On Kris’ return to HCC after the summer he felt things could go back to the way they were, he didn’t expect much to have changed and he hoped that people had missed him. He had been with his family over the summer trying to sort out the problems between him and them. They didn’t know about his cross-dressing, bi-sexual ways and he had decided that now was the time to come clean because otherwise he knew Malachy would. Malachy had visited Kris not long before he left for Ireland and found out about everything and it was a slight understatement to say he wasn’t pleased. Kris knew that if he didn’t tell his parents soon then he would always be wondering whether Malachy got there first, so he decided to go back and tell his family everything. He had been in Ireland for just over 2 months now because it had taken a long time for him to tell his parents what he was really like. But he was back now and planning on getting his life back to how it was just before he left. But what he didn’t know was that a lot had changed since he left.

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You should definately continue Rach, that was a brilliant opening.

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Jess has been on a rollercoster ride since Kris left; she has been up and down. At the start she was really struggling, he had just left without saying goodbye, no one knew where he had gone, he didn’t even bother to get in contact to let us know he was ok. She went on a downward spiral until she hit rock bottom where she thought that Kris had left because of her. She stopped eating and was becoming really weak. Zoë, Zak and Elliot had tried to keep her spirits up but nothing was working. But when Gilly started coming over to the flat when he was having trouble at the Ashworths, he became very close with Jess and she started to cheer up a bit. He was good for her, he helped her get through everything and when she was better again, the friendship grew too more than that. They have been seeing each other for about 5 weeks now and Jess was happier than she had been in ages. She had accepted the fact that Kris was gone and she didn’t know when she would see him again; little did she know she would be seeing him sooner than she thought.

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just read it all and its fab lookin forward 2 readin more soon

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Kris’ POV

I’m just arriving in Chester. I’m in the taxi on my way back to HCC. I can’t wait to see everyone again. I’ve missed them all so much since I’ve been away, one person in particular. I can see the village in front of me now, I’m back home, I can feel the butterflies in my stomach as the taxi comes to a halt. I know they are going to be annoyed at me for not getting in contact with them over the past 2 months but I have had so much to deal with, I just hope that they will be happy to see me. I get out of the taxi and pay the driver, he gave me a funny look when I put the money in his hand obviously because he was expecting a bigger tip but I didn’t have anymore money on me. I take my case out of the back of the taxi and started to make my way towards HCC. I’m walking up the steps and bump into Rhys, he welcomes me back and offers for me to join him in the SU Bar but I decline just wanting to put my bag down in the flat and reacquainting myself with my Jess, Zoë and Zak. I arrive outside the door to the flat and turn the handle, as I enter there is someone sitting on the sofa but I can’t make out whom. I walked over to where they were sitting and was surprised when I saw Elliot.

“What are you doing here?” I ask
“I live here now. Where have you been for the last 2 months? Do you know the damage you caused when you left?”

What was he going on about? I thought to myself. He lives here?! Great that means I’m going to have to listen to him going on about little green men all the time, he’s going to bore me to tears. And what did he mean the damage I’ve caused?

“What damage?” I ask him with a confused expression on my face.
“Jess. When you left she was in pieces, you didn’t even bother to get in contact with her to tell her you were ok, she got really depressed and it was all your fault.”

I suddenly felt a wave of guilt come over me. I know I should have got in contact with her but the more I put it off the harder I found it to pick up the phone. I thought she would be alright and not even care I had left, how wrong was I. I heard the door handle turn and I quickly turned around to see who was coming through the door.

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this is really good
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yeah i like it!!!!!!!

god i cant wait gearald is coming back to our screems
once again i can sit down on my sofa and drool

Kris POV

It was Zoë. As soon as she saw me she threw her arms around me and hugged me tightly. She then pulled back from me.

“Where have you been for so long?” She asked angrily
“I went back to my parent’s to try and sort everything out with them and tell them the truth about who I really am.”
“Did it go alright?”
“Sort of. It took me a long time to finally pluck up the courage to tell them and at first they weren’t very happy with it but they got used to it I think and they are just happy that I’m happy.”
“Awww, I’m glad it went ok. But you could have got in contact with us to tell us where you were! You didn’t answer any phone calls or texts. We were really concerned, especially Jess, she even went looking for you.”
“I’m sorry, I just had to sort things out with my parents before Malachy told them.”
“I think you should say sorry to Jess when she gets back”
“I will, but for now I’m just going to unpack my case”

I left Zoë and Elliot on the sofas and headed to my bedroom. I was feeling many things now. I felt guilt for leaving without saying anything and making Jess upset however I didn’t really know why she was upset, it wasn’t like we were together or anything. Yes I have feelings for her but I didn’t think she returned those feelings. I also feel happy at the fact it will be soon that I will be seeing her again but that is also making me worry. From what Zoë and Elliot have told me, she’s gone through a lot since I’ve been gone and they seem to think it’s my fault, and I don’t want her to not be speaking to me. But I suppose I will just have to wait and see when she gets back.

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Brill! More soon?!

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Jess’ POV

I’m at Gilly’s new flat. He started to rent one soon after the problems at the Ashworths’ started. He didn’t want to feel like he was intruding after everything they have been through recently so decided with the money he had saved through working at drive ‘n’ buy he would rent a flat. It’s really nice, it’s fairly big and it’s very modern in the décor.

I went shopping with Gilly today into Chester and he bought me this beautiful white gold bracelet. I really care for Gilly, which I’m surprised about, because once Kris left I didn’t think that would happen again, at least not for a very long time, but I’m happy. Gilly gives me a light kiss and offers to walk me back to HCC. He’s such a gentleman. I accept his offer and we start to walk back to halls, it was raining outside and it was very cold so Gilly took off his coat and wrapped it around me and put his arm around my waist pulling me in close to him. I felt safe and secure with him.

By the time we reached the door to mine, Zoë, Zak and Elliot’s flat in Halls, we were both drenched through. I offered him a coffee but he said he needed to get back for some reason so we kissed goodnight and I walked inside. As I shut the front door I heard someone’s bedroom door open, they had obviously heard me come in. As I walked through the kitchen and put the kettle on I looked down the corridor but no one was there, I turned round and made my coffee and felt a gentle tap on my shoulder. I was expecting it to be Zoë and when I turned around I tried to speak but I just couldn’t I was in so much shock.

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Fabby!! More plz!

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this is fab please continue !

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Fabulous!!
Looking forward to more..

Thanks for all the comments

Kris’ POV

Jess is just staring at me, not saying anything. I take the time to look at her in more detail; she was just as beautiful as I remembered, more so even. Even though she was soaking wet from being outside in the rain, and her make-up was all running down her face I couldn’t help but stare at her. I had been waiting to see her again for so long and now I was I didn’t know what to say. There was so much running through my mind. But I just couldn’t seem to get the words out. Just as I thought Jess was going to say something I was shocked as she pushed passed me and started to walk towards her room without a word. She hadn’t even looked happy that I was back. I could feel tears about to fall from my eyes, but I had to be strong I couldn’t let people see my weaknesses or they would just manipulate them. I follow Jess down the corridor to her room and as she starts to shut the door on me I push it open and let myself in.

“Don’t I even get a welcome back?” I say.
“Why should I waste my breathe when you didn’t bother saying anything when you went away, it doesn’t feel good does it having someone not even giving you a second thought?”
“But Jess I did think about you, almost everyday”
“You have a funny way of showing it, didn’t you get my messages? I was so worried about you anything could have happened,” She said starting to raise her voice.
“I went to my parents to sort things out between us I just wanted to concentrate on that and then think about other things after”
“Nice to know how much you care about us all”
“I care about you a lot, especially you”

Kris leaned in and kissed Jess and at first she responded but then quickly pulled away.

“I’m seeing Gilly now,” she said as she pushed me towards the door.

She shoved me out of the door and I headed back to my room and decided to talk to her again in the morning. I couldn’t help but kiss her, seeing her again brought all the old feelings back that I had for her before I went away and she obviously felt the same otherwise she wouldn’t have responded so quickly. I am determined to win her back and will try my hardest to do so.

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