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Newt and Eli are in Newt's room, Newt seems quite upset and angry at Eli because he realises how he has upset Jack and messed up his finances and everything. Newt is being very quite but Eli keeps pestering him. Eli is lying on the bed and Newt is sat on a chair.

Eli: Newt, come on! You know that these people here are messed up, they aren't like us! They deserve what they get!

Newt: Shut up, you know Jack doesn't deserve this and Steph needed those photos.

Eli: Newt, they all get what they deserve, they are paying for their sins. That Steph, she embodies vanity, that's a sin and Jack, you can't trust Jack, he has had you in pieces over whether or not he's going to send you back to the home!

Newt: Yeah but things can get sorted out without you having to do stuff like that to them.

Eli: *laughing* Newtos! Newtos! Newtos! What do you mean me! It's all you doing this! Not me!

*Jack walks past Newt's room and hears talking and seems to think something suspicious is going on, he leans with his ear again's the door*

Newt: What do you mean it is all me! It isn't all me! It's you that messed up Steph's stuff, it's you that wrecked the basement and had all the barrels leak! You made me do it!

*Jack looks worried and angry and decides to break his silence knocking on Newt's door*

Jack: Newt! Can you open your door please, I just need a chat about something!

*Newt jumps up as Eli hides under his bed, Newt then unlocks his door and Jack rushes in*

Jack: Who were you talking to Newt!

Newt: No one!

Jack: Newt you were talking to someone I heard you!

Newt: Oh no! I was singing to myself.

Jack: Newt, I heard you! You said it wasn't you who messed up Steph's photos and it also wasn't you who messed up the basement, who was it Newt!? Who was it!?

Newt: I'm sorry! It was me!

Jack: No Newt! I know it wasn't you! And whoever it was has messed things up for all of us Newt! Tell me who it is! I know it's someone called Eli! I heard you Newt!

*Newt gets upset as Jack begins frantically looking around and looks at Newt's bed, Newt looks at him and runs infront of the bed as Jack begins walking over to it*

Newt: Okay, okay! I'm sorry Jack!

*Newt lifts up the sheets and tells Eli to come out, Eli rolls out from under the bed and stands up infront of Jack*

Newt: I'm sorry Jack, this is Eli.

*The camera changes from Newt's point of view to Jack's, Eli is not there but Newt seems to be looking at thin air and communicating with no one*

Jack: Newt! I've had enough of this! Where is Eli!

Newt: What!? He's right there infront of you!

*The point of view goes back to Newt*

Eli: *laughing* What is wrong with him!? He can't see me!? Is he blind or something?

*Newt turns to Eli*

Newt: Shut up Eli! We're already...

*The point of view returns to Jack and Newt is stood infront of him looking into this air*

Newt: ...in enough trouble because of you!

The show ends splitting between Jack's and Newt's point of view with Newt looking at Eli and Eli being there, then Newt looking at Jack and Jack looking at where Newt looked at and Eli isn't there. Then Jack looks back at Newt and Newt looks upset and looking at Eli telling him to shut up and the camera gives and extreme cose up of Jack's eyes as he looks very worried and shocked!
The credits come on
 
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i like this you should write more
 
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more more more more more

pleeease don't magically die like all the other Newt writers seem to have done!


Eli's not gonna get you, Newt is.

RaiiiBabes' {If we only knew, Newt and Lauren} - REALLY GOOD SCRIPT!!
 
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why do they always stop. am i a curse or something??


Eli's not gonna get you, Newt is.

RaiiiBabes' {If we only knew, Newt and Lauren} - REALLY GOOD SCRIPT!!
 
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The opening credits finish.
A sequence is shown of Newt waking up. Music is How To Be Dead by Snow Patrol.

"Please don't go crazy if I tell you the truth" Newt rolls over in bed. "You don't listen to me while I talk to the wall" Newt lifts up the bedsheet and looks under but there is no one there. "Why can't you shoulder the blame 'cause both my shoulders are heavy from the weight of us both" Newt looks worried and jumps out of bed looking around his room. "Dr. Jekyll is wrestling Hyde for my pride" Eli walks into his room and he looks relived.

Newt is sat downstairs eating his breakfast and Jack and Frankie are whispering to each other.

Jack: I think that we should take him to a psychiatrist.

Frankie: But he might just be going through a phase Jack.

Jack: Frankie, he isn't a little kid, this Eli is not the kind of imaginary friend you have when you are about three or four.

Eli walks in the room.

Newt: Alright Eli!

Eli: Hey Newtos! These guys still mad at me for staying around?

Newt: Shhh! Leave it Eli!

Newt looks over to Jack and Frankie.

Newt: Sorry, he doesn't mean that.

Jack and Frankie are already looking over at Newt with worried expressions but try to hide it as he looks over.

Jack: Oh it's okay Newt, but Frankie and me need a chat with you later.

Newt: With both of us?

Frankie: Well Eli can be there if he wants to.

Jack: Yeah if it'll help Eli can be there too.

Newt gets up.

Newt: Okay, thanks guys! Come on Eli.

Eli follows Newt out.

Newt: See I told you it'll be alright.

Eli: Yeah but listen, why are they being so nice about it, they know we smashed up the cellar!

Newt: Shh not now Eli.

Newt looks back and apologises as the point of view changes and shows Newt walking out of the door turning to his side and talking to thin air as Frankie and Jack look on concerned.
 
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Oh and thanks for the feedback! Really appreciate it! Smile I'll try posting more again soon but I dunno how often I'll be able to post but I'll definetly try to keep it up. Might even start one on Rhys and Beth and how I would have written it. Thanks.
 
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wooooooooooo


Eli's not gonna get you, Newt is.

RaiiiBabes' {If we only knew, Newt and Lauren} - REALLY GOOD SCRIPT!!
 
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brillant update please update soon
 
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This is really good!
Hope you do more soon!


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