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I never saw that episode!
Awww i hope you feel better soon Hug
Lianne actually Jade owes us a few Kress kisses!


Beckie....
It’s not the size of the boat it’s the motion in the ocean
Beckie, Lianne and Kay members of the 'We Need Kris Club'
Do you ever wonder if we make the moments in our lives or if the moments in our lives make us?
 
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Sorry, decided to venture out of my room for a bit.
I agree that the Doctor and Rose had more chemistry. I think Martha was likeable enough but not a patch on Rose.


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Here here Tash!
I would be so happy if Rose came back, though it could not work, you never know!

More Up in a Mo x x


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Hey Jade
How has your day been?
Looking forward to reading more
xx


Beckie....
It’s not the size of the boat it’s the motion in the ocean
Beckie, Lianne and Kay members of the 'We Need Kris Club'
Do you ever wonder if we make the moments in our lives or if the moments in our lives make us?
 
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If they could bring Rose back, that would be amazing.


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sorry abut yesterday, evertyime i tried to post anything up, it was coming up with Internal Error, or something!

But here is what i was trying to post up yesterday

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Jess calmed Crystal down and took her back inside, where she was greeted by all the other kids. There was an awkward silence as Jess put Crystal down, and she went to join the other kids. Jess waited anxiously as the silence continued until Tia spoke up

“Jess? Are you staying here now”

Jess paused for a moment, looked at Tia, and then at the all other kids

“Yes. Yes I am”, Jess said eventually, waiting for the kids reactions

After a few seconds, the whole crowd of children, including fifteen year old Harry, broke out into smiles and cheers, and then Tia and Crystal rushed back towards Jess, throwing them selves at her, hugging her as if she’d been gone forever.

Jess knelt down, and hugged both of the girls, suddenly realising neither Lottie or Erin had come down. After giving each child an individual hug, and ruffling the hair of the older boys, Jess left the other children in the capable hands of Lois, Sam and Ashton. She ventured upstairs, to the top floor, in the hope of finding Lottie and Erin.

As she travelled up the first set of stairs onto the second floor, Jess popped into her room and checked her phone. She had two messages. One from Jamie, the other from Zak. Jess read them quickly, scanning them for any trouble to do with Lily or Cady, but they weren’t. Jess threw her phone back on her bed, and then ran up to the top third.

On arriving, she heard voices. Jess knew straight away that Lottie wasn’t alone on the top floor, because no matter how long Jess had been away, she knew for a fact that Lottie wouldn’t be deep in conversation with anyone, let alone would have had a voice transplant to sound like a man.


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Awww Thanks Aaz: Clair best loved Big Grin!

More up in a mo

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o gosh! At first i thought it might be Kris but now i think it is Steve! And if it is Jade you will deffinitly be in my bad books!
Brilliant as always
Need more now plese Smile
xxx


Beckie....
It’s not the size of the boat it’s the motion in the ocean
Beckie, Lianne and Kay members of the 'We Need Kris Club'
Do you ever wonder if we make the moments in our lives or if the moments in our lives make us?
 
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Lol . . .I'm not telling!

It could be neither . . .
Or both!

Who Knows!!

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No no no Steve! Mad
yes yes yes Kris! Big Grin


Beckie....
It’s not the size of the boat it’s the motion in the ocean
Beckie, Lianne and Kay members of the 'We Need Kris Club'
Do you ever wonder if we make the moments in our lives or if the moments in our lives make us?
 
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Lol . . .all will be reavealed shortly!
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Okie dokie
Cant wait Smile
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Beckie....
It’s not the size of the boat it’s the motion in the ocean
Beckie, Lianne and Kay members of the 'We Need Kris Club'
Do you ever wonder if we make the moments in our lives or if the moments in our lives make us?
 
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Jess crept towards Lottie’s room. The only sound emerging from her room was silence. Jess debated whether to open the door or not. Realising she needed to see if Lottie was okay, Jess opened the door and tad, and poked her head through. Lottie was sitting on her window sill, her knees up at her chest, and her arms grasped around her legs. As she heard Jess come in, Lottie turned her head slowly, and small smile emerged on her face.

Jess smiled back and advanced into Lottie’s room. She took a seat on Lottie’s bed, smoothing out the duvet surrounding her.

“You okay?”

Lottie nodded earnestly, but did not move from sitting on the window sill.

“You not want to go downstairs with the others?”

Lottie shook her head

“Too loud?”

Lottie shook her head again

“Too quiet?!”, Jess asked, pretending hard to think

Lottie smiled, covering her mouth with her hand, trying hard not to laugh. Jess’ smile on her face grew as she watched Lottie’s brown eyes sparkled.

“Will you come down with me in a minute?”

Lottie just grinned at Jess, but didn’t answer

“ooh! Get you Miss Brown! Playing hard to get!”

Jess got up off Lottie’s bed and poked Lottie gently on her stomach before blowing her a kiss as she exited Lottie’s room.

Jess carried on down the corridor and approached Erin’s door. She knocked gently on the door, before pushing the door open. As she walked into the room, she was shocked at who she saw . .


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OK well now I think it might be Malachy! It can be anyone But Steve! And i mean no Steve!
Brilliant Jade
Love little Lottie
Cant wait to read more soon
And you have to put me out my misery before i go out!
xxxx


Beckie....
It’s not the size of the boat it’s the motion in the ocean
Beckie, Lianne and Kay members of the 'We Need Kris Club'
Do you ever wonder if we make the moments in our lives or if the moments in our lives make us?
 
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“Erin? I think Lois has your breakfast ready downstairs. Why don’t you go and get it, hey?”

Erin obeyed, and ran quietly down the stairs. Jess shut the door behind Erin, and span round sharply to face the man who sat down on Erin’s bed.

“What do you think you’re doing?! You can’t just waltz in here after what you did!”

Jess marched up and down Erin’s room.

“how did you even get in?! How did you . . . Why . .?”

“Kris”, came the reply

“I should have guessed!”, Jess huffed. She shook her head. “Only he could muck this up”

“Don’t take it out on him”

“What?! Since when did you care?! It was only what, two years ago, you had disowned him! Now, you’re sticking up for him?! Do you know what . . I don’t care! Just get out! GET OUT!!”


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I assume its Malachy then! But i guess it could be another member of his family
Really good Jade
Continue soon please
xx


Beckie....
It’s not the size of the boat it’s the motion in the ocean
Beckie, Lianne and Kay members of the 'We Need Kris Club'
Do you ever wonder if we make the moments in our lives or if the moments in our lives make us?
 
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Malachy left the room. Whether he left the house or not, Jess didn’t know. As she stood in Erin’s room, she proceeded to cry, the tears streaming down her face. She left Erin’s room, and walked down the corridor, trying hard to muffle her sobs.

As she neared the stairs, a door opened and someone placed their hand into Jess’ and pulled her into the room where they resided.


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Im getting even more confuzzled now
I think you should tell us who this mystery person is!
Excellent
Moreee please Smile
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Beckie....
It’s not the size of the boat it’s the motion in the ocean
Beckie, Lianne and Kay members of the 'We Need Kris Club'
Do you ever wonder if we make the moments in our lives or if the moments in our lives make us?
 
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Cheeeers Beckie Big Grin!

It was orginally going to be Steve, but i decided against it lol!

More up in a mo!


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Its a good job you did really because you never know what i might have done! hehe!


Beckie....
It’s not the size of the boat it’s the motion in the ocean
Beckie, Lianne and Kay members of the 'We Need Kris Club'
Do you ever wonder if we make the moments in our lives or if the moments in our lives make us?
 
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Fab
 
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Is there ever a time you aren't confuzzled Beckie Razz

Anyway fab Jade, I loved the last few parts. Can't wait to read the next bit Big Grin




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