--- Call me Lilium Author of Don't Say What You Don't Mean, Flirt and How Things Should Have Been #28 Craig <3 John-Paul club Current mood: BAD CRAIG!!
*double thumbs up to Lilium* Wooo! A comment, I feel special
Jake is lying on the couch, half asleep as Nancy walks in
Nancy: Jake! Get up! I'm going for an exam now.
Jake: Ugga... booo...
Nancy: (looking a bit confused) Yeah, whatever. (shakes Jake) Come on, Charlie can wake up any minu...
Charlie wakes up and Nancy kicks Jake
Nancy: Why does everything happen when I say it?
Jake: Ugga... what?
Nancy: Finally! (pulls Jake up) Right, I've got an exam to get to. Are you working tonight?
Jake: Yep.
Nancy: (groans) I was planning to go out with Hannah, cos its my last exam tonight.
Jake: I'll get Steph to do it, no worries.
Nancy gives Jake a quick hug then grabs her bag and runs out the door.
Nancy: Thanks!
Craig is sitting in the common room with Sarah.
Sarah: So, whats up with you and John Paul lately?
Craig: Nothing.
Sarah: Obviously something us up. I'll ask him and I'll get it out of him, you do realise that, don't you?
Craig feels himself shudder at the thought.
Craig: We just had an argument.
Sarah: Why is it lately?
Craig: Maybe its cos I've been picky about exams. Picky like your being now! Just get off my case, alright? Sometimes your a little bit too touchy. Can't you just stop fussing about John Paul and Spikes sex life and why me and him aren't mates? Why does everything what happens between people always has to be questioned about by you?
I enjoy writing this fic... haha, I have too many...
Jess, Zak and Elliot are sitting in the lounge. Jess is reading a magazine on the couch. Zak is making beans on toast while Elliot is writing in his diary
Jess: (purposely) What you writing, Elliot?
Elliot: Something.
Jess: Can I see? Must be interesting!
Jess jumps up off the couch and runs over behind Elliot, who snaps his diary shut, making Jess giggle
Zak: Oh leave it, Jess.
Jess: Just having a look!
Elliot: Well don't!
Elliot stands up angrily and takes his diary into his bedroom, slamming his door shut. Jess bites her lip, half giggling
Jess: Picky!
Zak: (shaking his head at Jess) That isn't on, Jess, thats just sly.
Jess: It was a joke!
Zak: Nobody was laughing. Except you.
Jess: Since when have you been Mr Superhero?
Jess sat on the table and looked at Zak who shrugged
Zak: When have I started being this so called Mr Superhero?
Jess: When you saved Darren from being mugged and saying Elliot.
Zak: I'm special.
Jess: (nods) Yeah, you just keep on telling yourself that.
Craig is sitting on a bench outside Drive 'n' Buy when John Paul walks past
John Paul: (stops) Whats wrong now? Heard you bit Sarahs head off. (sits down) Why?
Craig: What does it have to do with you? Mr I Don't Care When People Ask About My Sex Life. Its like you like broadcasting when you and Spike do it!
Craig stands up and storms off. John Paul is also left shocked by Craig
--- Call me Lilium Author of Don't Say What You Don't Mean, Flirt and How Things Should Have Been #28 Craig <3 John-Paul club Current mood: BAD CRAIG!!
I'm liking this already! I like how it covers quite a few of the storylines! Great stuff, you should definately carry on!! Also you captured the mannerisms and the personalities of each character really well!
I don't believe that anybody feels the way I do about you now ♥ Hardcore McDeaner
I like how she's twigging on about this, yes that's right Sarah figure it out and dump Craig so he can be with JP and JP can get yummy Craig to himself!! I hope your sausage interview goes well =)!
I don't believe that anybody feels the way I do about you now ♥ Hardcore McDeaner
great just read throught and it sound great can't wait till ya do some more!
Current stories: do we have a future?[sequel to mind of a physco!] Pina colada's and eyeliner's, why is there so much drama? #2 kris hair rocks my socks club, #8 Mrs Mccarthy club, #10 of kris n jess 4eva club! Jaqui in the Mcqueens house!
woop woop yay for mcdean love go on sarah - dump his a*se so JP can have it (ooo did i really say that?)
--- Call me Lilium Author of Don't Say What You Don't Mean, Flirt and How Things Should Have Been #28 Craig <3 John-Paul club Current mood: BAD CRAIG!!
ooh,fabbylus Megan,are you sure it's not meant to be funny? it certainly made me laugh!
Forget Tom Jones,Marty is the real sex bomb! ♥ Me >>><<<Lissy.We are crazy together! ♥ BJ rox my stripy sox ♥ Yasmin is superwoman! ♥ [♥ Sunny brightens up the darkest of days.And she gets high with gabe... ♥ Mareeya is the definition of lush! ♥ Me,Bec,Justin and Zac are gonna have a joint hollywood wedding... ♥
Craig is making his way to the Barnes' house, when someone taps his shoulder.
Person: Craig, mate, don't do this.
Craig spun round to see John Paul standing there.
Craig: Don't do what?
John Paul: Don't end it with Sarah.
Craigs face fell.
Craig: But.. I should, I have to.
John Paul: Who said?
Craig shrugs and John Paul sighs, they sit down on a bench by the steps leading up to the flats. [B]
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[B] Sarah, Hannah and Nancy rushed round the corner. They just stopped at the Dog to see if Craig was there, Darren said he was out looking for Sarah. Now there was a mini search party going on.
Nancy: There he is!
They hid behind Mobs and watched how Craig and John Paul both reacted to eachother
Sarah: We're too far away from them to hear what their saying!
They casually moved forward and ran up the stairs, luckily not being noticed and listened at the top of the steps
Craig: I have to dump Sarah.
John Paul: But why do you?
Craig: Cos I have to...
John Paul: (shakes his head) That ain't a reason, Craig.
Craig: Fine. Cos I wanna be with you.
Sarah gasps.
John Paul: (rests his hand in Craigs) Alright, come to my place.
John Paul pulled Craig up and they began walking to the McQueen house, leaving Nancy, Hannah and Sarah in total shock
My new fic. If you haven't guessed... I can be SOOO thick at times... 
With love Emma xxx
