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“Steve!”

Jess rushed towards him, and flung her arms around his neck. Kris watched on, deflating more and more by the second. His head turned, in slow motion, to look round at Jess and Steve. Steve was now spinning Jess around, clutching on tightly to her body, not wanting to let go of her. Kris observed Steve’s entire body. He wasn’t much. A bit mucky, his trousers were ripped and his t-shirt looked stained. His hair was messy and his face needed a good shave. What did Steve have that he didn’t?


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John:Thank God they follow me around.. The Johnettes!
Paul: When I had fans, they were called The Lilettes.
John: Difference is, yours went by coach.. mine have wings!
 
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I cant speak to you right now because im going to cry
Steve doesnt have anything that Kris doesnt have he has much less.
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Beckie....
It’s not the size of the boat it’s the motion in the ocean
Beckie, Lianne and Kay members of the 'We Need Kris Club'
Do you ever wonder if we make the moments in our lives or if the moments in our lives make us?
 
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“Jess! DO SOMETHING!”, Kris yelled. Jess shook her head and removed herself from her daydream. Her eyes began to water as the realisation that Steve wasn’t there began to feel real, and the cries of the girl that stood in front of her began to get louder and louder. Jess stared at Kris, wondering if he had been thinking the same as she had. Kris’ shouts pierced through Jess’ ears and disturbed her thoughts

“JESS HELP ME!!”

Jess suddenly discovered the difference between dreams and reality. Her face turned serious and she rushed forwards to help the young girl, covered in all sorts, holding a baby in her arms. She was crying, as was the baby. The sight brought even more tears to Jess’ eyes. She wrapped her arms round the girl and rushed her into the house as quickly as she could. She screamed at Kris to follow her and he did so, looking shell shocked.

“Get all the kids upstairs!”, Jess shouted to Lois and Kris. “NOW!”

Lois and Kris did as quick as they could when in the meantime, Jess settled the hysterical girl on the sofa, with the help of Sam and Ashton. Jess picked up the baby and handed it so Sam, who, under the pressure, coped extremely well and managed to settle the little baby girl, who’s face was screwed up and red, but with big beautiful blue eyes.

Jess tried to calm the girl down and find out who she was, what was going on, and much more, but the girl was crying too much to talk. Jess asked Ashton to get her a drink of water, a towel and some clean clothes. She squeezed the girls hands and told her everything was going to be okay. But even Jess didn’t know this for sure. .


#10. Ravi&Nancy. Smile
John:Thank God they follow me around.. The Johnettes!
Paul: When I had fans, they were called The Lilettes.
John: Difference is, yours went by coach.. mine have wings!
 
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I hate you....well i dont but that was plain mean
Very interesting with the girl
More more more please
xxxx

P.s. fantastic


Beckie....
It’s not the size of the boat it’s the motion in the ocean
Beckie, Lianne and Kay members of the 'We Need Kris Club'
Do you ever wonder if we make the moments in our lives or if the moments in our lives make us?
 
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Thanks Beckie lol =]!
And why was it mean lol ? ?


#10. Ravi&Nancy. Smile
John:Thank God they follow me around.. The Johnettes!
Paul: When I had fans, they were called The Lilettes.
John: Difference is, yours went by coach.. mine have wings!
 
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I almost died then Jade, don't ever scare me like that again Razz
You don't know how relieved I am that Steve was only part of a day dream, oh and you're lucky too, I was ready to have a good rant at you Razz


Kayleigh,,
Lianne's a fruitloop Razz
Watch out Little Mr Men and Little Miss...Kay's coming for you
 
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Lol, i'm sorry Kay! I was originally going to make it not a day dream lol, but i had no inspiration so randomly changed it!

Hope it's okay!

And lol, i do love your rants, even if they are against my fics and characters lol!!


#10. Ravi&Nancy. Smile
John:Thank God they follow me around.. The Johnettes!
Paul: When I had fans, they were called The Lilettes.
John: Difference is, yours went by coach.. mine have wings!
 
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She gives the best rants doesnt she? lol
Because you made me think Steve was there and if he was you would have been in big trouble, my bad books were nearly out


Beckie....
It’s not the size of the boat it’s the motion in the ocean
Beckie, Lianne and Kay members of the 'We Need Kris Club'
Do you ever wonder if we make the moments in our lives or if the moments in our lives make us?
 
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PMSL I'm glad my rants amuse you Jade, I don't have a problem with your fics though, it's just some of the people in them. lol. They annoy me and get in the way a hell of a lot, they should all be like whats her face, *thinks of that kids name* erm...Niamh or however it's spelt Razz


Kayleigh,,
Lianne's a fruitloop Razz
Watch out Little Mr Men and Little Miss...Kay's coming for you
 
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Lol, they do amuse me greatly Kay!
And Beckie, i thought about it, realised the books would come out and decided to leave Steve out . . . . .for now Razz!!

And i don;t mind if you did rant at my actual fics Kay - would help me to improve them, which lets be honest, i need to do lo!

More up soon!


#10. Ravi&Nancy. Smile
John:Thank God they follow me around.. The Johnettes!
Paul: When I had fans, they were called The Lilettes.
John: Difference is, yours went by coach.. mine have wings!
 
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Jade my dear, you do not need anyone to tell you how to improve your fics, they're fantastic, and don't even think about saying otherwise otherwise I'll have you Razz


Kayleigh,,
Lianne's a fruitloop Razz
Watch out Little Mr Men and Little Miss...Kay's coming for you
 
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Hehe im glad you know where you stand lol

You dont need to improve your fics, they are the best already Smile
xx


Beckie....
It’s not the size of the boat it’s the motion in the ocean
Beckie, Lianne and Kay members of the 'We Need Kris Club'
Do you ever wonder if we make the moments in our lives or if the moments in our lives make us?
 
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Lol, i know exactly where i stand now Beckie =]!
Doesn't mean our war is over though!

And of course im going to say otherwise Kay!
Because i totally disagree! i feel my fics are rubbish!


#10. Ravi&Nancy. Smile
John:Thank God they follow me around.. The Johnettes!
Paul: When I had fans, they were called The Lilettes.
John: Difference is, yours went by coach.. mine have wings!
 
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JADE (I don't know the rest of your names Razz) Listen to Kayleigh, your fics are NOT rubbish so lose all of those thoughts right NOW!!!!!!!!!


Kayleigh,,
Lianne's a fruitloop Razz
Watch out Little Mr Men and Little Miss...Kay's coming for you
 
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Jade Lauren Joseph

Good you know where you stand, you best not catch up on mine then otherwise i have a feeling Steve may well be making an apperance

I know how you feel about the fics, i feel the same about mine but yours are fanatsic, brilliant, excellent, do i need to go on?


Beckie....
It’s not the size of the boat it’s the motion in the ocean
Beckie, Lianne and Kay members of the 'We Need Kris Club'
Do you ever wonder if we make the moments in our lives or if the moments in our lives make us?
 
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Lol, maybe!
And Beckie, you really shouldn't ahve tld me that!
Now im dreading to read your fic, scared of what i might read!!
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After 15mintues, Jess finally managed to get a name out of the young girl.

“Holly”
“Holly, right. And this is . . ?”, Jess asked gesturing to the baby, now sleeping softly in Sam’s arms
“Millie”
“Millie, eh? Pretty name”, Jess said smiling softly, glancing up at Holly’s eyes.

Holly nodded softly

“Is she yours?”, Jess asked hesitantly, placing herself next to Holly of the sofa, keeping hold of both of Holly’s hands. Holly nodded, and tears began to trickle down her face, and her breathing became more forced again, as she tried to stifle her sobs.

“It’s okay, it’s okay”, Jess said reassuringly, “You want to hold her?”

Holly shook her head and turned away from the baby. Jess nodded, and titled her head towards the door. Sam took the hint and took baby Millie out the room. Ashton followed, closing the door behind them.

“I’ll let you get dressed, okay?”

Holly nodded and Jess left the room momentarily, entering once more when Holly was ready

“Suits you”, Jess said smiling at Holly. For the first time since they had met, Holly smiled back at Jess.

“So . . We gonna talk?”

Holly nodded once more. Jess smiled, nodded and settled down on the sofa, ready to listen to what Holly had to say.


#10. Ravi&Nancy. Smile
John:Thank God they follow me around.. The Johnettes!
Paul: When I had fans, they were called The Lilettes.
John: Difference is, yours went by coach.. mine have wings!
 
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Have i got this wrong or was Holly naked?
Brilliant Jade
Xxxxx

O dont worry its all happy Kress stuff Big Grin


Beckie....
It’s not the size of the boat it’s the motion in the ocean
Beckie, Lianne and Kay members of the 'We Need Kris Club'
Do you ever wonder if we make the moments in our lives or if the moments in our lives make us?
 
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No she wasn't lol!
She was just covered in dirt and stuff,and a bit wet, which will all be explained in later posts lol


#10. Ravi&Nancy. Smile
John:Thank God they follow me around.. The Johnettes!
Paul: When I had fans, they were called The Lilettes.
John: Difference is, yours went by coach.. mine have wings!
 
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Ok i thought she might of just had the baby so she didnt have clothes on which i thought they would have covered her up straight away


Beckie....
It’s not the size of the boat it’s the motion in the ocean
Beckie, Lianne and Kay members of the 'We Need Kris Club'
Do you ever wonder if we make the moments in our lives or if the moments in our lives make us?
 
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Lol no, she hasn't just had the baby either!
But all will be revealed later on!
Not tonight though cos i'm too tired now!

Byeee Though

x x


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John:Thank God they follow me around.. The Johnettes!
Paul: When I had fans, they were called The Lilettes.
John: Difference is, yours went by coach.. mine have wings!
 
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Okies
Speak to you soon hopefully
Night
xxxxx


Beckie....
It’s not the size of the boat it’s the motion in the ocean
Beckie, Lianne and Kay members of the 'We Need Kris Club'
Do you ever wonder if we make the moments in our lives or if the moments in our lives make us?
 
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OMG JADE! Where have you been? I thought you'd disappeared of the face of the earth!

Loved the updates, I'm really interested in this Holly girl! You gave me such a fright with the whole Steve thing up there though. God I hate that guy Razz

Fab, can't wait to read more soon!
xxxxxx
 
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