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OMG ive just had to join the forum to tell you how gr8 the story is keep writtin coz im hooked!!
 
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Morning...I need more please!


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OMG ive just had to join the forum to tell you how gr8 the story is keep writtin coz im hooked!!
wow that's a good compliment.

so I'll write some more Big Grin
 
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Here you go Big Grin It all came out in a bit of a rush so it may not be that good. but I hope you like it anyway Big Grin

Part 32

Just as he was exiting the block of flats, he saw Mark’s car turn around the corner. He had to duck behind a wall to avoid being seen. John Paul was in the front seat with him, seemingly engrossed in what Mark was saying to him. His only option was to make a dash for it while they were parking. He couldn’t go the way he had come; they were both sure to spot him. So he ran in the opposite direction, without a clue where he was going. He ended up getting a taxi back to the Dog. He paid the taxi and ran straight back up to his room, not wanting anyone to see what he had tucked under his arm.
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Mark was anxious to get up to the flat because a woman stopped him in the corridor saying someone had asked where it was. John Paul wasn’t worried, so someone had a delivery or something? It wasn’t a big deal. Mark seemed to think it was though and he hurtled up the stairs three at a time. John Paul followed as fast as he could but Mark could have been an Olympic runner at the speed he was going.
When they finally got there, John Paul was dumbstruck at the scene before him. The flat was a complete tip, all the drawers had been taken out and tipped onto the floor, everything had been overturned and there were smashed ornaments everywhere. John Paul was standing with no idea what to do but Mark seemed unfazed by the general mess in his lounge. Instead he went straight into the bedroom, lifted up one of the floorboards and gave a frustrated yell upon discovering that the small compartment was empty. John Paul could only assume that he had something valuable under there that had been stolen.
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Mark was fuming. He knew exactly who had done this. Who else had motive to steal some worthless paintings? Plus he had been looking for one flat in particular. Yes, it was John Paul’s meddling friend Craig who had done this.
“What did they take?” Asked his boyfriend, sounding genuinely concerned.
“Erm…, just some family heirloom.” Mark lied. “Not valuable but it’s still precious to me.”
John Paul put his arm around Mark and led him into the lounge.
“I’ll make you a drink, and then we can clear up, yeah?” Whispered John Paul, sounding as comforting as possible.
He was just going to shut the front door when something on the floor caught his eye.
“Mark! Whoever broke in left their debit card behind! They must have used it to open the door!”
Mark leapt to his feet and joined John Paul who was staring incredulously at the name on the card.

MR CRAIG DEAN
 
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ah no poor craig izzy please don't hurt him


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ah no poor craig izzy please don't hurt him
That's not up to me, it's up to Mark Razz lol
 
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lol you meanie


I ♥ movies & getting caught in the rain, just hold back on the pina colada Big Grin
There's nothing more sexy than a time travelling glasses wearing time lord Wink lol

There's nothing that can't be solved with a little rock salt, a gun and Sam & Dean, oh yeah! Wink
Fanatical about Torchwood & Jack/Ianto-because stopwatches can be VERY fun!
 
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Oh no...thats terrible! I hope JP see's sence!!


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NOOOOOOOO

Craig may be a fool but please dont hurt him!


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tee hee Big Grin
 
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yeah that was great whats mark gonna do??


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im so loving this keep writting plssss
 
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Many sincere apologies, but I'm going on holiday so there won't be anymore till next tuesday

sowweeeee.

Well, it depends if they have computers in romania.
 
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write some now then


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Many sincere apologies, but I'm going on holiday so there won't be anymore till next tuesday

sowweeeee.

Well, it depends if they have computers in romania.


Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh you can't go!!!


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oh fine I will write some now.
 
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You are an Angel


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Mwah ha ha Devil

Part 33

How could Craig do this? Steal from the man he loved just because John Paul chose him over Mark.
“I’ve got to go and talk to him” Murmured John Paul and walked slowly towards the door.
“NO! I…erm...I want to talk to him first. After all, it was me who he stole from.” He couldn’t let John Paul see him first. Craig would show him the paintings and their relationship would be over. He needed to prevent that if it was the last thing he ever did. He and John Paul would be together. Forever.
“Ok, you talk to him. I suppose you would want to have it out with him. Maybe you can get your family heirloom back”
“Something like that.” Whispered Mark to himself. Before exiting the flat, he picked up a parcel that had just arrived in the mail. This might come in handy for dealing with Craig.
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Craig was once again looking through his stash of stolen paintings. If John Paul ever saw these, he would have to believe him. Then he heard a crash downstairs. He hid the paintings under his bed and ran down the stairs three at a time. He was hoping that it wouldn’t be what he suspected, but unfortunately he was proved right. Mark was downstairs, clearly angrier than he had ever been in his life, holding a small brown parcel. Craig watched from behind the door, scared out of his wits. Mark was slowly opening the parcel and to Craig’s horror, he saw it was a gun. He gasped, alerting Mark to his presence.
“Oh, so little Craigy is here! Come out, I’ve got a surprise for you!”
Upon, hearing this, Craig ran upstairs as fast as he could, Mark hot on his heels. Craig then realized how stupid he had been. Not only had he led Mark straight to the paintings, he had also trapped himself in his room with no way out, Mark standing in the doorway, the gun pointing straight at Craig’s head. Mark’s hand was perfectly steady.
“Now, hand over the paintings and there’s no need for me to kill you.”

And on than nice little cliffhanger, I'm off on holiday Devil
 
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Ahhhhhhhhhhh I hope it rains all your holiday!!

Only joking, have a good one and I look forward to more on your return!


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Eek NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO Don't kill him. Frown
bad mark bad!
hope you have a nice holiday. Smile
can't wait for the next bit.
 
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that's not funny, don't let him kill craig
Please write more when u get back

the name's lucy


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Missing you craig
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Chris you will always be a winner to me.
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u should make jp come just in tyme but mark explains and jp believes him leaving craig puzzled,angry and confused


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NOOOOOOOOOOOOO



hooooooow could you :K


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he wont kill him. JP would realise that it was mark who shot craig if he did, and mark doesnt want that to happen.

i HATE mark. ugh!
 
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