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The Secret Affair

This is my 1st fan fic and is set a month or so ago back to the dance off, but this has a twist that John-Paul and Craig are never caught kissing. As they embark on a secret affair they have many twists, turns and obstacles to over come before they can make their relationship public knowledge. This will include stringing both Sarah and Hannah along until the time is right for them to dump there in the dark partners and become a public Gay Couple.
There will be 10 – 15 Chapters at 1st, I will write more, but if people don’t like this then I’ll stop writing it.


Chapters:

Chapter 1: Behind The Poster
Chapter 2: Getting The Drinks In
Chapter 3: Hello Nancy/Goodbye Sarah
Chapter 4: Am Down With The Gay’s
Chapter 5: The Kiss
Chapter 6: The Drunken Walk Home
Chapter 7: Morning After Night Before
Chapter 8: Did We….Last Night Did I….
Chapter 9: Confide In Carmel or Maybe Nancy
Chapter 10: People Get Hurt
Chapter 11: Double Date
Chapter 12: Can This Work?
Chapter 13: The Kiss Round 2
Chapter 14: Get In The Wardrobe
Chapter 15: Explain This….
 
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Sounds Brilliant. When you going to post the first chapter?


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2nd Place- Best Unique Idea for A Story- I'll Be There To Catch You


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am in the middle of typing it up now, i wrote some notes whilst i was in ma nan's today.
 
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Chapter 1: Behind The Poster

Craig was crossing off days on his page 3 models calendar that Darren got him for Christmas. Then he reached today’s date Tuesday February 6th, Dance off day. This date had a massive circles around it, in all different colours, was today going to be a special day?

“Right need to get ready, make myself look sexy as ever” laughed Craig as he walked towards his tuxedo that was hanging from the curtain pole in his bedroom. Craig was stopped from getting to his tuxedo as he had felt a little tingle in his jean pocket, it was he phone, ‘One New Message Received’ the phone read. He flipped it open to see who it was from,

CRAIG WHERE ARE WE ALL MEETING? JP

Craig pressed reply and typed

IS NANCY STILL NOT COMING? WE COULD ALL MEET DOWNSTAIRS IN THE DOG, HAVE A FEW DRINKS BEFORE SETTING OFF COULD YOU TEXT SARAH AND HANNAH AND TELL THEM THE SAME CHEERS CRAIG


Craig pressed send and threw his phone onto his bed, as he did that it bounced off and onto a pile of dirty clothes that were on his bedroom floor, “I’ll get that when am finished getting ready” he mumbled to himself as he reached for his tuxedo.

*********15 – 20 Minutes later************

As Craig was tying his shoe laces he realised that his bow tie was missing.

“MUM, WHERE IS MY BOW TIE” Shouted Craig as he stood up looking around his not so tidy bedroom, scattered on the floor was mountains of dirty clothes ranging from single socks and boxers to stranded t-shirts and cardigans. There were endless cups and plates, alongside pieces of school work along with computer games and DVD’s.

“MUM” he shouted again as he pushed his mattress from his bed, creating yet more havoc and mess in his bedroom.
“It’s in you’re…..” Frankie stopped mid-sentence as she entered Craig’s bedroom. ”WHAT THE HELL HAS GONE ON IN HERE” Frankie shouted after taking a long look around Craig’s bedroom. ”Well” Craig started, “We were broken into last night and well they only got as far as my room” Craig said with a grin on his face knowing full well that his mum would not believe a word of it.
“So are the magic cleaning fairy’s coming to clean it up then” Said Frankie, not letting her son get the better of her.
Craig pulled a funny face at his mum.
“Thought not” smirked Frankie walking back towards the bedroom door, knowing full well that it would be up to her yet again to clean her youngest child’s bedroom.

“So then….” Said Craig “So then what” Frankie replied “Bow tie” Said Craig in a funny tone “Aw right, its in you’re wardrobe, I put it there a few days ago you left it in the living room” Replied Frankie as she walked out the door.

A look of shock came over Craig’s face, “Oh no she has been in the wardrobe” he whispered out to himself, “What if she” he mumbled

Craig quickly walked over to his wardrobe trampling on objects on the floor as he did so. He quickly opened the wardrobe doors. After having a quick look round the wardrobe he mumbled “Well it looks like she has not moved anything or touched anything”

“Right bow tie, where are you” he said laughing
As you started to do his tie up, Craig look around his room, more closely at the door to see if it was shut, and it was. He then pushed a few hangers to the side to reveal some random page 3 model’s poster that Craig had at the back of his wardrobe, he moved the top corners of the poster to reveal a photo of him and John-Paul, but this was not ordinary photo, this photo had a bold love heart shape around John-Paul’s head.

Craig kissed his fingers and touched John-Paul’s face on the picture and whispered “Tonight could be you’re lucky night John-Paul McQueen.

As Craig was doing this he failed to notice that so one had entered his bedroom.
 
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A no its quite short but its my 1st try at a fan fic, tell me what you guys think.
 
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i cant wait for get in the wordrobe lol just like kris n nathan! anyways it brill, i dnt normally read jp n craig fanfic i find they normally woffle on a bit but yours is good il readin urs lol


did i just use the word woffle?
 
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Oooo I want to know who has walked in the room now!!


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it's a good first chapter - told from a different angle - looking forward to more!


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2nd and 3rd parts will be up 2night
 
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Your fanfic sound brilliant!!

first chapter was ace and looking forward reading some more Smile
 
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woo! i'm loving it. but i don't have the internet at home so i'll have to read it on monday Mad
 
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Anymore chapter tonight? Big Grin
 
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Anymore chapters tonight? Smile
 
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Hey guys, sorry i got a PS3 on Fri and well u can guess why i aint been on here much lol, i have a 2hour lunch break tomorrow whilst am at college,ill start writing to night and try and post it 2morrow
 
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This sounds brilliant. Cant wait to read more.


Hollyfiction Awards:

2nd Place- Best Non McDean & Kress story- I'll Be There To Catch You

2nd Place- Best Unique Idea for A Story- I'll Be There To Catch You


My Fanfictions
I'll Be There To Catch YouSet Me Free
 
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Ooh I liked this so far; looks like it's ganna be good. Looking forward to reading more.


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plz do some more 2nite its awesome Big Grin
 
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