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Yes i'm back! It's me the louise and warren fanatic! i decided to start another fic since i haven't done one in well urm ages! This is about when warren proposes to louise.

The sound of an alarm clock woke louise and warren. Louise put the pink, egg shaped alarm clock on snooze. Warren and louise looked over at each other clutching one an others hand.
'we're getting married!' louise smiled.
Warren smiled back.
'yes we are' he whispered.
Warren stroked Louises hair back.
'I love you' he whispered gentely.
'I love you too' replied louise.
Louise looked over at the time. She jumped out of bed while taking the quilts awawy from warren.
'get up lazy bones' she giggled.
'my loving careing future wife' warren said sarcastically.
'so i guess i'm going to have to make the breakfest then?' said louise.
Warren kissed her on the cheek.
'that kiss meant yes and thank you' said warren shutting the door to the bathroom.
'such a gentelman' mutterd louise
Louise walked into the kitchen preparing some Bacon and toast.
Yes today was going to be good.


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Will remeber mel and sophie always
Warren and louise forever!

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It's the way you make me feel - Louise and Warren

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thsi sounds really good so far. keep going


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Louise looked down at her engagment ring, it glimmered in the light. Warren stepped out of the bedroom wearing his average leather jacket and a pair of jeans. Louise turned round.
'Here you go' she said handing the plate over to warren.
'thank you' replied warren.
'wheres katy?' asked louise.
'I dunno proberly shopping like you ladies do' grinned warren.
'I want to tell someone the news!' cheered louise.
Warren looked up at her.
'i'm going to get changed' Louise hopped into the bedroom and with in 5 minutes she came out again. She began burshing her hair constantley checking the time.
'whats the rush?' asked warren.
'Carmels proberly waiting for me outside of Evissa' said louise.
'Why don't you sell that place i mean we already own the loft' said warren. Louise kissed him on the forhead.
'i just couldn't' answered louise.
'i got to go' She ran out of the flat and down to evissa. There stood Carmel patientley waiting.


hollyoaks obsessed
'Life is like a peach'
Will remeber mel and sophie always
Warren and louise forever!

number 4 of the louise and warren club!creater of 'the sausage and the sausage returns' lol!
*****
Don't get on my bad
side I'M a nasty person,
i just love every creature alive!
 
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It's the way you make me feel - Louise and Warren

Without my friends I wouldn't find a reason to live my life the way I do
 
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really good Big Grin


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Thanks for the comments.

Warren locked the flat door and made his way over to the loft.
He sat back in his office on his laptop. Warren began scanning the newspaper headlines.
'Missing Man Found Dead' was the headline that warren had been looking for. The door opened warren jumped up while turning off the laptop. It was only Justin.
'what do you want?' ask Warren.
'Warren i can't take it anymore, it's too much. People are going to be questioning me about Sean!' groaned Justin.
'Well then you lie, nothing happened that night' said warren.
'but warren...' replied Justin.
'All we done was sit at home watching DVDs ok?' said warren.
'ok' said Justin.

Over at Evissa.

'Carmel, can you take over for a few minutes?' asked louise.
'yeah sure why?' replied Carmel.
'i'm just gonna go to mobs get a drink, do you want one?' Questioned louise.
'nah i'm fine thanks'
Louise threw the front door keys over to Carmel.
Max and O.B where serving drinks behind the bar.
'Louise hows it going?' asked o.b
'great i actually have some news!' smiled louise bursting to tell someone she was engaged.
'i'm all ears' replied o.b
'i'm getting married!' grinned louise.
O.b wasn't too fond on warren because of what he did to max but then again they wern't enemeys. So all he done was smile and knodd.
'good for you, so what drink do you want then?' asked o.b
'erm an orange juice please' Louise exchanged the cash of drinks. She walked back to evissa unaware that sasha had been listening into her conversation with O.B


hollyoaks obsessed
'Life is like a peach'
Will remeber mel and sophie always
Warren and louise forever!

number 4 of the louise and warren club!creater of 'the sausage and the sausage returns' lol!
*****
Don't get on my bad
side I'M a nasty person,
i just love every creature alive!
 
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It's the way you make me feel - Louise and Warren

Without my friends I wouldn't find a reason to live my life the way I do
 
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At The Valintines House*

Sasha came storming in slaming the door behind her, she ran up to calvin.
'Why didn't you tell us!?' shouted sasha.
'tell you what?' asked a puzzled calvin.
'come'n i know you know' sasha shouted.
'sasha i don't know what your on about!' said a confused calvin.
'Louise getting engaged why didn't you tell us??' asked sasha. Calvin stood silent.
'oh maybe you really didn't know afterall' sasha began taking steps backwards.
'what?' muttered calvin he shook his head.
'sasha i don't see the big deal...' said calvin putting on a brave face.
'calvin you were engaged to her you must of felt sad' she replied.
'After what she done? i don't care about her anymore sasha, when your older you'll understand that' answere calvin.
Sasha folded her arms-she could se through calvins act.

*Over at evissa*

Louise had just told Carmel the news.
'awww i always wanted to get married, just couldn't fi nd the right man for me, you know my own prince charming' said carmel painting her nails.
Louise smiled.
'so what date are you gonna have the big day then?' asked carmel. Louise began thinking deepley.
'i don't know??' she mumbled.


hollyoaks obsessed
'Life is like a peach'
Will remeber mel and sophie always
Warren and louise forever!

number 4 of the louise and warren club!creater of 'the sausage and the sausage returns' lol!
*****
Don't get on my bad
side I'M a nasty person,
i just love every creature alive!
 
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It's the way you make me feel - Louise and Warren

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Later that night*

Louise settled down to a glass of red rose wine. Warren lay beside her stroking back her hair gentley. He took her hand and kissed it softley. Louise looked up into warrens eyes which sparkled, she began brushing her hand through warrens hair.
'i love you' she whispered.
'i know' he whispered back.
Warren neglected the thought of letting out his feelings, it seemed if he was to tell louise everything he felt for her he would seem weak, inside of his heart he had a burning passion and a need of fufillment. He would never let Louise know.
'promise you wont hold back anything from me' she whispered again.
'i promise' he whispered back. Both Warren and Louise leaned closer to eachother preparing for a pssionate kiss. The moment was ruined by a knock on the door. Louise turned her head over to the door, while flicking her long silky brunette hair behind hair. Warrens attention was still focused on louise.
'ignore it' warren said still whispereing.
'why?' asked louise.
'i don't want anyone to come in just me and you' warren whispered.
Louise turned her head back to Warren and grins. They went into a passionate clinch on the couch, listening to the knocking of the door.


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this is really good Big Grin
is this a joint fic?


Marriage may not be made in heaven but the raw materials come from hell!!
*Kris 4 Jess
**Warren 4 Louise
***JP 4 Craig
 
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yea roxsox asked me to right the next part for her :P


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thankeessss anotherhollyoakslover i needed someone to do the next part you have just gave me tons of thoughts lol


hollyoaks obsessed
'Life is like a peach'
Will remeber mel and sophie always
Warren and louise forever!

number 4 of the louise and warren club!creater of 'the sausage and the sausage returns' lol!
*****
Don't get on my bad
side I'M a nasty person,
i just love every creature alive!
 
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ok i like ur style of writting anyway Big Grin


Marriage may not be made in heaven but the raw materials come from hell!!
*Kris 4 Jess
**Warren 4 Louise
***JP 4 Craig
 
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wow this fic is really good, write more soon please


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The next day*

Louise and warren were lying on the couch wrapped in a quilt.
Louise lay her hand on warrens chest. Warrens eyes slowley opened his head tilted towards her.
A smile appeared onto her face.
'you're awake' said louise.
'so are you' warren replied kissing her forehead.
Louise turned her head and looked up at the celing, she was lost deep in thought. Warren smirked.
'Louise' he mumbled. Louise turned towards him.
'yea?' she asked.
'i want to marry you' he mumbled.
'i want to marry you to' she cheered.
'no i want to marry you now'
Louise became puzzled.... was he joking or being serious.
'now..?' she quesitoned him.
'today, we can do it' he put his arms around her. He had a firm grasp of her.
'warren...but...i'm not sure i have always dreamet of this big white wedding with all my family and friends' she mumbled.
He leaned backwards.
'yea, ok'
Louise felt uncomfertable after deniying warrens propsoal to get married straight away. She jumped up with the quilt still wrapped round her. Louise didn't say a word instead she ran off to the bedroom.


hollyoaks obsessed
'Life is like a peach'
Will remeber mel and sophie always
Warren and louise forever!

number 4 of the louise and warren club!creater of 'the sausage and the sausage returns' lol!
*****
Don't get on my bad
side I'M a nasty person,
i just love every creature alive!
 
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hollyoaks obsessed
'Life is like a peach'
Will remeber mel and sophie always
Warren and louise forever!

number 4 of the louise and warren club!creater of 'the sausage and the sausage returns' lol!
*****
Don't get on my bad
side I'M a nasty person,
i just love every creature alive!
 
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Oh no, please write more soon, i hope warrens not mad


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Read my fics:
It's the way you make me feel - Louise and Warren

Without my friends I wouldn't find a reason to live my life the way I do
 
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*Later on that day*

Louise was in a rush to get out of the door, she still felt awkward from earlier on. She grabbed her coat and rushed to the door only to be stopped by Warren.
'louise, wait'
Louise turned around warren was standing behind her.
'hey' she smiled.
'hey, are we ok?' asked warren.
'what, oh yeah sure' louise knodded her head.
'good i just don't want anything to be well...awkward after this morning' he replied in a quiet tone.
'no nothings awkward' louise kissed him on the cheek and went back out the door.
Louise kept staring at her ring. It was so strange her stomich wasn't having butterflys her cheeks wernt red and she didn't have that childlike gigle she used to have.Louise took out her phone and told Carmel that Evissa wasn't opened-afterall louise had other bussniuss to take care of.


*Over at the Valintines *

Sasha was reading her normal 'HEAT' magazine and Calvin was watching t.v
There was a knock at the door.
'sasha get that' mumbled calvin. Sasha looked over at Calvin as to say 'yeah right' Calvin jumped to his feet and answered the door he jumped back.
'What are you doing here!' he mutterd
'Calvin please i need to speak to you' Louise desperatley said.
Sasha went up stairs after getting a warning sign from Calvin not to speak. Calvin reluclantley let Louise in.
'Louise what do you want?' he questioned her. Louise fiddled with her her and sat anxiousiousley on the couch.
'i came here to give you back something' she quietley said.
'well can you hurry up then' said calvin
Louise put her hand inside her handbag digging for the object she took out her hand which was in a fist shape, Louise then took calvins hand and dropped the small golden ring into his palm.
'our engagment ring' he mutterd.
'yea i thought i should give you it back, you proberly have already heard the news' she mumbled. Calvin gav eit back to louise putting it on her lap.
'calvin take it back' said louise.
'no i don't want it back' he sharpley answered.
'calvin please take it back it's just a bad memory now' pleaded louise.
'a bad memory is that what our relationship was?' said calvin his voice getting deeper and louder.
'no...calvin just take it ok!' said louise while making her way to the door.
'all the guilt you must have felt every single time you had an affair in our relationship' shouted calvin.
'calvin it was a one off!' yelled louise while throwing the ring to calvin. Calvin pounced onto the couch trying to hold back the tears.

Outside the loft warren wa