days please.

mank sir i will just ask you a few question.

krisk

man:what is your name

kris:kris fisher

mank kris.where do you live.

kris:hollyoaks village

mank.will you be picking up or do you want it deliverd.

kris:i think i will have it deliverd please.but can i have it deliverd today.

mank it will be deilverd today in about 1 hour.

krisk 1 hour.thanks.bye

mank bye.

zak:mate what are you planning

kris:nothing.

kris then goes off too his room.

Brill second part, I really want to know what he's planning.

15 minus later kris comes out of his room.

zoe;kris what was you doing in your for so long.

kris;i was phoneing my uncle colin to see if i could borrow something.

zak;what did you ask to borrow.

kris;something for the super dober holiday.

jess;how can it be super dober if we dont know what it is.

kris;you will find out so why it is a super dober holiday just be patience.

kris;any way i am away to the shops to get some suppilesfor the holiday.

zak;ok

15 minus later kris returns.

kris;ok i'am back

jess;omg did you shop for a year.

kris;ha ha you are sooooo funny. not!

zoe;portable bbq why have you got this.

kris;you will so find out.

5 minus later there was a knock at the door.kris got up and anwser the door and was in for the shock of his life.when he saw who it was.

ooh i wonder who's at the door!

who is it write more soon

this is well good
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kris was still at the door.trying to figure it out why was he here and why.

man:hello kris long time no see.

kris:m..ma.mark come in

mark:hello everybody

jess:MARK![jess runs up to marks
and hugs him very tigthly]

mark:nice to see you as well.you miss me then.

before jess could say something kris said something.

kris:so what you doing here mark.

mark:i want to ask jess something.

jess:what is it mark?

mark:will you go back out with me.

kris quickly put the magizane down and look and jess.

jess:yes!i will go back out with you.

kris look upset and zoe could see that.

25 minus later the van had arrived

kris: ok is everybody ready

everybody:yes!!

kris: ok

so everbody got in the van and drove off.

OMG!
JESS YOU STUPID GIRL! YOU WANT TO BE WITH KRIS! KRIS I SAY!
this is sooo good
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half way thought the journey the radio was on and everybody was singing.

jess:why is a tent here?

kris:because we are going camping.

zak:yes i love camping.oh and will there be fit birds there.

zoe playfully hits zak on the arm.

3 minus later the man on the radio is speaking.

mank we have a suprise for a miss jessica harris.

man:this is for you jessica. and this is from mark smith

song on radio the click five just the girl.

everybody is singing
Cause she's bittersweet,
she knocks me off of my feet.
And I can't help myself,
i don't want anyone else.
She's a mystery.
She's too much for me.
But I keep comin' back for more.
She's just the girl I'm lookin' for.

She can't keep a secret
for more than an hour.
She runs on 100 proof attitude power.
And the more she ignores me,
the more I adore her,
What can I do?
I'd do anything for her,

after the song has finised there is awaked silecnce.
'

NO!
poor kris
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1 hour and a half later there at the camp site.

zoe:where are we kris.

kris:we are at findhorn.i will be back in a minute i am just going to pay.

kris get's out off the van and walks to the reception.

woman:hello can i help you sir?

kris:yea i would like to stay here for 3 days

woman: ok sir. what is your name?

kris: kris fisher

woman: ok kris that will be £65

kris: ok £65 here you go.thanks.bye

woman:thanks.bye

kris walks back to the van and gets back in it an drives to the camp site.

kris:this is it.

kris finds a spot and stops the van and everybody gets out.

mark and zak gets the tent out and starts puting it up.

jess and zoe get the sunbeds and start sunbathing.

kris:i'am way down to the beach i will be back so.

zoe:wait kris i will come with you.

so kris and zoe start to walk down to the beach.

i feel sorry for kris for having to put up with mark and jess
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this is excellent

this is an original idea i havent read anything like this before its fabby!!

cant wait to read more
beckie x

kris and zoe are at the beach talking about mark and jess.

zoe:so

kris:so what?

zoe:so you and jess.

kris:well there is it going to be me and jess anymore because mark's back on the scene.

zoe:but

kris:no buts zoe i'am going back to the camp site.

kris walks back to the camp site.

later that night about 9.00.everybody is chatting about random stuff because they cant go out side because it is rain very heavyly.

mark and jess are talking about how they meant and how they fall in love at first sight

mark:i knew staright away me and jess were meant to be together.

kris:shut the f**k up would you.i dont care about you and your stupid reatship ok.

kris walks out off the tent and mark chases after him.

mark: what did you say.

kris:you heard.

kris stops and mark walks up to kris and punches kris.



more later.

OoO fabby
How dare he punch Kris lol

ooh brill! dont like mark lol

jess:what the hell did you do that for.

mark:he deserved it.


kris ran at mark and pushed him to the ground.and starts punching him.

jess and zoe were screaming so loundly that everybody came out of their tents and caravans.

elliot:zak do something now!!

zak:you get mark and ill kris ok.

elliot:ummmm...ok

zak and elliot ran at kris and mark and pull them off each other.

elliot pulls mark off kris,and they stumble to stay up.mark runs at elliot and ties to punch him but

elliot dodges him and punches him.

elliot:you dont deserve jess.

jess runs to mark and zoe runs to kris.

zoe:are you ok kris.

kris:yea

all the students go back into thae tent and get clened up.

all the student are in the tent getting cleaned
up.

kris: oww

zoe:sorry

zoe:there you go all cleaned up.

kris:cheers. i think i will sleep i the van tonight.

zoe:why you did nothing wrong

kris:i know but just on the safe side.

mark: ok then bye bye

jess:MARK!!

kris leaves to go to the van.

more later.sorry i was short.

grrrr Elliot's right, Mark doesn't deserve Jess but Kris DOES!!
ok can't wait for more

wow this is still fabby !! xxx

fabby

at 11.00pm everyone was in there bed expect for 2 people.

jess got up and went to see kris.
jess knock on the van door just to see if kris was a wake.

jess:can i come in.

kris:no!

jess:come on kris let me in.

kris:fine

so jess jump into the van and sat opposite kris.

kris:what do you want.

jess:to talk.

kris:fine talk.

jess:look kris,i'm really really sorry.

kris:yea sure you are.

jess:just for get it.i'm going to bed.

so kris and jess went to sleep.