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Fourth Page! Big Grin
 
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Yeah, urr funny that... Especially as i only wrote 3 parts on the last page!!!! NO MORE TALKING UNLESS ITS ABOUT FIC!!! USE LORNAS OLD ONE FOR COVOS!
 
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lol!
Please do more soon!!!!!


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Helloooo! Just do a small part now.

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Mercedes sat with her head in her eyes. She couldn't believe it, Amnesia? A whole year that she doesn't remember. Russ, what about Russ? She still hadn't seen Carmel. She kept having a dream replay over and over in her head.

Mercedes: No, no, no! PLEASE!

Nurse: I'm sorry Mercedes. She had an infection.

Mercedes: When did it happen?

Nurse: 10 minutes ago. Please take a seat through here and we'll speak.

Mercedes: But she's dead! He killed her! Carmel's gone and its his fault!


Each time she thought about this a shivver went down her spine. Was this a flashback or just a dream?
 
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Aww Poor Mercy!! I don't like her but in this fic i feel sorry for her!
 
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Lol. i dont really like her either. but she's in my fic and i cant just abandon her! Lol.
 
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More!!
 
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hang on. i'm at my cousins now. i still have french work too. I'll try tonight but might not be till tomorrow! Big Grin
 
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O...K Frown hehe!
 
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awwww!!!

hope you do more soon!!


Steph and Max forever!! <3
 
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Hellooo once again! Ok, more up in probebly half an hour, maube less... i dunno, but i'm writing it on this so DO NOT DISTURB!
 
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Steph: OB? You ok?

OB was starring into space. Horrific images were playing in his mind. Him and Steph, the first gunshot, Darren yelling, the second gunshot, his death bed, the fit...

Steph: OB!

OB jerked. She'd hit him, not hard, on the arm.

OB: Sorry. Just a little bit...

Steph: What?

OB: Well, traumatised!

Steph: Aren't we all?

She sits back and a few tears trickle down her face. How could he think she wasn't traumatised? Watching her boyfriend almost kill the man she loved!

OB: Steph, I'm sorry.

Steph: Leave it OB.

OB: Steph...

Steph: Just leave it!

She stood up and got her bag and coat. She walked over to OB and gave him a kiss.

OB: Where are you-?

Steph: I just need to... I just cant be here right now. I'll be back later tonight, maybe tomorrow. Love you.

She walked out of the hospital room, leaving OB in the silence that he hated, the silence that would soon be taken over by the recurring dream, thought, Memory.

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Amy stepped out of the shower. She still felt dirty, like his germs were in her body somewhere, slowly eating away at her. She looked in the mirror. Her body was red. Tiny dots of blood patterned her skin. She'd come to the worst point. The point where it would soon kill her. Quickly slipping her dressing gown on she made her way out of the bathroom and into her room, locking the door behind her. As she removed her dressing gown, her body stung. She reached over for some moisturiser and slowly cleansed it into her skin. The pain was unbearable and soon tears were flowing down her face. Finally the pain stopped. She stood up and let her body dry. Then she slipped on some pyjamas which covered her body and walked out of the room. Ste was sat on the sofa with Leah.

Ste: Aright babes?

Amy: Yeah. Fine.

Ste: You sure? You look like you've been crying. Has someone upset you? Cause if they have-

Amy: Ste, it's fine. Leave it.

Ste: Right.

He put Leah on the sofa and hugged Amy. She gasped in pain.

Ste: Whats up?

Tears were soon erupting from her eyes. She was crying heavily and Ste didn't know what to do. He just held her, not knowing thats one thing she doesn't want him to do.

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Pleasings comments! x
 
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Great!! More Soon Please Big Grin
 
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Not tonight... I cbb! Lol
 
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hehe sometimes i get cbbitis!!
 
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love it!!!!

more soon please!


H♀LLY♂AKS LOVER!!

Member of loads of clubs, especially We Love Josh and Kris Fisher Appreciation club!!

Read my fics: Mistakes..., Picking up the pieces - a Steph fanfic

AMY JOSH FOREVER
 
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poor amy!!

cant wait for the next update!!


Steph and Max forever!! <3
 
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Love it!!!
more please!!!!!!!!!!


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bump (or pop, as you would say)
Any chance of any more?


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Big Grin more please!!! hehe


Steph and Max forever!! <3
 
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Lol! Yeah Pop's amazing! Anywho...

Thanks for the comments!

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Mercedes sat in the kitchen. It had been 3 days since she was in hospital and still, no one explained where Carmel was. She was starting to believe this dream. Odd things were flashing back to her. The doctor had told her that she was likely to get her memory back within the next few weeks, but not for certain. She was hoping it would be soon. Living like this wasn't good, she couldn't handle it. She picked up her cup of tea and drank.

Michaela: Y'all right, Mercy?

Mercedes: Fine. Shouldn't you be at school?

Mercedes had her old, arrogant personality back. She didn't know it had changed, she thought she was exactly the same, but her family knew. Tina was saying that she never realised how mean the old Mercedes really was. Michaela though, she was glad. Finally, her sister was back to normal again!

Michaela: Actually, I have a free period. Was thinking of going into town. Wanna come?

Mercedes: No thanks! Dont wanna be 'round snotty little teenagers!

Michaela: Aright! I was only askin!

Michaela walked out of the room, leaving Mercedes to sit alone again. She hated being alone. Never knowing what flashback would come next.

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OB stood up and walked up and down his room. He thought he'd never have the strength to walk again, but he was wrong. Steph hadnt been to see him all day. He was beginning to think she wasnt coming, until she walked through the door.

Steph: You're walking!

OB: Yep!

Steph: Well, I'm very pleased!

OB: Why are you here so late?

He walked back over to the bed and sat down.

Steph: I had a late scan.

OB: And? Hows the baby?

Steph: Perfectly healthy. Dont worry. Everything's gonna be alright!

OB: But we dont know that do we!

Steph lowered her head. She couldn't reply to that. Max still hadnt been caught, so until then, they will never be alright. She raised her head and smiled at OB. She walked over and sat with him on his bed. They cuddled up to each other, and finally, they both felt happy. Like a propper couple.

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Sorry if this is really rubbish. I just dont seem to be able to write well today!

Please comment! x
 
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Aww! Thats soo sweet!!
 
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No, it's really good!


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