So… I have decided to write this, tell me if you don’t like the idea, and it’s going to be set just before her and Calvin split up.

[Flash forward]

'Mommy .. Daddy,' A little girl chorused into her parents bedroom, ‘Come on, IT’S CHRISTMAS!’ She screamed ecstatic.
Louise sat up and looked at Warren who was lying awake in the bed, then she turned to the clock on her bedside table, ‘Molly, it’s half 4 in the morning, have you even been asleep?’ Louise asked looking at her daughter wearily.
‘no’ Molly said with a glum look on hr face.
‘Santa wont come if you don’t have a sleep’ Louise told her looking at her daughters confused face.
‘HE HAS, I SAW THE PRESENTS AND EVERYTHING!’ She said back in her exited mood.
‘They were probably just Dalton’s,’ Louise started, ‘see he is asleep.’ Louise said this raising her voice as well as her finger which was now pointing at a crib in the corner of the room. Now Molly was looking at her sadly, ‘come on.’ Louise told her while climbing out of her bad, she walked Molly into her yellow bedroom, Louise peeled the cover of the little girls bed and told Molly to lay down, Molly, not wanting to kick up a fuss, walked over to the bed and laid down, Louise started humming is a sweet tone and soon Molly’s eyes were shut, she smiled to herself and walked back into bed.
‘She asleep now?’ Warren asked, who was not sitting up feeding Dalton. Louise nodded, ‘Okay,’ Warren said removing the bottle from Dalton’s mouth and placing him back in the crib. Warren jumped in the bed next to Louise and wrapped his arm around her waist keeping a firm hold of her, this was how they always slept, Ever since the night of the accident.

[End of Flash]

‘LOUISE, LOUISE?’ Calvin said staring at her, she was leaning on her hand which was on the table in the Valentine’s house. Louise smiled at Calvin, ‘you know I love you, Right?’
Louise smiled again, ‘of course I do,’ She started to stand up from the table, ‘But I’ve got to get to work.’ and with that she left.

She might have known that Calvin loved her, more than anything. But, she could never say that she loved him back, it just wasn’t the truth.


Just tell me the truth, my last 2 storys didn't go so well, so I'm not really bothered if it is rubbish, Oh yeah and I can't spell irisistable oops

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Louise sat there, staring at a magazine, but she wasn’t reading it, her mind was distracted. Suddenly she jumped at the door opened, her heart leapt, Please let it be Warren, she silently thought.
‘Hi babe’ she looked up to see Calvin standing three, damn, why it he hear?, she thought and gave Calvin a smile, ‘Come on I have a surprise for you’ he said dragging her into the Valentine’s home. There she was amazed, two candle lay in the middle of the table and a bucket of ice with the wine carefully placed inside it. Then she glanced to the 2 plates they were bare, ‘sit down’ Calvin told her, she sat down at her place and smiled at him again, ‘here we are’ Calvin said carrying in a bowl of food, ‘dig in’.
Louise smiled at him again, ‘your so sweet’ she told him, he smiled and place some food on her plate.
‘So, how has your day been?’ Calvin asked, putting a fork of food in his mouth.
‘Day,’ she started, ‘It’s only the afternoon, but yeah’.
‘Good, now you can eat it I swear It’s not poisoned.’ Louise laughed and started eating.

Meanwhile over at Warren’s

‘COME ON WARREN’ Katy screamed at his, ‘You love her, just tell her.’
‘what ! So she turns me down?’ He screams back.
‘At least you would know’ and with that Katy left the flat, leaving Warren bewildered.

Back at the Valentine’s

Louise is at the sink washing the dishes, the toilet chain flushes.
Calvin come running down the stairs and sees the table empty and walks into the kitchen, ‘Come on babe, I’ll do them’ He says placing his arms around Louise’s tiny waist.
‘It’s okay there done now’ she tells him, putting the last one on the side and turns to him, they lean in for a kiss.
‘I love you Lou’ he tells her and kisses her again.
‘come on’ Louise says and drags him upstairs.

Back at Warren’s

Katy is now back home and is talking to Warren.
‘I think I’m going to tell her’ he says.
Looking shocked Katy says , ‘When?’
‘NOW!’ Warren says and stands up, Katy smiles, Warren walks out of the flat.

At Evissa

‘That’ll be’ Carmel says ringing up the lady’s price’s, ‘£6’
‘Thanks’ the woman says and hands the money over to Carmel.
‘Come again’ Carmel screams as the lady walks out of the door.
Just then Warren walks in, ‘Carm, is Lou here?’ he asks out of breath.
‘no, she went home at lunch time, haven’t seen her since’ she tells him.
‘tar’ Warren says and he jogs out of the door.

At the Valentine’s

Calvin and Louise are naked covered by the blanket, they kiss each other, when they suddenly hear.

Down on the street

‘Louise, I LOVE YOU !’ Warren screams up at the window. ‘and I’m never going to stop’.

At the Valentine’s

Calvin pulls away from Louse and looks at her I’m disgust.

On the street.

A crowd have now gathered around Warren, waiting for Louise’s reaction.

But they never expected this one…

Brill

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Sorry, it is really short.

At the Valentine’s

‘’Louise!’’ Calvin screamed, ‘’YOU SLEPT WITH HIM, DIDN’T YOU?!’’ Calvin carried on screaming.
‘’NO!’’ Louise screamed back, on the verge of tear’s
‘’DIDN’T YOU!’’ He screamed again, ‘’DON’T LIE YOU LITTLE SL*T’’
‘’I’m not’’ Louise said in a low voice, she was terrified and crying, ‘’Just calm down Calvin’’
‘’NOT WHEN YOU HAVE BEEN GOING AROUND SLEEPING WITH EVERYMAN IN HOLLYOAKS !’’ he screamed, this time he raised his hand to Louise making her tremble even more, *SLAP* his hand hit her face full on, making a red mark on the side of her face, instantly. Louise looked at him shocked. She jumped of the bed the next time he raised her hand. Edging away to the stairs, Suddenly Calvin jumped around the corner and screamed, ‘’STAY STILL BIT*H’’ She carried n running, she was now at the edge of the stairs, *SLAP* Calvin had caught up with her and hit her full force, sending Louise tumbling down the stairs, not moving, ‘’Lou, Lou !’’ he shook he lifeless body, ‘’Oh god!’’ he picked his phone up and rang an ambulance.

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Outside

Warren heard a crash coming from the house, ‘’LOUISE?!’’ He ran to the door, ‘’LOUISE!’’ he screamed again. He ran against the door, trying to knock it down. Once, the door didn’t budge. Twice, thee door still didn’t go. Three times, this time the door gave sign of movement. Fourth time, the door moved again. Warren knew that the next time her hit the door it would open, but he didn’t get a chance to. Sirens filled the air and the ambulance came speeding around the corner, everyone was now whispering but they all moved for the ambulance to park. ‘’Hello, SIR!’’ the paramedic knocked rapidly on the door. Soon it was wide open and 3 paramedics were in the Valentine’s household, and of course Warren.

DUN DUN DUN !

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I'm gonna post some more at 10 tonight, because im at my auntie's at the minute and its already written on my comp xD

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‘’WHAT HAVE YOU DONE TO HER !?’’ Warren screamed at Calvin, who was now pinned up to the wall. ‘’If you have hurt her, YOUR DEAD!’’ Warren spat at his face. Just then a paramedic pulled him of Calvin. Warren ran to Louise. ‘’is she going to be fine?’’ he asked the paramedic trying to adjust her to the carrier.
‘’We will know as soon as we take her to the hospital’’ He said as two of the paramedics lifted her up and out of the house. ‘’Mr Valentine do you want to go in the ambulance?’’ Calvin nodded, but just as he went to climb in Warren stopped him, ‘’I don’t think that’s a good idea’’, he said pushing him out of the way. Calvin had never been scared of Warren but now he could see he was capable of anything. ‘’DO YOU?’’ he asked rhetorically, and climbed in to the ambulance. Calvin didn’t fight back he just stood and watched as they drove her away.

1 hour later

Warren was sitting in the waiting room, Calvin was gathering some tuff for Louise as she probably would have to stay a few nights. Just then the nurse came out.
‘’How is she?’’ Warren asked, and he leapt to his feet.
‘’Louise is going to b fine, but I’m afraid she has lost the baby.’’ at this Warren sat back down in shock, ‘’So I take it you didn’t know?’’ Warren shook his head. ‘’Sorry.’’ she told him,
‘’Can I go and see her?’’ he asked jumping up again.
The Nurse nodded, ‘’But she will be unconscious for a while.’’
‘’It’s okay, I just want to see her’’ the nurse nodded and lead him into the room where Louise was.