This is my New Fanfic. Plz tell me wat you think. It is probably rubbish lol. Plz comment
*Kris n Jess are lying in Jess’ bed* A few months ago Kris n Jess had finally decided to make a go of things. They had known for ages that they liked each other. Just too scared of being hurt.
*Kris looked down at Jess. She was fast asleep in his arms. He loved moments like this. He couldn’t imagine ever being happier. He had the girl of his dreams in his arms n a beautiful baby on the way. Unfortunately it hadn’t all been plain sailing. He thought back to that day
*flashback* Jess n Zoe were in Zoe’s room talking. ‘ right then Jess its now or never’ ‘ But zo wat if it comes out positive? Zoe im not redi to b a mum. Kris isn’t redi to be a dad. He’ll probably leave me n neva look back. He’ll hate me. We haven’t been going out for long n alredi ive done this. ‘ Jess we’ll sort it out if it comes to that. If Kris reli likes you then he’ll stick around. If he doesn’t then its his loss.’ Zoe smiled at jess. ‘Now get in2 that bathroom n take the test.’ Jess got up n went to the door. As she got to the door she froze. Milions of thoughts running through her mind. Wat if its positive? Wat if he hates me. Wat if I don’t want to be a mum? Too many wat if’s were running through her mind. She turned round n looked at Zoe ‘ jess! Go. Now.’ Zoe stood up n pointed to the door. Inside she was almost as scared as jess was. She hated seeing her best friend like this. She hated seeing her throwing up in the morning. She hated seeing her so worried. There was so many stuff she hated. But she couldn’t imagine wat was goin through jess’s head at that precise moment. Jess finally opened the door n walked in2 the bathroom. It was only jess n Zoe in the flat. Kris n will were at lectures n Zac was at the Su as usual. They wud be out all day so they knew they wud have time to sort all this out. Jess sat on the floor n took out the test. She read the instructions carefully over n over again. She followed them carefully n looked down at the test. Fear suddenly filed her eyes. She hated waiting. She had always been bad at waiting. But this time she seemed to be waiting for wat seemed like hours. Infact it was only a matter of minutes. The results she was gonna be given in a few minutes could determine the rest of her life. She looked down at the test. Yup her thoughts were right. ‘ Zoe,’ she yelled at the top of her voice. TBC
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Zoe suddenly jumped up. Shed been thinking bout wat they were gonna do if it was positive. She run in2 the bathroom. She looked down n saw a shaking jess. She quickly ran over n hugged her. ‘ everythings gonna be alright, jess shhh calm down its gonna be fine’ ‘ Zoe how can you say that? Im pregnant. Im gonna be a mum. Wat am I gonna say? Mayb he doesn’t have to know. Yh that’s it. I wont tell him. Ill get rid of the baby. ‘ Jess, no you cant get rid of it. No you just cant. You know how you feel bout abortions. Kris will understand. Hes gonna be a dad ‘ Zoe I used to slag ppl off n everything when I heard bout abortions. But now its happened to me its all I can think of that I can do. I cant tell him. He’ll leave me. I cant go through a pregnancy on my own.’ At this point jess was crying n shaking a lot. ‘ luk, jess, calm down. No stress. It’ll harm the baby.’ ‘ Zoe there isn’t gonna be a baby. Im having an abortion n that’s final. Ill ring up the surgery in a bit. Once I sort myself out a bit. Can I have some time to myself plz. I need some time to think.’ ‘Jess no you cant have an abortion. Jess ill leave you but promise me ull think about it b4 you jump to anything. Ill be here for you no matter wat Kris dose. Jess ull never be alone. Not with me still here. I’ll just be in my rom if you need me.’ At this point Zoe grabbed hold of Jess even harder tryin to keep back her tears. ‘kk. Im gonna go n have a think. Zoe my whole life depends on this decision.’ N with that jess got up n went to her room. She shut the door behind her n slid down it. Talking quietly n herself. ‘wat am I gonna do? O sum1 plz help me.’
oh no. it might take me a bit longer than expected as the dreaded writers block has taken over alredi its not too bad though so im still carrying on lol
It had now been 15 minutes since jess had found out she was pregnant. Zoe was in her room thinking. All she could think about was how jess was gonna get through this. Deep inside she knew that jess would love a child. But as jess had told her many times- she had to get her life sorted out first. But jess wouldn’t go through with an abortion, would she? No, she was just shocked she wouldn’t, she couldn’t. it wouldn’t be fair. Zoe just sat there staring out of her window. Jess had now removed herself from the floor n on2 her bed. She started to rub her stomach. ‘ Wow theres a little Jess or kris inside of me.’ Jess slightly smiled to herself. This was the 1st time shed smiled in ages. Shed been worried for days about wat was rong wiv her n now she knew. She was having a baby. She was gonna be a mum. ‘I’m sorry little 1. I’m so sorry. I cant have a baby. I cant be a mum. Im too young. I have my career to luk after. I cant tell your daddy bout u. mayb we shud keep it a secret for a while. I cant have an abortion it wouldn’t be fair.’ At this moment jess heard a door open. She got off her bed n looked out of her door. Phew. She thought it might have been one of the others come bk early. But no it was only Zoe. ‘ Zo,’ Jess said quietly. Her eyes were red n puffy n she was still shaking quite a bit. ‘Zo’ This made zoe jump around. Shed been thinking n wasn’t reli payin much attention ‘God jess you scared me there.’ They both smiled. ‘Hey was that a little smile from you I just saw? ‘ Zo ive decided that I cant get rid of this little 1’ she said lookin down at her stomach. ‘O jess that’s brilliant. Kris is gonna be exstatic.’ ‘ yh about kris. I’m not gonna tell him for a while. Zoe promise me that you wont tell him. I need to tell him when I’m ready. Zoe plz promise me.’ Zoe looked down at her feet. ‘ok, I promise I wont tell him. But Jess you need to tell him soon. He has the right to know. Hes gonna be a dad.’ ‘Yh I know Jess, I’m gonna tell him when I get my head round all of this myself ok? ‘Ok, as long as your sure.’ Zoe said smiling.’ You want a cupa?’ ‘I’d love 1. I’m just gonna go n sort out ma face, I look awful. Zoe smiled n went off to make the tea whilst jess went off 2wards the bathroom. TBC- sorry its not very gurd but I had a little bit of writers block. Tell me wat you think
thanks 4 all your coments n thanks sprong but i cant help it lol. im off 4 ma t now n im gonn ahave a little rest. there shud be 1 or more sections up in a little while xxx
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its not too bad though so im still carrying on lol