what a great fic...
more soon please!

hahahaha!!
loved it!!
especically they elliot bit-"it hurts my eyes"-still giggling

Nancy rummaged through Becca's old belongings she stopped still on a box that was far from familiar to her. She carefully opened it and was suprised to find a series of photo's of her and Justin which appeared to have been taken in a booth in town. She felt a slight rush of saddness and she saw the happiness in both their faces. He really loved her.. She thought He really loved my sister, and by the looks of it she really loved him She tenderly kissed the top image of her and Justin smiling cheesily and placed it followed by the remainding photo's back where they came from. She made her way into the kitchen and picked her mobile up from the microwave. She began to text Hey, do you want to come here before the hospital for a drink? xXx she scrolled through her phonebook, stopped on Justin and pressed send before she made her way over to the sofa.

haha thank god it was funny i would have been embaressed if my attempt at comedy failed. :P x

More Plz?! Is she gonna say something?!

Justin tapped gently on Nancys front door and his face lit up when it finally opened. She had no makeup on and looked like she was halfway through getting dressed but to him she was beautiful she was a work of art nomatter what state she was in. He kissed her cheek and pulled out a bouquet of flowers from behind his back "These are too replace the ones you stole from me last time" He joked and Nancy laughed slightly "Come in you idiot" she sighed and closed the door behind him. He followed her into her bedroom and sat down with her on her bed "What are we in here for?" he asked confused as to why they wern't in the living as usual. "Why'd you think?" she said seductivly and stared up and down at him with an eyebrow pointed. Justin let off an impressive grin and ran his hands down her body. She slid off his t shirt and pushed him down onto the bed. She sat on top of him but soon became frustrated as they were disturbed by a knock at the door. Justin quickly jumped up and put his t shirt back on as he watched her make her way over to it. She swung the door open angrily "What?!" she fell back into the wall at the sight of the person in front of her "Hello Nancy" A disturbing voice mumbled

justin!go save her!go!

Whos at the door!! Im intrigued!!

Nancy and Justin are very sweet bless them, (i used to hate justin so much before this fic. lol)

Yeah and Justin needs to go to her rescue and quick

is it Jake i need more!!!

"JAKE!" Nancy screamed and ran into the living room "I THOUGHT YOU'D BEEN SECTIONED" Jake barged in and slammed the door tight shut. Justin leant against the wall so he wasn't seen. "I have and that's why i'm here to teach you a lesson for being such a pathetic, spoilt brat, HE'S MY SON AND I'M GOING TO TAKE HIM FAR AWAY FROM YOU" He forced her violantly against the wall and grabbed her face painfully with his hand. He then gritted his teeth viciously infront of her face. Justin picked up a nearby vase and crept out of the bedroom behind him. Nancy subtly switched her eye contact to him and looked nervously at the item in his hand. He nodded at her nervously and stood angrily behind the man who filled his heart to the brim with hate "OI JAKE.. HE'S NOT YOUR SON" He shouted as he whacked the vase violantly around his head causing him to fall head first onto the ground. He took a step back terrified by his actions and looked at the lifeless figure infront of him. Nancy screamed, ran over to Justin and stood cowaring in his arms.

hope he dead

Jake! hate him...loved that tho lol

Oh I really do hate Jake, he well freaks me out. lol

Love it

Nancy got down on her knee's and checked for a pulse. She stopped still for several seconds and began to shake uncontrollably "He.. He" she stuttured "He's DEAD" she cried. Justin put both of his hands on his head and broke down in tears "WHAT HAVE I DONE?!" He shouted and slumped quivering with his head in his hands in the corner. Nancy slowly made her way over to him and sat with him. She leant her head against his shoulder and shook with fright. She couldn't bring herself to take her eyes off the man she'd once loved cold as ice, motionless infront of her.

thank god he's dead you did good justin

I am soo happy he is dead!! but what is going to happen! will nancy stay with him if hes in jail? will he go to jail? What are they going to do with the body?? im full of questions i need more!! hehe

Police gathered one by one outside the flat and Justin remained still in the corner "I'm a gonner" He cried and looked up at Nancy who stood on the opposite side of the room glaring at the lifeless body of Jake. "I don't know what to say.." She said quivering and both turned towards the door as 3 men in uniform barged their way in. The youngest of the men pulled out a walkytalky from his pocket and brought it too mouth "Alpha to Bravo, We've found our man, only dead.. there's two people in here with him Mrs Dean and a young gentleman, over" he said getting down on his knee's infront of Jake "Bravo to Alpha, find out as much as you can now, over" The voice replied and the policemen got on his feet and went over to them "Hi you two, could you possibly tell me what's happened here?" Justin looked at Nancy deeply with fear and raised his hand "It was me.. I killed him" He cried. Nancy looked at him eyes filled to the brin with tears "No Justin!" she shouted. The policemen looked at him and helped him onto his feet "Right you're going to have to come with us to the station" He pulled out some handcuffs from the side of his trousers and put them tightly around his wrists he then looked at Nancy "Mrs Dean, we'll need to see you sometime this week" He continued as he lead Justin waterlogged with tears out of the flat.

Love this!! But she better visit!! and he better get out soon! it was only really self defence kinda in a weird way!

A few days later..


Justin was sat cold and lonely in his cell. He looked up at police warden approaching him. "Mr Burton.. you have a visitor" She said firmly and quietly unlocked the gate. Justin stood up with relief and made his way down the corridor into the visiting room. He smiled weakly as he noticed Nancy sat on the other side of a glass window looking up at him. He took a seat and placed his hands on the table "Was beginning to think you wouldn't come" He mumbled and ran his hand through his hair. Nancy looked at him with confusion "I'm not going to give up on you, Not now not ever!" she replied gently. Justin felt a rush of reassurance and slid his hand up the glass "I'd do anything to hold your hand right now" He said slowly "I hate it here Nancy, I'm terrified" Nancy felt a rush of sympathy and hurt for him and pressed her head against the window "Nothing's going to happen to you, I'm going to get you out of here" He looked at her longingly "I love you, I love you so much don't ever doubt that" Nancy stared deeply into his eyes "I know you do and that's why i'm gonna do all i can to help, You tried to save me Justin and i love you more than i ever thought i could" Justin looked disheartendly at her "I'm going to go down, They know i killed him" he said in fear. Nancy slammed her hand down on the table "NO YOU'RE NOT, I WON'T LET THEM TAKE YOU FROM ME, YOU'RE GOING TO GET OUT OF HERE, YOU'RE GOING TO BE CHARLIES FATHER AND YOU'RE GOING TO LIVE YOUR LIFE LIKE YOU WANT IT, I'VE LOST SO MUCH JUSTIN, I'M NOT GOING TO LOSE YOU TOO, NOT NOW NOT EVER!"

This just gets better and better

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awwww
love it!!
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