Ok this is mine n Lucys new fic.

I was sitting in the cab on a drive back to hollyoaks. Yeh I knew what I was doing. They had done me such wrong. They had abused me. I no I shouldnt have slept with him. He was her boyfriend but it was just as much his fault as mine. Why was she so horribel to me she forgave him, so why not me. And him. I thought he loved me. He treated me as badly as she did. So thid was why I was goin back to Hollyoaks. To get my revenge. To get my revenge on Zoe Carpenter and Kris Fisher

this is brill do more soon plz

Thankyou

I didn't exactly have the best start in life. Daddy spoiled me whenever I was good to his clients and that usually meant sitting on their knee and letting them touch me. Mother - Mother was a drunk. She hadn't had the courage to stand up to my dad so me and my mum lived in fear all our lives. I escaped lots of times. My father wanted me to go to st albans college but I went to halls. The place where I found Kris Fisher and Zoe carpnter. The taxi pulled up beside the house as I took a deep breath stepping out

Taxi man: £24.50 please love

I just shrugged and handed over £25. I told him to keep the change

Soon I was walking up the steps to halls taking deep breaths. I had never felt so nervous in my life. I knocked on the door. Zoe answered shocked and Kris came around and put his hands around her waist

Zoe: Oh My god!

I could not believe it. I thought It was a rumour. Turns out it wasn't - It was reality. Face-slapping Tear - Jerking reality

Fabby

I was in utter shock as a syaired at them. Kris and Zoe. I was trying to act calm when all i wanted to do was slap that smug look of Zoe's face because she knew what she'd done and how it would upset me. She new she'd do as good as kill me if she slept with the love of my life. I didnt know what to do. This is why I think I slapped her. I slapped her because she had spoiled my revenge plan. And then I had a brainwave. She was with Mike now. Well why couldnt I just tell mike. Ahh revenge is sweet.

This is really good.
Love it.
But I want them all to get along again !!
xxxx

I stared at the pair of them not knowing what to do. Should I tell Mike or should I make them grovel. I decided to make them govel. I saw Kris arms gently dropping from Zoe's waist. Well this was it

Kris: What are you doing here Jess?

Zoe bit her lip nervously. I could seee she was in no mood to talk

Jess: I decided to come back

Kris: Why?

Jess: I don't know I beginning to wish I hadn't

Kris: Well if you're back you better be coming in here

I stepped over the door not knowing what to say next. Let's Just say the first cut Is the deepest because I now know that I have been scarred for life - Because of them two

really good !
Please do more soon !!
xxx

Rach is doing the next part

More soon Rach please!!!
Heard your updating Lucy's Cherish The Moment fic!!!

This is really good you two!!
I'm confused though are Kris and Zoe together?
Please do more soon..x

Yes Caitlin Kris and Zoe are together
lol
where are you Rach?

I made up my mind id make them grovel it was more fun that way repaying them for all the pain theyd caused

Jess: Can I cum in
Zoe: Erm sure
Jess walked throught the door of the barnes flat and sat down
Jess: Wheres mike
Zoe: Erm away
Jess: And wheres ur kid
Zoe: Grace is at nursery
Kris: So what do you want Jess your not welcome here
Jess; Um lets see heres the deal you do everything I say and Mike doesnt find out
Zoe: What do you want
Jess: I want to stay here
Kris: Jess didnt you get a word I sed u aint welcome here anymore
Jess: To bad mikes just gonna have to find out then isnt he?

ahh fab twistthere Rach
I'll do da next part soon

Ahhh I love the name Grace!!!
How could Zoe cheat on Mike!!!
I hope Jess gets revenge!!!

I love it..x
Thats right Jess you get revenge on them!!
Zoe should know all about being cheated on so she deserves but Kris i'm just going to try and forget that Kris is part of this affair.
Please carry on soon..x

does anyone want my part tonight
if so say so

I do Lucy, love this fic.
It's awesome xx

Zoe stared at Jess. She wouldn't. Would she? By the way Jess was grining Zoe and Kris were in danger.

Zoe: You're evil

Jess: ME! Who's cheating on her hubby for chrissakes Zo!

Kris: Calm down Girls

Both: Stay out of it!

Kris slinked back

Zoe: Sorry Kris

Kris: It's alright Zo

Jess: You've got three hourse 250,000 and I'll keep quiet or Mike's being told. Which one is it going to be?

Way to get your own back Jess!!!
Where's Zoe goin to get the money from???
This fic is fab!!!
More soon please!!!
xoxoxox
(P.S. Go on msn Lucy if you have time!!! Im bored!!!)

Really good Girls...x
Jess is so evil in this but Zoe deserves it!!
Please carry on soon..x

Love this, more soon please!!

xxxx

Fab xx carry on

This is really good ~It's Lucy~ and LFCgirl91
Do more soon

Jess: Rite u got a choice u let me stay here or 250,000 quid or i tell mike whats it gonna be.
Kris: Please Jess dont do this
Jess: Ill do wot i wnt thnxs very much cn i remind u bout how u treated me
Zoe: Ok u can stay here 4 a bit if its ok wit mike

For some reason I love the mea, spoilt Jess!!!
What a way to get revenge!!!
I love this fic.!!!
More soon please!!!
xoxox