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It was an ordinary day in hollyoaks. All was quiet, that was until a loud bang happend...

Some cheeses had attacked the village, but these were no ordinary cheeses. They were killer cheese.

Everyone started to scream as the cheese started killing people one by one, Justin was first, off came his arm, then gradually the resr of his body. All was chaotic. There was people running and screaming everywhere.

"Now is the time for the cheese, for many years you have eaten my soldiers but now i am going to eat you." said the cheese leader.


Shall i continue?
 
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Lmao Lissi! You should definitely continue!
 
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lmao
go lissy!
continue with BOB MARLEY!
lol
 
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Really are you sure?
 
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Yes Lissi, it's fab!
 
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CONTINUE!
Angel
 
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Okay seeing as two of you want me too.

The cheese started to attack again. This time it was Jess, she hadnt noticed them attacking because she was too busy worrying about her hair. The cheese took a massive bite from her arm and she screamed in agony.

It was at this moment in time that she realised she was going to die, she started to ramble about what she was gonna do, who was gonna get her clothes? The list could go on forever.

Sudenly Bob Marley started to play and the cheese stoped. They just stood there and screamed.
 
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lol
GO BOB MARLEY!
hehe
continue soon
 
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I shall continue when i have some more ideas.
 
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ok
lol
 
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You got any ideas how i could continue it?
 
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flying monkeys eating the cheeses
lol
 
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Wow that could work.
 
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i know
lol
 
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lol i'll write the next bit now.
 
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Bob Marley was there only weakness. So the village all got there Bob Marley CD' out and blasted them. The soldiers were the first to go they exploded and cheese went everywhere.

"You can't kill me that easily!" said the only cheese left - the leader.

Just as the cheese was saying this a purple flying monkey flew down and started to eat him.
 
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hehe
lol
 
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Any more ideas?
 
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i dunno anymore
 
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Me neither. lets just say that was the end. lol
 
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great fic
lmao
 
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Wow, this is a great fic Lissi!
 
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<Lissyyy™ In Wonderland>
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Laugh
 
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Mareeya

It's a thief in the night, to come and grab you, it can creep up inside you, and consume you, a disease of the mind, it can control you, it's too close for comfort ...
 
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woooooooooooooooo more!


Eli's not gonna get you, Newt is.

RaiiiBabes' {If we only knew, Newt and Lauren} - REALLY GOOD SCRIPT!!
 
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