lmao. Forgot Jake and Nancy were even in this story! xD Also, are you still reading my fic? You haven't commented in ages! Unless you commented today and I haven't seen it...

lol! Most characters are in it if you go back far enough. I was trying to do a bit on everyone, but I sort of got distracted by some of the storylines over others.
And I am still reading your fic! Sorry, I don't always comment when I read it but I will now. It's one of my favourites!

Lol. I just looked through it all and you haven't done anymore with Zoe, Darren, Jess and Amy for ages! haha!

Yeah, sorry about that. I just did what seemed to be the most popular ones.
I'll catch up on the others sometime. Maybe...
Are there any others you want me to include?

Amy opened the door to find her sister standing outside.
Amy: Sarah!
She hugged her.
Amy: You never said you were coming!
Sarah: I wanted to surprise you.
She held up an armful of wedding magazines.
Sarah: Can I come in?

Craig paced up and down, up and down.
What could he do?
Who could he chose?
John-Paul or Sarah?

The two sisters giggled as they flicked through the magazines, exclaiming over the beautiful dresses.
Sarah: I'm going to wear white, obviously, and I was thinking pink for the bridesmaids? You'll be one, of course.
Amy grinned. She still couldn't believe her sister was getting married, but she was obviously happy so Amy was happy for her. And it would be fun to be a bridesmaid.
Amy: Who else is?
Sarah: Nancy and Hannah, if they can. I haven't asked them yet.
The grin on her face was so big, it seemed to stretch from one ear to the other.
Sarah: Oh Amy, I'm so happy! I can't believe this is happening, it's just so perfect. It's all so perfect!

Meanwhile, Craig was still struggling to come to a decision.
He loved both of them so much. Too much. He couldn't lose either, but he couldn't keep them both.
It was tearing him apart...

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Lol. I dont care who you write about, its all goood!

More soon? x

Good, I'm glad you like them all!

Nancy's eyes slowly flickered open. She smiled to herself. The sun was shining, the birds were singing, the man she loved lay beside her-
Or not.
Where was Jake?
She pulled herself up out of bed, and stumbled through into the kitchen.
Nancy: Jake?
She peered around the room. The flat was empty and eerily quiet. Empty. No-one here. Charlie!
She ran towards his cot, pulling back the covers and shouting his name.
Nancy: Charlie! Charlie, where are you?!
A hand fell on her shoulder, and she spun round, mouth open and-
Jake: Shh, Nancy. What are you yelling about?
Nancy: Charlie. Where's Charlie?
Jake: Here.
He held up the baby.
Jake: I took him out for some air. Are you alright, Nancy? You look really pale.
Nancy: Yeah...yeah, I'm fine. I'll just...
She wandered slowly towards her bedroom, checking back over her shoulder as she went.
Jake grinned to himself. She was confusion. Confusion made her vulnerable. Just how he wanted her...

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Really good, please continue

Can't wait for more!

even in aother reality Jake is still evil lol!
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lol, he is!
I'll do some more Steph/Max OB/Summer, haven't done that in a while.

Steph: Summer...
She turned round to face her.
Steph: I just wanted to say...well, I'm sorry about what happened.
Summer: You're sorry you got the part?
Steph: Well no, obviously not...
Summer: Then what are you sorry for?
Steph rolled her eyes. She had told Max this was a bed idea.
Steph: You know...
Summer: I don't, actually. You got the part, you're going to London, you're going to be famous. What have you got to be sorry for?
Steph sighed. She was right.
Everything was perfect.
What was there to be sorry for?

Brilliant x

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Brilliant x

ditto

fabulous
post soon

Really good. please post more soon. Can you do some Rhys/Beth please.

Thanks everyone!!!
Gonna do some Rhys/Beth now, for hollyoaksmad2.
Hope you like it!

Mercedes leaned closer to him with every word, her perfectly red lips moving slowly, her hands snaking towards him and...
"Stop it!" Rhys pulled away from her.
"What, don't you like it?" She smiled at him, those lips looking so inviting and-
"No!" She sat back, looking disappointed.
"I thought-"
"-Well, you thought wrong. I've got a girlfriend."
"Oh yeah." Her lip curled with distaste. "Your cousin."
"Have you got a problem with that?"
"It's sick." Rhys shook his head.
"Just leave me alone, Mercedes."

Beth sat on her bed- their bed- and thought about Rhys. She stroked the pillow that his head lay on every night, hugged the duvet that covered him. She lay on her back and gazed at the walls he had woken to every morning.
She couldn't stop the smile from lighting up her face.
She was in love.
And so what if he was her cousin? It was legal, so why shouldn't they?

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Thankyou for writing about Rhys and Beth. It was really good.

Brilliant x

Thanks!!!

John-Paul arrived on Craig's doorstep that night.
Craig: John-Paul. I wasn't expecting-
He cut straight to it.
John-Paul: Have you decided yet?
Craig silently shook his head.
John-Paul: Well, hurry up then.
Craig: Why do I have to decide? We're happy, aren't we?
John-Paul: You and Sarah might be, but I'm not! She gets the flat, the engagement ring, the baby and everyone knows! But I'm fed up of just being your bit on the side, Craig. I want to be the one who goes to sleep beside you every night. I want to be the one you love. The only one.
Craig closed his eyes. This was a nightmare. A complete disaster...
John-Paul: So I'm going to come in with you now, and either you tell Sarah about us, right now, or I'm going to leave tonight, and never come back.
He let that sink in.
John-Paul: You have to decide, Craig. Who do you want to spend the rest of your life with?


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love it!!

more soon please!

That was really really good!!
Please do more soon! x