Present day

Louise Summers stepped out of the taxi and looked around the street she had just stepped onto. Not really me, she thought, as she was used to hot weather, sexy guys and drugs. Not what she was looking at now. The town just looked so bleak and pale compared to Ibiza. But it’s not about the village, she thought, there was a reason why she was here. To escape her husband Sean Kennedy and to find Warren Fox.

Flashback – 10 years ago

Seventeen year old Louise Summers, her long curly brown hair dancing on her shoulders, looked around at the many guys in the room. Her and her best friend Carly Richards were looking for their dream guy. Easy for Carly she’s so pretty! Louise kept thinking, not in the least aware that she was actually ten times prettier than Carly. Carly have straight long blonde hair and was a looker. Her crystal clear blue eyes always looked like they could see right through people’s souls and in many ways people had to wonder if maybe she had a heart of ice. But she didn’t. Louise knew that Carly was one of the nicest people that anyone could meet. Suddenly Louise felt a light tap on her shoulder. She turned round to come face to face with Warren Fox.

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Present day

Falling over wasn’t part of the plan Louise thought, as she tripped over the kerb of the path near Drive ‘n’ by, in her new pink high heals and twisted her ankle. She tried to get up, but it was that twisted, it felt impossible. She sat there for a bit, thinking that the day couldn’t get any worse, when a man with short brown hair came walking over to her. Feeling embarrassed, Louise tried to look like she was just sitting down on the path, but it didn’t seem to work.

“Are you OK? I just saw you trip over the kerb.” Of course I’m fine! Louise wanted to say, but feeling the pain of her ankle, she knew that if she lied then she would look like even more of a dope later when people realised she was hurt. Telling the truth, she said, “No, I think I’ve twisted my ankle and I can’t get up.” Louise tried to sound casual, but again it failed.

The man looked at her in sympathy and pity and Louise just couldn’t stand the humiliation. He helped her up and brought her into the shop she had been looking at earlier, and sat her down on a chair. “Do you want some ice for you foot?” The man with the brown hair said, and Louise nodded. As he went to get some, Louise looked around the shop. It wasn’t as big as the shops she was used to and wasn’t as glamorous either. But she wasn’t going to think about that now. Her ankle felt like it had swollen.

The man came back with a big packet of ice and as Louise put it against her foot, she felt good for the first time since falling over. She inhaled a breath and let it out and smiled to herself. She looked at the man and he finally introduced himself. “I’m Neville Ashworth by the way.” Louise smiled at him and replied “Louise Summers.”

“So who or why are you in Hollyoaks village?” Neville asked her and Louise was just about to answer when a voice from behind said, “Well well well, Louise Summers, what a nice surprise.”

Flashback – 10 years ago

Louise hadn’t seen Warren in over a year. Warren looked browner than last time she hadn’t seen him, meaning he had been in the sun a lot since seeing her, and his blue eyes looked darker and sexier. Louise didn’t think that he had looked any sexier. Louise also felt like she couldn’t love him even more than if she tried. But she knew that he didn’t love him. At least not in that way.

Louise had known Warren since she was ten years old, when he moved in next door to her house with his foster parents. They had instantly become friends and had done everything friends did together. But one thing they hadn’t been and probably never would be, is boyfriend and girlfriend.

The last time Louise had seen Warren was when they had had an argument about his younger sister Katy. She had just moved back into the children’s home from her foster home, after a fight between Warren and Katy’s foster dad. Warren had nearly ended up in prison for the assault and Louise had been furious. As for as she was concerned, Warren was family and every bad thing he did would make her angry because she cared about him. After the argument, Louise hadn’t seen him since.

As she brought her mind back to the present, Louise listened to what Warren was saying. “...so I want you to meet him.” Louise, who hadn’t been listening to a word he had been saying, said, “Sorry, can you repeat that?”

Warren shuck his head from side to side and raised his eyebrows. “You weren’t listening to a word I was saying were you?” But instead of being angry, he just laughed. “Same old Louise.” He said and started from the beginning again. “I have been in Ibiza for the past year and I am so sorry for not telling you or keeping in touch. I just feel so guilty about it. Anyway, while I was there I met this guy called Sean Kennedy and we have become good friends. We have even bought a couple of bars and clubs there together. So, I was saying, I would like you to meet him.”

“Sure why not? Expect we’re not in Ibiza and I’m not planning to go there!”

“No problem.” He turned round and tapped a guy on the shoulder. He turned round and Warren said, “Louise, meet Sean Kennedy.”

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Present day

Louise turned round to come face to face with Warren’s little sister Katy. She looked so grown up and happy from the last time Louise had seen her that she nearly cried.

The last time she had seen Katy, she had been going clubbing in Ibiza and Katy had been busy getting chatted up by a very ugly and old man, in one of the clubs Louise found herself in. That had been two years ago. The short blonde bob that Katy used to have, was now long and straight and the colour of chocolate brown. Katy’s bright blue eyes were now replaced by grass green contact lenses and she looked very, very pretty. But then, Louise wasn’t surprised.

Finally recovering from her shock at seeing Katy, Louise limped to Katy and gave her a big hug. “Whoa Louise you’re suffocating me!” Louise let her go and smiled so hard that she was surprised her face was still in one piece. She was just so happy! Seeing someone whom she liked and was also related to the person she was desperate to see, made her realise that maybe her journey here wasn’t a waste of time after all...

Flashback – One day ago in Ibiza

Louise looked over at her husband Sean Kennedy. At twenty-nine, he was two years older than her and was definitely handsome. But it wasn’t enough.

Louise loved her husband, but his violent ways, like giving her a black eye on numerous occasions, ruined their marriage. And after being married to him for five years, the time had come to leave him, and she was going to do it tonight...

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Present day

After her horrible start to her day, Louise found herself in the flat that Katy and Warren both lived in. Louise thought that it was smaller than she would have expected for Warren, but then, nothing really surprised her anymore. The one thing that Louise could say had surprised her is the way that her life had become. Never would she have imagined that she would be doing a series of dead end jobs, running away from a violent husband and staying in a grotty flat with the person she was in love with but didn’t love her, and his little sister who, as it happened, was only twenty years old.

Sitting on the pale purple sofa in the main room of the flat, Louise waited as Katy fetched them both a drink of coffee, a drink that Louise felt she had been deprived of for long enough. Her foot was still hurting so much and she was scared that if the worst came to the worst and Warren and Katy told her she couldn’t stay with them, then how was she going to move out of the flat and also find somewhere else to stay? This worried Louise so much that she decided that she would forget about it for now.

As she looked up from the floor that she had been looking at while thinking, she saw Katy bringing in two steaming cups of coffee. “Here you go; this will do you the world of good.” Katy told Louise, as she handed her, her mug of coffee. When Louise took her first mouthful and it burnt her tongue, she put the mug down on the side table and looked at Katy. “Thanks.” She tried to say, but her tongue felt too saw to speak.

Katy, however, sensing what had happened to Louise, said, “It’s OK, you don’t have to speak at the moment.” This gave Louise a chance to relax. “But, I’m guessing that you are tired after your obviously long day, so I’m suggesting that you go and have a lie down in the spare bed in the spare room.” Louise didn’t need to think twice before she answered. “Thanks!” She said, more enthusiastically than she had intended. Katy, hearing this just laughed.

Louise limped up from the sofa and with Katy’s help, hobbled over to the spare room. When Katy had gone and Louise was on her own to feel the comfort of a bed, she fell asleep, feeling more safe than she had felt in a long time.

Flashback – Ten years ago, the day after meeting Sean Kennedy

Louise woke up in a strange bed, with a banging headache. Where am I? She thought, as she looked around the dark room. She tried to feel next to her, to see if anyone was next to her, but no one was and all she could feel was a cold patch where someone must have lain, but no longer did.

She tried to get up and move about, but her body felt so weak and she felt so disorientated, so she just gave up and just lay there looking at the ceiling. The ceiling, as well as the rest of the room, was coloured in a light blue and looked more babyish than anything else. This worried Louise. She didn’t remember a single thing from last night, apart from arriving at the best party in town with her best friend Carly Richards. Just as she was about to try and get up and get her stuff and try and leave, a man she didn’t recognise opened the door and smiled a cheesy smile at her.

This told Louise all she had to know. What ever she had done last night had made a man she didn’t know, what would seem the happiest man alive.

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Present day

The next day and Louise was feeling so much more refreshed. For a moment she pictured Sean, angry and ready to come after her and she knew that he wouldn’t find her here. At least not now anyway. In fact, she hadn’t even seen Warren yet. Where was he? She climbed out of bed, and put on her clothes. She then walked into the hall and into the main room to see if anyone else was up. When she got there, Warren was standing in the kitchen drinking tea. When she entered, he turned round and smiled at her. “Louise! What a nice surprise to find out you’re here! I’ve not seen ya in ages.” He went over to her and gave her a hug so fierce, that she could hardly breathe. “Sorry.” He said when he realised this too.

“Hiya to you too.” She said back and he smiled at her. “Sorry that I just turned up, it’s just that...” Louise didn’t get to finish her sentence because Katy walked into the room.

“Hey Louise, did you have a nice sleep?” Katy smiled at her and Louise smiled back.

“Yes thanks, it was the best night sleep I have had in ages.”

“Well, good. Anyway, I was just going to get ready and go to college. Will you be alright?”

“Hello? I am in the room you know.” Warren, waving his hands continued. “Of course Louise will be OK she’s with me ain’t she?”

Katy, not looking convinced, just shrugged. “Fine, if ya say so.” With that, she walked out of the room. Ten minutes later, she came back in with smart clothes on. “Cya guys!” And she walked to the front door, opened it and walked out, shutting the door behind her.

Warren looked back at Louise after this. “So, why is it that you are here and not with your gorgeous husband?!”

“If I tell you, you have got to promise not to tell anyone.” Louise looked at him seriously, for the first time ever.

Warren looked equally serious and nodded. “OK then. Fire away.”

Louise hesitated for a moment, then spoke. “I know he killed my sister.”

Flashback - Six years ago

Louise thought that the last four years were the most dull of her life. The last good thing that had happened was moving out of her parents’ house and moving into her own flat. The flat she lived in, was shared with her best friend Carly Richards, whom she had known since she was fourteen years old. It wasn’t exactly the best flat in the world, but it would do for now.

But Louise didn’t care much. All she really cared about was the fact that she hadn’t seen Warren for almost four years now, and this really upset her. She loved him so much and when they weren’t speaking, it really hurt. Especially since she hadn’t seen him for so long. As she thought more about Warren, her thoughts stopped when Carly came into the room.

“Hey Louise! You are not going to believe this! I was just on the phone with my brother’s mate, and he says that two of his mates have just backed out of a trip to Ibiza. And he’s invited us! Well, me, but he said I can bring a friend and who better than my best friend!”

OMG! Louise thought, as she realised that this was where Warren now lived. Maybe she might see him? As if!

“So what do you say? Are you in?”

Louise took a deep breath and then told her, her answer. “OK then. So, when do we go?”

“Tonight!”

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Present Day

Warren stared at her with stunned eyes. She didn’t blame him. Of all the people you would think your husband would kill, your little sister wasn’t exactly someone you would put on the list. What people didn’t know was that Louise was glad she was dead. Jasmine had done too much to upset and humiliate Louise, that she didn’t care one way or the other whether Jasmine was dead or alive.

Jasmine had been three years younger than Louise, making her twenty-four at her deathbed. People would think that she was such a sweetie pie when they met her, but underneath the pretty face, similar to Louise’s, was an evil person who fed on other people’s misery. Especially the people she knew.

“Louise, are you telling the truth?” Warren finally broke the silence and Louise finally looked back into his face.

“Yes, it is true.” Louise didn’t want to mention that although it was true, that wasn’t the reason why she was here. After all, Jasmine Summers had been dead for two years now.

“Oh Louise, I’m so sorry!” Warren came over and gave her a hug. Louise wanted so desperately to feel sad about her death, but how could she when she had caused her nothing but grief all her life? What was the point when Jasmine wouldn’t even feel any kind of emotion if she was the one that had been killed. She would have carried on as normal, like nothing had happened in the first place. “So how are the rest of your family coping?”

“Fine now.” Louise also had another sister and a brother. Lola and Jack were twins and were close to each other. Being only twenty-two, they were still quite young and liked to party lots like anyone their age. Her father had died when she had been ten, so he wasn’t around and her mother was an alcoholic and didn’t really play much attention to the family.

“You should have told me as soon as it had happened. I would have been there for you. I always have haven’t I?” Louise didn’t really know what to say to this. Yes, he had been all the way up to when she had married Sean. After that, he hadn’t really been around much and she had had to stand on her own two feet. But she wasn’t going to tell him that.

“Yes you have.”

Flashback - Six years ago in Ibiza

Ibiza was so hot! Louise thought, as she stepped off the plane. She was sweating all over and no matter what she drank or how much air conditioning she had near her, nothing worked. She looked over at Carly who looked so cool, that Louise was envious. “Why are you so cool and I am sweating so much I feel I will drop dead any minute?”

Carly, walking onwards in front of her in the airport, just smiled back at her. “The best people always are hunni.”


At this Louise just laughed and looked behind her at the other people in the group going to Ibiza with them. There was Carl, Jill, Ben and Joe. Louise thought that all of the guys in there group were quite ugly. Ben and Joe were identical twin brothers and both had crocked noses. They also had straight black hair that went past their shoulders. Carl was OK looking but there was something about him that looked odd, but Louise just couldn’t work it out. He was also Carly’s brother’s mate. Jill was just a stunning girl. Her golden blonde hair was cut short into a bob and her gorgeous blue eyes made her look so much prettier.

*

When they had all collected their bags and were out in the hot air away from the airport, Carl told them all where they were all headed. “Before we go have some fun, we’ll have to go to my mate’s place to drop our stuff off. His name is Warren Fox. Nice guy, you will all love him! He’s a hit with the ladies.”

Louise thought she was in a different world and someone was playing a joke on her. Did he just say Warren Fox? She thought and she was so scared that he would say yes when she answered, didn’t ask him again. But she didn’t need to. When she looked over at Carly who looked as stunned as her, she knew she had heard right. Great, this is all I need, she thought.

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