Turning Point

Chapter One
Let's Start At The Very Begining


Clare Cunningum hasn't always been the vindictive, spitefull witch the residents of Hollyoaks think she is. Once apon a time, she used to be a sweet, kind, innocent girl, but then something happened, that would change her life forvever...

Clare ran up the garden path towards her grandfathers house. She couldn't wait to see him. He had been in hospital for three weeks, and that ment she hadn't been to his garden in ages. SHe rang the door bell three times, then a tall, cheery looking man answered the door. She jumped up for a hug.

Clare: Granda, Granda!
Granda: Hello there, princess! Long time, no see, eh!

Clare ran past her Granda into the living room. Her eyes lit up at what she saw. There was a massive pile of presents wrapped up in pink wrapping paper lying on the sofa. She looked up at her Granda in aw.

Clare: Granda, are these ALL for me!?!
Granda: Ofcourse they are, sweetheart! You only turn 7 once you know!

Clare had turned 7 the day after her granda had been taken to hospital. It had been the worst birthday ever. But she didn't want to think about it, or them. But, in the back of her head, Clare was always thinking about them. She didn't understand why they were so mean to her, but she knew one thing for sure. If it wasn't for her Granda, her life would not be worth living...

So, what do you think, should i continue? Please coment!

Does anyone think this is worth continuin?

Is anyone actually reading this???

i am continue please its really good x

just read it - it's a fab start -i'd def read more about not-yet-evil clare!

bumping back to the top, its fab as the rest of your fics are! your such a good writer!

continue please
*wonders to herself*
how come i never saw this one??

Just read it, brilliant, please keep it going x