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i have been wanting to do one for ages so here is my Kris and Jess fanfic and because i cant be bothered to write Kris and Jess each time it will be K and J!


In K's room, J and K asleep.
J wakes up and notice the time 7:30 am.
J gently pecks K's cheek and whispers: I've got to go get a shower!
With that K grunts, this makes J give off a silent giggle and she climbs out of bed, naked and picks up her dressing gown off the floor and wraps it round her self. she tip toes to her bedroom.

In the kitchen. Zoe (Zo), Zak (Za) and K are there drinking tea and eating toast when J walks out of her room wearing a short mini skirt and a blouse which is tight round the bust.

J: Mornin'
Zo: Mornin', I like your skirt is it new?
J: Yeh, thanks. Is there any...
K: Well it would look better on a cow!
Za: Oi! Before you two start please just don't me 'ead is bangin'!
J: Well i didn't start it !
K: Yes you did!
J: No i didn't you u mad the first remark.
K: Well i wouldn't of made that remark if you didn't buy such hidioust clothing!

With that Jess stormed out off the flat. Zo and Za glared at K disapprovingly.



What do you think?
Should I continue?
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Yer u shud continue! it's good! x



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With that K snapped back: What? It is hideous!


He stormed to his room and slammed his door.

Zo: Those two i cant make them out. one minit J is telling me she really likes him, the next she is trying to kill him!
Za: Yeh i know what you mean! K is exactly the same.
Zo: Any how i am off to lectures. Bye.
Za: Wait up i will walk with you.
Zo and Za walked out the the door.

K's room. K is writing a text message saying

Miss Harris your powers amaze me!
I had fun last night!
Kris
xx


He flipped his phone down and walked out of the flat to his lecture.


Not as good as last time i don't think!
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Brill!!
Are you doing anymore tonight?


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Walking through the doors of the SU Bar J took out her phone, turned it on and read the text massage from K, she gave a cheeky grin. Her reply to the text message was:

Why hello Mr Fisher
Dont worry no offense taken lol
Sorry i left so early this morning,
I remembered Zo said she was going to be up early,
and i thought i dont want our cover to be blown.
After all the sex if pretty good and the guy is...
...ok.
Will be back at th flat in 20 minits!
J
xx



Walking into the flat K's phone beeped and as he read it a big smile came to his face. He loved the text's J send they were always so forgiving even though he meant nothing he says in front of everyone else.

10 minits later Kris is sat on the sofa reading a magazine, as J walks trough the door.
He turns around and immediatly there is a smile on both of there faces.
AS J is walking up to K

J: Well you better get this hidioust skirt off me!
K: Thought you would never ask.
He pushed her up against the wall and kissed her so passionately, just like he did the first time he kissed her even though he had her. He never wanted to let go of her or loose her!
J quickly replied by wrapping her legs around his body and he carried her passionately to his room and they made love like they did the first night!


Should i sill continue?
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do more plzz its reli gd
 
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Thanks for the comments!
Please do comment though, it makes me feel like i should continue!

In K's room jess is resting her head on K's chest while he plays with her hair.
K: So i am just ok am i?
J: No, your amazing!
K: Thank you, i was starting to feel unwanted and that you only wanted me for the sex!
J: Of course not! Don't forget the clothes and the hurling of abuse.

Now looking directly into each others eyes whilst leaning on there side.

K: Come on J, you know it makes these times for fun though.
J: Yeh i do, but sometimes when i am with Zo, i just feels as if i am keeping a big secret from my
best friend, and i don't like it!
K: J do you want to tell them?
J: Yes but not like that.
K: I don't get you.

K is kissing J's neck.

J: I want them to find out, instead of us having to tell them.
K: You mean you want to reek havoc till they get suspicious and sneak around.
J: Yeh! Exactly!

J is kissing him passionately on the lips.

K: Well Miss Harris your wish is my command i know Zo is going to be back in 10 minits so we could
be nice to each other till she gets really suspicious.
J: Great, on one condition.
K: And whats thats?
J: I can hurl the occasional insult and you have to be nice and not say anything back!
K: Thats is going to be hard but i guess i can try!
J: Thank you,

J starts to climb out of bed.

J: But i have to get dressed.
K: No you don't missy.

K Pulls J back into bed and they do there thing.


Is it still good?
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i tink its very good and you so should carry on


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wheres the next bit I was just getting into that you have to carry on you cant leave us in suspense like this.


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very good carry on Moon
 
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As Zo walked through the front door of the flat, jess walked out of K's room fully clothed wearing one of K's skirt. Walking into the kitchen Zo saw her.

Zo: Hey J
J: Hey, good lecture?
Zo: Boring as all the others, isn't that one of K's skirts?
J: Oh yeh! We decided to settle our difference for you guys.
Zo: Yeh bet you did!
J: Oi! Whats that supposed to mean?

K walks through to the kitchen smiling happily.

K: Whats what suppose to mean?
Zo: That you two have settled your differences for us.
K: Well actually Zo i only promised to be nice so i could give her some decent fashion advice! After all if i have to been seen with her i can't having her looking a tramp. It will spoil my good looks!
J: You are so vain.
K: You love me really!

K sticks his tounge out at her.

K: Any way i have to go meet Za in the SU, you two coming?
J and Zo: Yeh sure.
They all walk off to the SU.

Any good?
Shall i continue?
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very very very good i love this story


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very good carry on plz
 
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pls carry on this is the first one that i read when i came on here and u should continue


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Thanks for all the comments, this is just a short one before i go and do my horses.

Zo is writing a text message to Za saying:
Hey Za
J and K are coming as well to the SU.
Lets try and leave them alone they are been nice
(well in there way)
to each other!
So you never know what might happen! Big Grin
Zo

They all arrive at the SU Bar, Za has got them all drinks and is sitting down Za nods to Zo.

Za: Zo gave of pool
Zo: Yeh sure! Are you two sure you want kill each other.
K: Zo i wouldn't even waste my time trying to kill her!

Zo and Za walk of together.

J and K are sat opposite each other, J has her legs resting on the side of K's chair and K is rubbing his hands along them. They think Za and Zo can't see this!

Any good?
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this is good so u will have to keep writing


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this is reli gud continue please
 
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continue plz

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Thanks for all the comments.
I will do more tonight!
 
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OO Pleeasae write some moree x


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plz rite more im addcited


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plz write more i read it earlier and have been looking for it for ages cus i couldn't remember what it was called


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ur online r u writing more?


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Ok i thought know one would think it is good however
lol

Here you go::::

Za and Zo are playing pool when Za glances over to the table were J and K are been all "nice".

Za: Zo,Zo!
Zo: What?!

Za points to K and J.

Za: See i knew they were up to something!
Zo: No you didn't!
Za: Well i didn't but this i these two you have to be suspicious.
Zo: Awwwww! They look so in love.
Za: Yeh! I know. How about we don't tell them we know we just have a bit of fun!
Zo: Good thinking batman!

Back over to J and K, they are still been all romantic when Zo and Za come over.


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Please carry on
This rocks


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