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Natalie's POV

Sat on the sofa was hell. It wasn’t uncomfy or anything, but to have Kris and Gaby all cuddled up while Justin was out doing god knows what with that little tart made me want to puke. I suddenly remembered my conversation with Gaby. About Becky.
“Gaby. Can I talk to you? Alone?” I asked, getting up.
“Uhh, okay” she said confused, and started fidgeting to get up
“Don’t worry, ill go.” Kris interrupted, and he walked down to his room. I waited until I saw him shut his door.
“Gaby, you cant say anything to Lorna about what I told you. About Becky.”
“Wha…? But I’m her friend”
“And so am I, and I wasn’t supposed to tell anyone. Please Gaby. Promise me.” I begged
“Okay, I promise” she shrugged, and looked back at the tv, and I went to Kris’ room.
“You busy tonight?” I sat on the end of his bed, he was leaning against the wall, with his pillow behind his back, reading a magazine
“Well that depends what you had in mind?” he asked
“Drinks? What else?!” I joked. He sat for a while, thinking. I assumed he was joking
“I think I’ll pass. Stay in with Gaby” I smiled. I got it
“Okay” I chirped, and quickly left the room. I then went into Elliot’s room.
“Hey Elliot, do you fancy grabbing some drinks?”
“Best not. I lost a whole night of alien tracking yesterday, I don’t think I could afford two in a row. Sorry”
“Don’t worry about it” I smiled
I decided to go to drive n buy to get some more milk. How much do we get through a day? I walk inside and there’s a pretty blonde girl behind the till, talking to some guy. I grab some milk and a magazine, and put them on the counter, and sighed deeply, before grabbing a huge bar of galaxy.
“Things that bad, huh?” the girl asked
“Could say that.” I answered
“Guy trouble?” she asked
“Yeah”
“Always is”
“Hey!” the guy said
“What? Its true!” she argued back
“Why do I bother, eh?” he rolled his eyes. He knew she was joking.
“Listen, I know I’ve only just met you, but you don’t fancy a drink in the loft later. I assure you I’m not a mass murderer or anything!” I asked. She thought for a while
“Yeah….why not. Loft? 7?” she asked
“Yeah, great” I smiled, picked up my stuff, and left. When I got to Evissa, I realised I hadn’t got her name, and she hadn’t got mine.

*Back At Drive N Buy*
“Great stuff babe. Your ditching me for a stranger tonight, what can I do?”
“Hang out with Justin?”
“Can’t. He’s got this new girl hasn’t he?”
“Awwww. Sorry babe” she hugged him. “Come with us?” she asked
“And be stuck in the corner? 3rd wheel? Not a chance”
“Fine. Be that way” she joked, and walked back behind the till

*7 at the loft*

“Hey” the girl said
“Hi!”I smiled
“Allright?” the guy moaned
“I realised, we never introduced ourselves!” I laughed
“I know!” she laughed as well
“Hey look. It’s Darren. DARREN!” he called, and ran off
“Well….that was Danny.(she rolled her eyes) I’m Hannah” she smiled
“Natalie”
“shall we?
“of course”
We entered the club, and we sat on a sofa, having some drinks, and then some more! It was “Louise’s” night in charge, and she wanted a karaoke. Karaoke? In a club? Hannah seemed to be thinking the same as me. Looking around the club, I thought I saw Justin at the bar. I did. And he was with Katy still. And he’d changed. So had she. I couldn’t believe it. The other day he was calling me his girlfriend, and now it’s like I don’t exist! I quickly finished my drink, and asked Hannah if she wanted another, before going up to the bar to order some. I stood almost next to Justin. There was person between us, and when they moved, he saw me.
“Babe. Where have you been?” he asked, putting his arm around my waist. I shook him off, and faced them
“I went home, then I met Hannah, so we thought we’d have a drink” I pretended to just notice Katy. “Oh, Kayleigh, right?”
“Katy” she corrected
“Yeah. So anyway, Hannah’s waiting” I picked up our drinks, and walked over to Hannah. When I got back, I turned around to see Justin was laughing with Katy again
“I don’t believe it!” I fumed
“What?” Hannah asked confused
“Nothing…..don’t worry”
Someone finished on the karaoke, so, without knowing what I was doing, I grabbed the mic. What was I doing? I had no idea, but I thought I’d show him what he was missing…..what I was feeling…..

“Yesterday I spotted you
Hanging out with someone new
Come on dude, I can't believe who”

Katy pointed to me, and he looked at me

“Did it hurt? Oh yes it hurt
But not as much as I thought it would
Guess it's time for me to move on”

He looked confused

“I'm getting closer”
Closer to closure
Everyday's closer
Closer to closure”

Hannah looked confused as well

“I finally took your pictures down
And all that other stuff I found
Hidden somewhere in my closet
I used to wear your shirt to bed
But now it's in the trash instead
I don't want to be reminded. Oh no”

I smiled. I felt better already

“I'm getting closer
Closer to closure
Everyday's closer
Closer to closure

I saw you today taking my breath away
But then you opened your mouth without thinking
And then I recalled why I ended it all
And it makes me feel good about leaving…..leaving

I'm getting closer
Closer to closure
Everyday's closer
Closer to closure”

I threw the mic on the floor, and left the club. Hannah ran after me, and so did Justin.
“Natalie! Wait!” she called, but Justin ran passed her
“Hey hey hey!” he held my shoulder to stop me moving
“What?” I asked
“What the hell was that all about?” he asked
“I was doing karaoke” I said sarcastically, and tried to carry on walking. Katy was now outside, running over to us, Hannah was as well.
“What is wrong with you?” he asked. Katy & Hannah had joined us
“Nothing! Carry on your drink with Kaydee”
“It’s Katy” she corrected again, a little more angrily
“Is something going on?” Hannah asked, clearly confused, before turning to Katy. “I didn’t know you were back”
“Neither did I really” Katy answered. Hannah looked even more confused. “It’s a long story”
“Nothing’s going on. Not anymore. Bye Justin” I walked away from him
“Natalie! Natalie?! NATALIE!” he called, before turning around and heading back into the club, putting his arm around Katy’s waist, while Hannah, looking slightly lost, went home.

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Lorna's POV

My head was spinning. I felt sick. My Feet were in agony but I didn't care. I had no one to talk too. I had never felt so alone. Alyson wouldn't talk to me or anyone else she had locked herself in the room with Becky. She couldn't and wouldn't except it. I couldn't stay in the hospital anymore. I couldn't think of anything else. All I could see was the tiny little body lying there. Completely Still. I didn't care about anything any more. Alyson has lost so many people and now when she needed me she wouldn't let me be there for her but thats my fault not Natalie's. My head was filled with ifs and buts. If I hadn't gone to the loft. But I thought she was fine. I had soo many questions but no one to answer them. I had no idea of anything. The time. Where I was. But I didn't care. I only wanted Becky back but nothing, no one could bring her back. I wanted to go back to the halls but there would be too many questions I didn't want to answer. I was soo tired but I couldn't sleep. I couldn't do anything. I needed someone. Anyone. Just to be there for me.

..: Lorna?

My head jerked up. Someone. It was Elliot. Staring at the stars. My mum used to say I lived up there constantly day dreaming away not living in the real world but that changed. After they died I had to grow up.

L: Elliot ...

I couldn't hold it in anymore i had to let it all out. The Full story i hadn't told anyone. I knew i could trust him. I knew he would listen. I felt safe for a change. With his arms wrapped around me. He just listened. No questions. We must have sat there for hours. Me talking him listening. He said i had to come home. Face Everyone. Explain. They were my friends and they would understand but some how i didn't feel that way. I didn't want to get to know them i didn't want to get close to them. I knew what would happen. Same as the others. The Common Link is Me.

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Gaby's POV

“Oh come on Kris! You have got to be kidding me!” I huff. He still wasn’t out of the bathroom, and I’ve been near to exploding for the last 10 minutes.
“Hang On!” He yelled, again! I hopped back through to my room. I was expected at the fracture clinic in an hour, no way was that happening. As soon as I sit on my bed, the bathroom door opens. Typical!
“Bathroom’s free.” He shouts.
“Don’t say that! Now everyone will rush in!” I shout back. I hear the door close.
“Too late, Natalie’s in there.” Kris laughs.
“No! NO! NOO!” I scream. I feel like crying. I’m going to wet myself any second now. Kris pops his head around my door.
“Why did you come back in here if you were that desperate?” He asked.
“Because, if I stayed stood up, I would’ve wet myself!!” I yelled, crossing my legs.
“Oh well, she wont be long.” He tried convincing me.
“Excuse me; this is Natalie we’re on about. She’s worse than you!” I sigh. He just laughed and walked out. I swear, I could actually kill him sometimes.


After I’ve, finally, been in the bathroom, I prepare for my boring appointment. I don’t want a cast and I definitely don’t want them poking at it with their weird metal instruments. I change into some baggy jeans (as I don’t know if I’ll be able to get skinny jeans off, once the cast is on) and a nice light green top. Shoes… Why do I always lose my shoes?
“Kris, where are they?!” I shout. I’m sure he’ll either have them, or know.
“What?” He asked.
“My beige boots!”
“You can’t wear boots.”
“I can wear Boot.” I reply, putting extra emphasis on the T.
“I really don’t know, anyway.” He replied, walking through to my room.
“Oh, boo! I don’t have any good shoes.” I huff. I’m meant to be at the hospital in 10 minutes, and it’s 20 minutes away by bus! I’m soo late. Kris shuffled around in my wardrobe.
“Here, stick these on. We’re late.” He threw me some old trainers.
“Ok, you’re kidding right? I can’t wear these! And what do you mean we’re late?” I ask.
“You’re wearing them and I’m coming too.” He replied, walking out of my room. Grrr! I hate how he can do that.

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4 hours later

The casts on. Although I had to suffer pain for it. I don’t see why they make it hurt so much. Why can’t a bone brake, but feel painless? It would be a hell of a lot easier! I hobble through the front door, alone as Kris abandoned me to go to the dog. Everyone should be at lectures now. If it really is 1:30. I don’t actually know. I’m sure time completely slowed down while we were there. It feels like it should be midnight by now. Lorna’s sat at the kitchen table. I haven’t seen her in 2 days! It’s quite strange to see her there again. I hear her sniff.
“Lorna?! What’s up?” I ask hopping over to her. She wipes her eyes then looks at me.
“Hey. Oh no, what happened to your foot?” She asked.
“I broke my ankle the other night. Bit sill actually. Was very drunk.” I tell her, smiling. She’s still crying. I give her a hug.
“What’s happened?” I ask her. She stands up.
“I don’t want to talk about it.” She replies, quietly.
“Ok.”
She begins walking away but then stops.
“Why do bad things happen to good people?” She asked.
“What?” I ask. She turns around. She’s crying even more now.
“I’ve L-lost everyone. M-my Mum, D-d-dad… And now B-becky. My s-sister won’t even talk to me. Everything g-going wr-wrong!” She began crying heavily and ran into her room. I don’t know what to do. Follow her, or leave her.
What should I do???

I decide I should follow her. I hear her sobbing in her room. I knock, but she doesn’t answer, so I just walk in. She’s sat in a ball on her bed, crying. I go over and hug her.
“It’s ok.” I tell her. “It’ll get easier.”
“How do you know this?! I thought she was getting better and she just… Slipped away.” She cried.
“I know, ok.” I tell her.
“How?” She asks.
“Because I’ve been through the same kind of situation.” I say. She pulls away, looking confused. I can’t tell her now. Or should I? I don’t know.
“What do you mean? A child you knew had leukaemia?” She asked.
“No.”
“Then how is this anything like your situation?!” She shouts.
“I guess it’s not. Yours is so much worse. But still… I know what it’s like to lose someone from Cancer!” I try calming her down. She looks at me.
“Who?” She sounds sympathetic.
“My Dad.” I look away. She hugs me.
“I’m sorry, I didn’t know.” She cries.
“Why are you sorry? I didn’t tell you, you have nothing to apologise for.” I tell her, she smiles. “Anyway, yours is so much worse. I’m so sorry.” I hug her.
“I’m fine about my parents now, it was 2 years ago, but B-becky was just a baby.” She cries.
“Hey, it’s ok.” I hug her as she sobs into my shoulder.
“I’m sorry. I just… It’s so hard.” She said, pulling away. “How old were you when your Dad-” She didn’t finish the sentence. I’m glad she didn’t because I hate the word.
“I was 12.”
“Oh my God!” She cries. “That’s so much worse.”
“No it’s not.” I tell her.
“I guess…”
“I knew my Dad was dying… You didn’t know about your parents and Becky.” I tell her. She cried again.
“Yeah. First a stupid car accident and now leukaemia. My life just keeps getting worse!”
“It’ll get better. I promise.”
“Don’t say that word!”
“What?”
“Natalie promised me she’d be ok. That’s the only reason I came out. But she lied. So don’t you dare promise me anything you don’t know for certain!” She yelled. She ran out of the room and I heard the flat door slam shut. Wow, this really is going to be a bad day.
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I came back to the flat from lectures, and threw my stuff down, and I saw Gaby leave Lorna’s room. She looked upset
“Gaby?” I asked
“Leave it” she went into her room. I don’t understand. I knock on Lorna’s door.
“Lorna?” I opened the door, to see Lorna sat on her bed, looking blankly at her phone screen, crying.
“Lorna?” I repeat
“She’s gone” she looked at me. I couldn’t believe it
“You mean-?”
“Yeah……” I felt a tear run down my cheek
“Lorna I’m so sorry” I wanted to hug her, but I wasn’t sure if she wanted me to. “is there anything I can-”
“I just want to be on my own”
“Okay” I whispered. I don’t even know if she heard me.
I felt so guilty. I tried everything to take my mind of it. But I couldn’t. there was nothing. Everything I saw, somehow reminded me of Lorna, which made me think of Becky. I had to get out. I grabbed my coat and ran out of the door. I ran out of halls and into the village, straight into Justin outside drive n buy. It must have been obvious I was crying
“Are you okay? What’s wrong?” he asked
“Fine” I wiped my eyes
“What’s wrong?” he asked
“It’s none of your business” I tried to push past him
“Where has all this come from?” he asked
“Katy. One minute were going great. The next, its like I don’t exist! (Katy comes out of drive n buy “they didn’t have cherry, so I got you diet cherry. Oh, “hi”) And here’s your little homing device now!” I shouted
“What’s going on?” she asked
“As soon as she turns up, you ditched me.” I was crying again. But not for Justin.
“So you think I’ve chosen her over you?” he asked
“I don’t care anymore” I sobbed
“Are you alright Natalie?” Hannah asked, leaving drive n buy
“Yeah. I was just going home” I answered, and Hannah, not looking convinced went back inside
“You not what Natalie? I don’t care. Your right. Nothings going on” he got Katy’s and started walking away
“Becky died” I blurted out, crying harder. He turned around and looked at me, and came closer
“What?”
“You heard.”
“Oh my god…..how’s Lorna?” he asked. I couldn’t believe it. He doesn’t care about my feelings. But anyone else’s? I could see the reason. Lorna’s niece is gone, and Charlie’s got the same thing. But what about me? We were so close no-one could hear us.
“She’s in bits. It’s a shame. Bad things happen to good people. It’s a shame it wasn’t Charlie” I hissed. I couldn’t believe I’d just said that. I was about to apologize repeatedly, but then next thing I’m lying on the floor
“JUSTIN!” Katy screamed
“Oh my god…Natalie?! Are you okay?” I heard Hannah shout, running out of drive n buy, I held the side of my face, and the other side of my head. I slowly got up. Katy was holding onto Justin’s arm
“You bitch” he said bluntly
“Do you really think I meant it?” I quickly hurried back to halls. I wanted to cry again. What have I started?

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Lorna's POV
I wish people would stop promising. They didn't know what was going to happen. No one did. All i could hear in my head was that heart machine. All its beeps getting longer and longer and then that final one. Alyson was still at the hospital she hadn't went home. I wasn't sure what she wanted to do. She still wouldn't talk. Becky's body has been removed from the room but Alyson is still sat there looking at the incubater cot. I stood at the window watching her was the closest i could get. We needed each other. I needed to talk to her. We got through our parents death together and we needed to be together now too. I was going to talk to her. I opened the door and walked thourgh.

A: I can't do it Lorney .. I can't plan my baby's funeral.

I couldn't say anything. I wouldn't make fake promises. I just held her and let her cry. Alyson talked for hours about Becky's Funeral. Making desicions. We were going to bury her back home. Alyson was moving back. She wanted me to go too. I don't think i could but i couldn't tell her. Becky's funeral was in 3 days,Friday. Alyson was going back down tomorrow. I would go down on thursday bringing her things. She said it was my choice whether to move or not. I had made my choice but i couldn't say it. Alyson also said i could bring a friend. Just one. She wanted it to be a small ceremony. Alyson said she wanted out the hospital but not to go home. I said she could come to halls and stay tonight but i would terrified someone would say something. Our walk back through to halls was nice we talked and talked just like old times. I even had a laugh as Alyson kept moaning about the stairs. I was used to them now. I couldn't find my key. Alyson said it was typical. I hadn't heard her laugh in ages. Made me smile. We began chapping. I felt horrible because it was only Gaby who was in and she would've to hobble over to open the door. We could here her coming.

G: Aw .... Aw ....... Aw ..... Aww

The door opened.

G: Hey

She smiled. I think she was happy to see me. I felt horrible after shouting at her earlier but i didn't want to apologize just now when Alyson was there.

L: Hey (smiles) This is Alyson
A: Hi
G: Hi i'm Gaby
L: Do we have any milkshake?

Gaby was laughing at the mention of milkshake for obvious reasons. Alyson looked totally confused she must've thought Gaby was a complete weirdo.

G: Want to hear something that'll make you laugh?
L: Don't!

Gaby sat there explaining every detail of the milkshake/ Dr Who incident. I hadn't seen Alyson laugh so much in ages. It didn't bother me that she was laughing at me. I was just so pleased to see her smile again.

L: Where is Elliot?
G: In his room
L: Cool.

I stood up and walked towards his room there was something i wanted to ask him. In the backround i could hear Alyson grilling Gaby on who Elliot was. Typical Alyson. I peeked my head round Elliots door.

L: Hey
E: Hi
L: Can you come to Becky's funeral with me? Please
E: Sure
L: Thanks. We are going down on thursday.
E: Ok

He stood up and hugged me. It felt right. I could hear someone coming along the corridor but i didn't care. Alyson stuck her head round the door. I knew what she was doing. Spying on me. Made me smile.

A: Oh ... Sorry
L: Bye

I let go of Elliot. He smiled.

L: Talk to you later?
E: Yeah

He smiled.

As i walked back up the corridor behind Alyson. Gaby began to sing.

Lorna and Elliot
Up A tree
Looking out to find ET

I couldn't help but laugh. The song didn't even bother me. I did like Elliot. One of the reasons i didn't want to move but I couldn't tell Alyson. Alyson was in fits lying on the couch. I loved seeing her like this.

G: You soo Do
A: Shes right

I just smiled. I wasn't going to lie.

G: You Do!

Gaby began laughing. She laughs a lot.

G: What were you doing in his room?

She asked curiously still laughing.

L: Talking
A: And Hugging and ....
L: That was it!
A: Don't believe you
G: Neither do i
L: Well its true
G: Hmmm .....
L: Elliot!
G: Is she really going to do that?
A: Looks like it!

Elliot came out of his room. Smiling. I'm sure he had been listening to the conversation.

E: What
L: Sure i hugged you in your room?
E: Yeah Why?
L: No reason

I sat down and smiled smugly at Alyson and Gaby. They were laughing at me.

E: Why does it matter if we hugged?
L: I don't know

I was soo sure he'd heard that conversation cause he was smiling as he said it.

E: Ok

He laughed and walked back down into his room.

L: See!
A: So you've only every hugged him?
L: Yes
G: No
L: Huh?
G: You nearly kissed him!
L: When?
G: When you were at the loft when you were drunk
L: Oh .. Yeah

Fingers crossed Gaby doesn't say anymore. The reason that Kiss never happened was because of the phone calls because of Becky.

G: Then you ran out

By the look on Gaby's face she had just realised what she had brought up.

A: Why did you run out?

The door slammed. Natalie ran passed us all. Mascara everywhere. Crying. It looked as if someone had hit her!
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“Natalie!” Lorna shouted. I turned around and saw her running to her room crying. She had a really red cheek that was becoming a purple colour. Me and Lorna both stood up.
“Hang on one second Alyson.” Lorna told her, before we both ran down to Natalie’s room. We went to walk straight in, but she’s locked the door.
“Natalie! Open the door!” I shout. Me and Lorna both bang on it.
“Go away!” She cries.
“Open the door!” We shout. We hear her getting up from her bed and the door clicks. We walk in.
“Oh my god! What happened?” Lorna asks giving her a hug.
“Who did this to you?!” I shout. One side of her face is completely purple.
“No one.” She replies, quietly.
“Natalie! Tell us.” I reply, sitting next to her on the bed. She can’t stop crying and just hugs her pillow. I look at Lorna. Neither of us knows what to do. We can’t leave her, but we don’t know if we should stay with her. She carries on crying. We both hug her but she doesn’t stop.
“Come on Natalie, tell us…” Lorna whispers. Natalie looks at her.
“Why should I tell you? You still hate me!” She screamed.
“I don’t hate you…” Lorna told her.
“Don’t lie to yourself.” Natalie cried. I feel like crying now, even though I’m not even part of this.
“I don’t hate you, Natalie!” Lorna said, grabbing her hand.
“Not what you said the other day.” She sniffed.
“Yeah, well I was upset then.” Loonz smiled at Natalie and Natalie smiled back.
“Natalie, who did this to you?” I asked her. She seems a lot more relaxed now.
“I c-can’t say.” She replied. Me and Lorna looked at her confused.
“Why not?” Lorna asked, sweetly.
“Because it was my fault. I’m an idiot. I didn’t mean it.” She cried. I hugged her.
“Hey, hey, hey… What’s happened?” I asked.
“I s-said I wish it was Charlie and n-not Becky.” She cried. Lorna looked away. I didn’t know what to do.
“So who hit you?” Lorna asked, bluntly.
“Lorna!” I reply, shocked. She doesn’t seem bothered now.
“Justin did.” Natalie cried.
“Justin did this?!” I shout.
She nodded slowly. I stood up.
“Where are you going?!” She asks.
“To have words.” I reply.
“Please don’t.”
“Natalie?! He hit you!” I scream. Just at that moment Kris walks into the room.
“Just thought I’d remind you that Zoe and Zak are back today-” He began. “Natalie? What happened?” He asked walking over to her.
“Justin happened!” I shout.
“Justin did this?!” He asked.
“Yeah he did.” I reply. Natalie looks at me.
“I’ll see you later girlies.” Kris says, walking out of the room.
“What did you go and do that for?!” Natalie shouts.
“What?” I asked.
“Now he’s going to talk to him.” She began crying again. I could tell she’s scared. What do I do? How can I stop Kris now?