i want you all to join in and contribute to this story.

jake was in his flat, laying on the sofa. nancy had left him and he had learnt that she and justin were going to get joint custody of charlie. jake cried silently. a knock on the door. jake wiped his tears and went over to the door and opened it. there was the one person he wanted to talk to most.

jake: nancy.
nancy: let me in. jake let nancy in, and she went into the bedroom. she took a suitcase out of the wardrobe and began packing.
jake: if you won't talk to me, i'll let you get on with it.
nancy: fine. go. jake left the flat, and went to the dog, where he found kris laughing. jake rounded on him. kris soon stopped laughing.
jake: what are you laughing at?
kris: a joke zak had just told me.
jake: liar. i know you were laughing at me.
kris: i'm sorry to hear you and nancy had broken up. it looks like she come to her senses.
jake nearly punched him, but then zak came to the rescue.

later that night, jake walked back to the flat. he put his keys in the lock. the door wouldn't open. nancy must've changed the locks. he knocked on the door, and someone opened it. nancy smiled as she looked at him.
jake: nancy, please. bear with me.
nancy: i changed the locks.
jake: nancy, please. i love you.
nancy: i don't love you. there's someone i'd like you to meet. nancy let jake in, and there stood a person that jake never expected to see...

do more

what i want you to do is this:

if someone ends their bit, i want you to carry the story on how u wud want the story between jake and nancy to go.

im not going to do more at the moment until someone else does something to contribute.

why:O

it hasnt bin done b4 has it? so it'll be brilliant wudnt it.

this has been done before, long back when the mcdean days were around, it was highly excessively long but tis been a while so go with it ice girl

this is interesting...but I'd be scared to carry on with it, but I do have ideas. It just looks so perfect and I don't want to ruin it XD

I'll carry on for you!


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Nancy turned round and saw jake staring at her. She pulled out a gun! BANG! She shot him, leaving Jake dead!
Nancy: Mwahahahahaha! I am evil!

just to say: x-x-x-GGG-x-x-x, that was so good. i will carry on now.

foz came out of nancy's bedroom, and russ came into the flat, and saw jake's dead body, and looked from him to nancy and the gun in her hand. he went to hold her, and she shoved him away. she went out of the flat and ran through the street, crying. she saw frankie outside mobs, and ran past her. frankie gave nancy a filthy look as nancy ran to the su bar.
foz: nancy! NANCY!
nancy: leave me alone
foz: you shot him.
nancy: i know. i've become a killer - i've ruined someone's life because they ruined mine.
foz: and...
nancy: i have became what justin became when becca broke up with him.
foz: it's not so bad. jake was psycho. you're rid of him. nancy ran out of foz's sight and out of the village. but then, she tripped up, and she struggled to get up. but what she saw next terrified her...

I'll give this a go.

A tall woman with short blonde hair stood before her.

Nancy: Becca?

The woman walks forward.

Nancy: who are you? Please stop, you're scaring me...

The woman disappears right in front of her, leaving her alone, gazing around at her surroundings. She was near the woods.

A strange male voice: Nancy. Don't be afraid. I'll save you.'

A handkerchief was held over her nose and mouth. The last thing she noticed before falling unconcious was the smell of chloroform.

Nancy wakes up in hospital a few days later. Her vision of the blonde woman scared her. As she thought, the blonde woman walked into the room.
woman: don't be afraid. you did the right thing. you're safe.
nancy: who are you?
woman: just a vision. i've been watching over you for over a year now.
nancy: becca?
the woman nodded. nancy smiled.
becca: sorry about jake. i'm just so happy you're taking good care of charlie. how is he?
nancy: i don't know. i've been here. how is it in heaven?
becca: better than i thought. i'm with dad, aren't i?
nancy: oh yes.
becca disappeared into thin air, and nancy could once again smell chloroform and she slipped out of consciousness...

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*hey, see how good it is when you all join in?*

quote:

Originally posted by x-x-x-GGG-x-x-x:
I'll carry on for you!


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Nancy turned round and saw jake staring at her. She pulled out a gun! BANG! She shot him, leaving Jake dead!
Nancy: Mwahahahahaha! I am evil!

LMFAO! Gaby!

quote:

Originally posted by x-x-x-GGG-x-x-x:
I'll carry on for you!


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Nancy turned round and saw jake staring at her. She pulled out a gun! BANG! She shot him, leaving Jake dead!
Nancy: Mwahahahahaha! I am evil!

OMG Gaby!

i swear that mouth and nose thing making peeps knocked out is from Torchwood