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i wrote this last night when i was very tired so i dont know how good it is but if you like it i will write more


Its about 8.00 and zoe and jess are aving a drink in the flat

Kris;helo every1
zoe; why are you so chirpy
kris; well i went shopping and i found this goergeous skirt and at a bargin price

(jess coughs)
kris; what
jess;what what
kris; what was that for
jess; what was what for
kris that annyoing little cough you did
jess; i just coughed for goodness sake. youre unbelievable
kris; i know
j; and infuriating
k;i know
Zoe; look if you two are in the same room im going oout. im meting zac for a drink c u l8r
k; oh fantastic we are left on your own
j; shall i cal the polie now then
k;what
j; for when i kill you
k; well what r we gonna do

erm jess

j; im not talking to you

k; oh yes you r

( he gets some water and flicks it at her. She runs around the sofa and pours a glass of water all over him)

k; im gonna kill you
j; youll ave to catch me

(they chase each other round the falt until they r slumped outside krises room. OUt of breath)
k; hating you is so much fun
j; mm yeah
k what
j; oh nothing its just that your top is dry clean only and we are coverd in water
k; what! oh haha very funny

( he starts to tickle her until they end up on the floor. in a moment of madness he says something he has wanted to say for soooo long. HE loks deep into her eyes and says)
k;wow
j;what
k; i ave just noticed something
j;what
k; your beautiful

( he leans down and gently kisses her on the lips, then realising what he has done stand up and starts to go into his room. Jess just grabs him by the hand)
j; oh no you dont
k; dont what
j; kiss me again and then walk off

( she gently pushes him to the wall and start to kiss him)
k; jess
j; what?
k; well
j; what
k; com on.
(he stops and thinks about everything they have been through and then realises how fat his heart is beating and kisses her back. Then takes her hand and pulls her into his room.
i didnt say you should stop



well what do yu think.


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awww bless please carri on it good
 
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Thats really good, you shud carry on
 
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Brill! When you writing more>???


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this is good plz do more today


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This is awesome lol
I hope you carry on


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il do some more tomorrow cos i got exams in the morining so i suppose i betr revise. I get home earlier though cos i we get the afternoon off after the exam so it will be waiting for you when you get bak from school/college/work etc. X


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okk
 
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are you on now please do moreSmile


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excellent!
 
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i demand more now or i'll get them on you


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this is a kl story like the water fight idea !
exellent writting
write some more when you get time plz
and gd luck for ur exam!!


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