I know there was a rumour going around about a new character Jasmine, Louises sister, coming to hollyoaks. And apparently she was going to have a relationship with Josh. I thought it was a good idea so I'm gonna make a fiction about it.

Louise and Warren were having a romatic meal together. Suddenly there was a knock at the door.

Warren: Were you expecting anyone Lou
Louise: No, I'll get it

Louise opened the door and in front of her was a short girl with shoulder length, brown wavy hair and dark brown eyes. It was Jasmine, her little sister.

She hadn't seen her for nearly ten years, she must be at least 16 now. She barely noticed her, however it was the jasmine pendant and her name tag on her suitcase that made her reliase that it was her sister.

Jasmine: Well don't just stand there, let me in.

should I do more??

good start

Great Start
More Soon?

Really good!
I did a fic about her too!
Don't think she's ever gonna come, but she's a good character

Jasmine was in the living room and Warren and Louise were in their bedroom

Warren: Who's she

Louise: My little sister, Jasmine

Warren: I thought she was staying with your aunt in Ibiza

Louise: Well you dragged me in here so fast I bearly got a chance to talk to her

Louise left their bedroom and ran up to Jasmine to give her a huge hug.

Jasmine: You can let go of me now, at the rate your squezzing me I might not live to tell you why I'm here

Louise let go of her and they both sat down to talk. Louise asked her why she was here. Her aunt had met a new man and they were planning to go travelling around the world by themselves. Her aunt found Louises adress and sent Jasmine over to England, she was the only one Jasmine had.

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oh i forgot to say welcome to the forum !

It was the next day and Louise had explained everything to Warren.

Louise: Oh, his jas, your up early

Jasmine: Yeah, well I thought I might explore the village, meet a few new friends

Louise: Yeah, well whilst you do that I'm gonna speak to the teachers at Hollyoaks High and see if they have any available places

Jasmine: Lou, do I have to go to school, can't I just work at your place

Louise: Hell no

Jasmine: Well excuse me and who's that guy your living with

Louise: He's my fiance Warren and he's not to keen on you staying here so please be nice

Jasmine: Dosen't sound like a very welcoming guy

Suddenly Warren bursted in

Warren: Yeah, well as long as you do your fair share I don't mind and....

Before Warren could finsh his sentence Jasmine was out the door and well gone

Still good !

srry for keep doing seprate posts, the window keeps closing


Jasmine was in the drive n buy shopping for a few things. Josh was at the counter and could not take his eyes off her. All his friends were avoiding him and the least he could do was too make some new ones. Suddenly Jasmine came to the counter.

Josh: You new round here

Jasmine: Yeah, I'm Louises sister, came last night

Josh: Well, if you ever need anything you know where I am

Jasmine: Thanks, and by the way I'm Jasmine

Josh: Josh


Jasmine was back at the flat and was talking to Louise about meeting Josh.

jasmine: he was so welcoming and kind and plus he is realllllly cute

louise: yeah, well as long as you don't do anything stupid I don't mind

warren: well I do, you're like a little sis to me and i don't want you to get hurt

jasmine: I may be like a little sister but I don't need an older brother so lay off

louise: don't be so rude, he's only trying to make you happy

jasmine: for your information I'm already very happpy so just leave me alone

Jasmine stormed out and went to sit by the fountain. Josh was walking by and came to join her.

josh: you ok

jasmine: yeah, just had a bit of an arguement at home

josh: about what

jasmine: are you always this nosy

josh: well I won't help next time

jasmine: look, don't worry I'm just feeling a bit stressed

josh: wanna come with me to MOBS, it's a smoothie bar down the road, it will cure your stress straight away

jasmine: are you asking me on a date

josh: umm, uhhh....yeah

jasmine: well I'd be glad to go

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its really good!

it was the next day and all jasmine could think about was josh. at the ashworth's josh was thinking the absoulute same.

louise: what are you so chirpy about

jasmine: don't tell warren but...

warren: don't tell warren what

jasmine: oh, nothing

warren: you're living under my roof therefore i need to know every single detail about your life

jasmine: you're my sister's fiance, not my father

warren: don't get lairy with me and it's that josh ashworth isn't it

jasmine: yes and you won't stop me from seeing him

warren: well tell him if he hurts you..

louise: warren!!!

warren: what?

louise (giggling): get back to bed, I have a suprise for you

jasmine: Uuh, i can hear you know

louise: what, he's my fiance

jasmine: I'm going

Jasmine walked into the drive n buy and was looking for josh. Instead was a blonde girl with blue eyes. It was Hannah.

hannah: looking for someone

jasmine: yeah, josh, have you seen him around

hannah: you must be that girl he was texting all night, jasmine isn't it

jasmine: yeah, do you know where he is

Suddenly josh walked in

josh: right here, han could you cover my shift for me, pleeeease

hannah: go on then, off you go

josh and jasmine were at IL Nosh

josh: you comin to hollyoaks high

jasmine: yeah, I start after half term

josh: cool, hopefully we'll have the same classes

jasmine (smiling):yeah

Suddenly fletch and sasha walked in, they looked wasted

josh: can we go some place else

jasmine: yeah, but why

josh: it's them two, we used to be mates but they started doing drugs

jasmine: come on then

They went to sit by the fountain

josh's thoughts
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should i kiss her or not. I mean, i like her and I'm prety sure she likes me. Why can't she just kiss me???

jasmine: you seem pretty tense

josh: i'm fine

josh: is that the time, I really have to go

Josh rushed off and left Jasmine by herself. She was confused, she thought he liked her

jasmine was in the flat baking, she had made a complete mess. There was flour and cake mixture all over her. Suddenly there was a knock at the door. It was Josh.

jasmine: it's open

josh: hi jasmine

jasmine: oh god, you scared me

josh: i came to say sorry about rushing off earlier, i was a bit nervous

jasmine: don't worry, i'm over it

josh: what you up too

jasmine: baking or should I say making a complete mess

She flicked a bit of flour at him and he flicked some back. They started a food fight. He started chasing her round the flat. They then both flopped onto the sofa. He was laying on top of her. They leaned in too kiss each other. Finally there lips locked, however it didn't last to long.

Suddenly warren burst in.

warren: what the hell do you think your doing and look at this mess

jasmine: it was only an innocent kiss and i'll clean the mess up so don't worry

warren: it had better be an innocent kiss, now get out

josh quickly left without saying a word

jasmine: thanks for ruining the moment, i told you i needed some space

warren: yeah, some space for baking, not throwing yourself onto josh

jasmine: for your information I wansn't throwing myself onto him, it was a small kiss

warren: small kisses can lead to lots of things, what if you'd slept with him and got pregnant

jasmine: do you always exageratte things

warren: it happened to louise

jasmine: what!!!

warren: when she was with her ex she slept with me and got pregnant. she couldn't figure out who was the babies dad was so she got an abortion

jasmine: and she never told me

warren: she would of if you were there for her

jasmine: it was not my fault that i wasn't here, i was in ibiza for god sake.

warren: you could of called

jasmine: i haven't told anyone this, not even Louise. But, the minute i arrived at my aunties she packed me off to boarding school in England. She couldn't keep up with the fees so she sent me here. I had no way in keeping touch with here what so ever. So you can screw your predictions coz josh is the only ever real guy i've been mates with let alone kissed.

She stormed off to her room. Warren was shocked, how could louise not know about any of this.

Really good!
More soon?

yer this is soooooooooooooooooooooooo good please do more

i'll do more tmrw

ok cool
thanks

It was the next day and jasmine was planning to meet up with josh, it was their first date. Warren wasn't to keen on her going but after what he told her yesterday, he decided to keep quiet.

jasmine: hi josh

josh: oh, hi

jasmine: you alright

josh: it's just my sister

jasmine: what's wrong, she seemed fine yesterday

josh: a few months ago she was suffering from an eating disorder and well you know i told about ryhs and beth. well, that caused her to have a relapse

jasmine: oh my god, josh, i'm so sorry

josh: don't worry, it's not your fault. I just wish someone could talk to her and help her

jasmine: isn't that what the counsellor does

josh: yeah, but someone who knows how she feels

jasmine: i kinda knows how she feels

josh: what, you

jasmine: no, my best friend at boarding school, my only friend at boarding school

josh: boarding school???

jasmine: long story, I'll tell you later

josh: could you speak to her

jasmine: no, i wouldn't know what to say

josh: please

jasmine: i'll try

josh: thanks


what josh didn't know was that jasmine was hiding a secret, she didn't have any friends at boarding school. Because of this she suffered from an eating disorder, not her "best friend".

more please

do more pleaseee
its soooooo good!