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“Where is Steve? I‘d like to-”
“Don‘t you DARE say his name!”, Jess shouted, interrupting Kris. Kris swallowed loudly and fell silent

“You could at least try and act as if you’re slightly happy to see me Jess”, he said after a few minutes of silence.
“Well what do you want me to say Kris? Hmm? Kris I love you and I’ve missed you so much, and I think we should be together?! Ha, that’s a joke! Kris there are more important things in my life than you”

Kris stared at Jess.

“Jess, what is your problem?!”, Kris asked, determined to get to the bottom of it
“Kris, can we please make this quick. I have things to do”
“Like what?!”
“Kris, why would I tell you?!”
“Jess, just because Steve left you, doesn’t mean you can take it all out on me!”, Kris retaliated

Jess exhaled in disbelief

“You think Steve left me? Kris I was never with Steve, okay?!”
“But . .”, Kris began
“I married Matt”
“Oh”, was Kris’ response
“But I thought . .”
“You thought wrong. I am . . . I was in love with Steve. Matt found us. Together. I’m sure even you can work out the rest”

Kris fell silent again, and Jess searched for a tissue in her desk. Things had never been so awkward


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John:Thank God they follow me around.. The Johnettes!
Paul: When I had fans, they were called The Lilettes.
John: Difference is, yours went by coach.. mine have wings!
 
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Fab once again.
Can't wait to find out why he's there.


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*Tash*
 
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Thanks Tash Big Grin!!
All Will Be Revelaed Soon
Has no One Got Any ideas As To Why He's There Then? ?


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John:Thank God they follow me around.. The Johnettes!
Paul: When I had fans, they were called The Lilettes.
John: Difference is, yours went by coach.. mine have wings!
 
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Nope haha. It's probably obvious and I'm missing it though.


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“Well what do you want me to say Kris? Hmm? Kris I love you and I’ve missed you so much, and I think we should be together?!


yes thats a perfect thing to say Jess LOL
Awww poor Jess and poor Kris coz he has no idea why she's being so nasty lol

Erm.....*thinks* no the only things i could come up with are that he's Erin's dad or he's another care worker but Jess only wanted one more Confused unless he's just there coz he wants to see Jess and be with her......there's always hope after all Razz


Lianne <3 Brains, Clumsy & Trouble<3
"Jess & Lianne's Gerard "lovexygorgestunerful" McCarthy Appreciation Society!" <3
Waving the Kress flag with Caitlin <3
Don't cry coz its over, Smile coz it happened - Kress <3
Bring back Jenny Biddall <3
 
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Lol . . .Nope,Nope and Nope Big Grin!!
You'll Probably Both See It As A Really Stupid Idea When i Write it Lol!

Last Bit For Now
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“You’re here to pick up Erin then?”, Jess asked, bring the conversation back to what was important
“Yes I am, can I do that?”, Kris asked

Jess looked at him suspiciously. There was no sarcasm meant when he asked, which confused Jess

“Why wouldn’t you be able to Kris?”
“I don’t know. Rules or something”

A knock at the door interrupted them. It was Sam, with Cady in his arms.

“She wont’ stop crying”, came the Barnsley accent. Jess sighed, but smiled and Sam, who winked back and Jess walked over and picked up Cady. The crying continued for a while, but began to die down, as Cady settled on Jess’ lap. Sam breathed out with relief, smiled at Jess, then at Kris, then left the room, closing the door behind him. A loud bang followed seconds after, and then seconds after that came Sam’s voice again.

“I’m alright!”, he shouted. Jess smiled to herself. Sam was great with kids, but somewhat clumsy with his own body.

“He seems nice”, Kris commented.
“He is”
“Is that Cady, as in Cady who was here when we all came here?”
“Yes. Did you see her the two times you visited?”
“No”

The conversation fizzled out again, the only sound that resumed was Cady’s light breathing.


#10. Ravi&Nancy. Smile
John:Thank God they follow me around.. The Johnettes!
Paul: When I had fans, they were called The Lilettes.
John: Difference is, yours went by coach.. mine have wings!
 
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So he IS there to pick up Erin!?! Confused
but he's not her dad u say?

That bit with Sam shouting out he was ok made me giggle lol

I'm really miffed about whats going on with Kris LOL

Its fab Jade


Lianne <3 Brains, Clumsy & Trouble<3
"Jess & Lianne's Gerard "lovexygorgestunerful" McCarthy Appreciation Society!" <3
Waving the Kress flag with Caitlin <3
Don't cry coz its over, Smile coz it happened - Kress <3
Bring back Jenny Biddall <3
 
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Brill.
Loved the part with Sam.
Can't wait to read more.


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Lol I Love Sam!
I Based Him Around Sam Nixon [From TMi] Lol Big Grin!!

Cheers Tash Big Grin!
And Lianne You're getting Warmer lol
Yes He's Definately There To Pick Up Erin!
x


#10. Ravi&Nancy. Smile
John:Thank God they follow me around.. The Johnettes!
Paul: When I had fans, they were called The Lilettes.
John: Difference is, yours went by coach.. mine have wings!
 
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So if he's there to pick up Erin but he's not her dad, then why is he there to pick her up?? :S is he her uncle or something LOL


Lianne <3 Brains, Clumsy & Trouble<3
"Jess & Lianne's Gerard "lovexygorgestunerful" McCarthy Appreciation Society!" <3
Waving the Kress flag with Caitlin <3
Don't cry coz its over, Smile coz it happened - Kress <3
Bring back Jenny Biddall <3
 
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By Jove i Think She's Got It!


#10. Ravi&Nancy. Smile
John:Thank God they follow me around.. The Johnettes!
Paul: When I had fans, they were called The Lilettes.
John: Difference is, yours went by coach.. mine have wings!
 
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Eek OMG really!?!?!?! wahooooooooo LOL
I cant believe it LOL


Lianne <3 Brains, Clumsy & Trouble<3
"Jess & Lianne's Gerard "lovexygorgestunerful" McCarthy Appreciation Society!" <3
Waving the Kress flag with Caitlin <3
Don't cry coz its over, Smile coz it happened - Kress <3
Bring back Jenny Biddall <3
 
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By Jove i Think She's Got It!

Sorry but that made me laugh. Not sure why though haha.


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Just caught up this is Fab
 
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Wow I can't believe how uch I've had to catch up on. As I was reading through I had a good giggle at Lianne's comments but I have to say that I do agree with the majority of them. lol.
I was also coming to the conclusion thta Kris was Erin's uncle and when I blurted it out to my mum she asked me what the hell I was on about. Razz

Anyway, I love it so much more now Razz I feel so sorry for Jess for being upset and heartbroken but there was no need for her to be so snappy towards Kris. She has to realise that Kris isn't the bad guy in all of this.

Oh and next time I'm not going out so then I won't have so much to read. lol Can't wait to read the next part Big Grin


Kayleigh,,
Lianne's a fruitloop Razz
Watch out Little Mr Men and Little Miss...Kay's coming for you
 
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Lol Wow Long Comment There KayBig Grin!!

Cheers lol and i'm glad you like it more now!!

x x

More Soon Hopefully!


#10. Ravi&Nancy. Smile
John:Thank God they follow me around.. The Johnettes!
Paul: When I had fans, they were called The Lilettes.
John: Difference is, yours went by coach.. mine have wings!
 
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“Shall I go and get Erin?”
“No, I’ll go. You wait here Kris”

Jess got up before Kris had time to argue. She hesitated as she passed Kris, deciding on whether to hand Cady over to Kris, but Jess decided against it and walked into the lounge.

“Erin baby. There’s someone here to see you”

Jess glanced at everyone’s faces. Some kids looked happy for Erin, mainly the older ones, yet the younger ones were all desperately wishing it was them.

“Daddy?”, Erin asked, rushing to her feet. Jess didn’t answer, just held the door open for Erin with her spare hand.

Erin skipped into the room but faltered as she saw Kris. She gave him a hug, but even Erin couldn’t hide the disappointment, that it wasn’t her dad. Kris picked Erin up and sat her on his lap. Jess did the same with Cady.

“Erin? You okay?”, Jess asked, standing up and moving her chair closer to Kris and Erin, rubbing Erin gently on the back

Erin nodded, but didn’t speak.

“Erin, I’ve come to take you home”
“To daddy?”
“Daddy’s not home yet, but you’re going to come and live with Uncle Kris for a while”

Erin went quiet again.

“Don’t you want to Erin?”, Jess asked quietly. Erin shrugged her shoulders, and Jess nodded.

“Erin, go back and watch TV for a while, okay? We’ll call you back in a minute”

Erin nodded and pushed her self off of Kris’ lap and ran out the room.

“She doesn’t mean it Kris”, Jess said

Kris didn’t reply.

“Come on, lets go and have a chat upstairs”


#10. Ravi&Nancy. Smile
John:Thank God they follow me around.. The Johnettes!
Paul: When I had fans, they were called The Lilettes.
John: Difference is, yours went by coach.. mine have wings!
 
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Awww bless Erin and yes a chat upstairs with Kris sounds like a WONDERFUL idea Jess Razz LOL

Brilliant, its sweet how the older children were pleased for Erin but the younger ones disappointed it wasnt a visitor for them...quite sad..

Fab Jade cant wait to read mor


Lianne <3 Brains, Clumsy & Trouble<3
"Jess & Lianne's Gerard "lovexygorgestunerful" McCarthy Appreciation Society!" <3
Waving the Kress flag with Caitlin <3
Don't cry coz its over, Smile coz it happened - Kress <3
Bring back Jenny Biddall <3
 
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Lol i Thought You Would Approve Of Jess' Little Idea There Lianne!


#10. Ravi&Nancy. Smile
John:Thank God they follow me around.. The Johnettes!
Paul: When I had fans, they were called The Lilettes.
John: Difference is, yours went by coach.. mine have wings!
 
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LOL I'm so predictable I know but I just cant help myself LOL


Lianne <3 Brains, Clumsy & Trouble<3
"Jess & Lianne's Gerard "lovexygorgestunerful" McCarthy Appreciation Society!" <3
Waving the Kress flag with Caitlin <3
Don't cry coz its over, Smile coz it happened - Kress <3
Bring back Jenny Biddall <3
 
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Im Back!!!
Boy i have lots to read and boy you got up early!

Awww poor Lily and Jamie. Glad Jess is being support to him.
Poor Erin too and can Jess stop thinking about Steve and start focusing on Kris?
How sweet is little Lottie
I have a feeling that Erin might be Malachys or Alexs but im prob wrong

I have read loadz and still no kris! jade you will be in very big trouble if he doesnt turn up anytime soon!

Matt leaving certainly was one of the best things that happened and now we only need the one and only Kris Fisher!
ooo Im really excited now it best be Kris at the door!
Love it love it love it!
O dear Jess needs to learn that Kris loves her and she loves Kris
Yay i was right Malachy is Erins dad then?
I think Jess and Kris going upstairs would be a very good idea and maybe they should make there way to her bedroom Wink
Fantastic Jayde
Had so much to read
sorry couldnt read early was at the food festival where i met James Martin so funny and then my friend has only just left
Cant wait for more
xxxxx


Beckie....
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Beckie, Lianne and Kay members of the 'We Need Kris Club'
Do you ever wonder if we make the moments in our lives or if the moments in our lives make us?
 
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LOL oh Beckie that did make me laugh LOL
Oooh yeah Jess' bedroom seems like a briliant place to go, they can make themselves comfortable there Wink replace Steve's sent on her bed with Kris' LOL
oh they had better make sure to leave Cady downstairs Razz