this is my latest fanfic. i hope you like it. its not really a kress fanfic but it invovles kris and jess. its a murder mystery and after i've finished writing the fanfic i will put up a poll to see who everyone thinks killed will hacket. please read and leave a comment.
jess trembled. she had no idea what will would do next. she was shivering with fear as she huddled in the corner, her head in her hands. she couldnt see anything, she didnt want to see anything. she hadnt moved since will had thrown a gun at zoes head knocking her out. zoe was stil alive just not concoise.
zoe and her were going to meet kris and zac at the su bar. they werent going to invite will because as far as they were aware will was packing his bags since the others had forced him to leave after the recent discovory of wills perverted habits. they were just about to leave when zoe realised that she had left something in wills room. she walked in there followed by jess. will had made no attemted at packing. but much to the girls suprise he was sitting on the bed holding a gun...
jess heard will walk towards the window open it with a loud creek then BANG. wills body laid dead on the floor...
OMG!! You should definitley carry on! I think this will be a very intriguing storyline that will keep everybody guessing! Great start! Can't wait for the next bit x x
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half an hour earlier kris and zac are at the su bar
kris looked at the time on his phone
kris; what time did the girls say they were coming zac; they phoned to say they would be 5 minuetes and that was 20 mineutes ago kris; d'you think we should go and see where they are zac; not really worth it, i mean there probably just running late, you know girls are like with their hair and make up kris; zac there is nothing rong with spending alot of time on yourhair and maky up, i should know zac: plus i don't really want to run into will kris; he's such a creep zac; setting us up, making it look like it was me who stole zoes stuff kris; and spying on zoe like that zac; and the whole rhys ashworth thing kris; and making me believe that i had given jess HIV. i could really kill him for that
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kris fisher the cross dressing tranny is the rudest person on the planet. he goes out of his way to annoy people, for instants today he insults jess and then insults me, and what about appoligising, not for kris fisher, he said he'll only appoligise when he's lying on his death bed. well death bed he wants death bed he gets, while at the clinic as kris was having his last jab, some idiot left me alone in the room which contains the computer that has all kris' details. i being left alone with this computer, decided that kris should suffer. i made kris HIV positive. well i changed the icon which says that the patiant (kris fisher) is not HIV positive to being HIV positive. of course he really doenst actually have HIV but does he really need to know that. i was talking to elliot in the su bar, just to annoy jess and probably kris i've made him think that if he wants to go out with jessica harris he'll have to insult her. doest'n exactly matter what he does he'll never get her will
14th february
dear diary
valentines day and what a great one its been. firstly my plan with elliot worked, but it got kris mad, he barged into my room with elliot and jess and shouted at me, he'll get what he deserves. not even his buisness anyway, nosy tranny. i made two valentines day cards for zoe, one from her loving boyfriend ME and the other also from rhys ashworth. well from me really but zoe won't know. rhys has taken MY girl friend away from me, but i got her back, by being me and making rhys think that zoe is an overpossesive nutter and making zoe and the rest of the flat as well think that rhys is an evil twisted loon.
will
15th february
dear diary
my HIV plan is amazing. i really didnt see this one coming but i'm so glad it happened. kris and jess slept together, probably unprotected, trust the tranny, now kris and jess might think that they both have HIV but they dont. they don't know yet, i'll just have to be patiant. the best part is he won't suspect a thing seeing as i'll be his only friend in the world
zoe has been taken down to the police station to be interwiewed about wills death
police; we have been informed that you have been going out with will hacket the murder victim zoe; thats right we broke up earlier today police; and why was that zoe; because i had found out that will had hidden a camara in my room and watched me on his laptop police; did he do any other things to you zoe; oh yes, a couple of monthes ago my flat mate, kris, was doing a blind date like thing, his female contestant didnt turn up so i stepped in, even though i was seeing will at the time. i told him i was only doing it to get a free meal and to help out a friend in need, will still wasnt happy. anyway the day after i went on a 'date' at il nosh with the person i had chosen from the date thing, rhys, will got really annoyed aand called me a tart so i left il nosh early and dumped will. when i next saw rhys he acted all wierd with me and said something about all these annoing texts i'd sent him, which i thought was weired because i had lost my phone that day. rhys also said that will said that i'm like really possesive. but i'm not. later in the week i made up with will and we started going out again, but then all these weird posters came up saying that i was cheap and a crazy person and that i would sleep with people and stuff, we all thought it was rhys. and also i got a very weird valentines day card that will hade kept from me, he accsidently read it and told me it was from rhys, and i believed him. turns out all the stuff about rhys was actually done by will. police; has will done anything elsse zoe; yes, before me and will were going out i was going out with zac, another person i share the flat with. anyway, one day these things that are really preaciose to me got stolen, i origanly thought it was jess who took them, shes another person who i live with, but we found the things in zacs room. i dumped him and threw him out the flat even though he denies he did anything. will framed zac so i would finish with him. police; is that al zoe; no, recently i was excepted into this newyork film corse. it meant i had to go to new york for a year. i was really worried about telling will but i really wanted to go. just as i was about to leave i find that i didnt have my passport, will had taken it, he had put some pictures of us together in there. i had said good bye to everyone and i was i the taxi than will slams the door on my hand, breaking it and stopping me to go to new york. police; is that it zoe; yes police; ok, can you tell me wht you did on the day that will died from 9:30 zoe; i was sitting on my bed crying at 9:30 with zac after i had just found out what will had been up to with the rhys thing and spying on me. then zac went to lectures with kris and he said to meet kris and him afterwards at the su bar to have some fun and all. i did basicly nothing that day. jess came in and gave my my lunch and we got ready to go to the su bar. we were about to go then i realsed i had left something in wills room, we thought that he was packing because we decided he should leave. i walked into his room to see on the bed holding a gun, he swung it around the room then i remember him throwing it towards me. i woke up 5 hours later on the sofa, kris told me that i was knocked unconciuse and that will had died police; is there anyone who can prove that you were unconcouse while will died zoe; yes jess, she was in the room with me police;thats all the questions thank you for your time zoe; bye
zoe has been taken down to the police station to be interwiewed about wills death
police; we have been informed that you have been going out with will hacket the murder victim zoe; thats right we broke up earlier today police; and why was that zoe; because i had found out that will had hidden a camara in my room and watched me on his laptop police; did he do any other things to you zoe; oh yes, a couple of monthes ago my flat mate, kris, was doing a blind date like thing, his female contestant didnt turn up so i stepped in, even though i was seeing will at the time. i told him i was only doing it to get a free meal and to help out a friend in need, will still wasnt happy. anyway the day after i went on a 'date' at il nosh with the person i had chosen from the date thing, rhys, will got really annoyed aand called me rude names so i left il nosh early and dumped will. when i next saw rhys he acted all wierd with me and said something about all these annoing texts i'd sent him, which i thought was weired because i had lost my phone that day. rhys also said that will said that i'm like really possesive. but i'm not. later in the week i made up with will and we started going out again, but then all these weird posters came up saying that i a loony person and that i would sleep with people and stuff, we all thought it was rhys. and also i got a very weird valentines day card that will hade kept from me, he accsidently read it and told me it was from rhys, and i believed him. turns out all the stuff about rhys was actually done by will. police; has will done anything elsse zoe; yes, before me and will were going out i was going out with zac, another person i share the flat with. anyway, one day these things that are really preaciose to me got stolen, i origanly thought it was jess who took them, shes another person who i live with, but we found the things in zacs room. i dumped him and threw him out the flat even though he denies he did anything. will framed zac so i would finish with him. police; is that al zoe; no, recently i was excepted into this newyork film corse. it meant i had to go to new york for a year. i was really worried about telling will but i really wanted to go. just as i was about to leave i find that i didnt have my passport, will had taken it, he had put some pictures of us together in there. i had said good bye to everyone and i was i the taxi than will slams the door on my hand, breaking it and stopping me to go to new york. police; is that it zoe; yes police; ok, can you tell me wht you did on the day that will died from 9:30 zoe; i was sitting on my bed crying at 9:30 with zac after i had just found out what will had been up to with the rhys thing and spying on me. then zac went to lectures with kris and he said to meet kris and him afterwards at the su bar to have some fun and all. i did basicly nothing that day. jess came in and gave my my lunch and we got ready to go to the su bar. we were about to go then i realsed i had left something in wills room, we thought that he was packing because we decided he should leave. i walked into his room to see on the bed holding a gun, he swung it around the room then i remember him throwing it towards me. i woke up 5 hours later on the sofa, kris told me that i was knocked unconciuse and that will had died police; is there anyone who can prove that you were unconcouse while will died zoe; yes jess, she was in the room with me police;thats all the questions thank you for your time zoe; bye
zac; weird will not being around zoe; not only is he not around hes dead kris; he deserved it jess; he may have done some harsh things in his time but none of them worth being killed kris; jess, he spyed on zoe, framed zac, made rhys think that zoe was crazy, stopped zoe going on a once in a life time oppotunity to new york and made me think that i had given you HIV. jess; well when you put it like that zoe; but stil who would actually kill will zac; none of us here thats for sure zoe; but we dont have any proof jess; well you never know it might be rhys zoe; could you see rhys doing something like that kris; well i think it was curnal musturd with the candlestick in the kitchen jess; come on kris grow up
kris puts his arm around jess and smiles
zoe; but the weired thing is i really am not actually that sad that hes dead jess; i don't think anyone is kris; i'm really not suprised that no ones sad jess; you would'nt be kris; and whats that suposed to mean
i got up. spliting head ache. time-13:58. said i'll meet gilly at the su bar at 2:15, thats in 17 minuests, wel 16 now. gilly said he had something to tell me about will and zoe, the weirdo girlfriend. says that it's important. well it's probably only that wills the one with gillys season ticket, he supports a loser team anyway.
2:30 right on time. my breath stinks a bit.
gilly; hi rhys me; hello what d'you want to talk to me about gilly; well you no zoe me; the girl that i went on that date ages ago with and sent me those weird texts then claimed that i put all these weird posters up, yeah i might know her gilly; yeah but you know the annoying texts that you got from her me; yeah gilly; well kris says that zoe had lost her phone for that whole week me; really gilly; yep me; then who sent those texts gilly; be patiant i'll tell ya, and you know all those posters me; yes gilly i know all those posters gilly; done by will me; will gilly; will me; but isn't he like zoes boyfriend gilly; not any more since zoe found out that will hid a camara in her room me; did will do them texts as well gilly; yep me; i could kill him
time of death-6:30ish died by single gun shot wound to the chest died in is bedroom at hcc halls other information-hit on the head, probably hitting the side of his bed after being shot murderer- ???
kris has been taken down to the police station to be questioned
police; hello kris, we understand that you never got on with will much kris; not really, he was a bit crazy police; did he ever do anything to hurt you kris; well let me think, he made me believe that i had hiv and that i had given it to jess. police; and how did he do that kris; i don't know he just said that he did it police; ok the, can you tell me what you did from 9:30 onwards the day will died kris; well we had just found out that will had been spying on zoe, and these other things that he had done like the hiv and everything, zoe and zac were in zoes room and me and jess were in the kitchen talking about why will had done all those things. then me and zac went to lectures and we decided to meet zoe and jess at the su bar at 6:30. when they didnt come we headed back to the flat to find a dead will and an unconciuse zoe and of course jess police; is there anyone to comferm that you were at the su bar at the time of wills death. kris; zac police; ok thanks for your time you are free to go
jess has been taken down to the police station to be questioned
police; hello, can you tell me what you thought of will jess; he was a bit weird police; did he ever do anything to hurt you jess; he made us all think that kris had given me hiv police; is that all jess; yes police; ok can you tell me what you did the day will died from 9:30 onwards jess; ok, i was taking to kris about will, then kris went to lectures. i made some lunch for zoe and me, and i had a chat with zoe. we were getting ready to go to the su bar. we were about to go then zoe realised she had left something in wills room, we went in to get it, will was sitting on the bed with a gun. he swung it aroun then threw it at zoes head and she fell to the floor. will picked up the gun and aimed it at my head so i ran into the corner with my head in the hands, i couldnt see anything, i herd will open the window then i heard a bang then he i looked around and he was dead police; did you see anyone but will in the room jess; no police; ok thank you for your time
Can't wait for the next bit x x
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