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steph was behind the bar in the dog when she saw justin walk in.

stephs thoughts

justin just walked in do i look ok

steph quickly checked the mirror

justin walked over

j:steph you look great trust me

s: ohh thanks so what you been up to

j:emm getting dumped

s:what do you mean

j:katy finished it she couldn't handle the hassle of charlie

[justin didn't notice her face ligh up]im so sorry, well im about to finsih my shift so want to go for a drink take your mind of of it

j:yeah why not that would be nice

s:well meet me at the su bar at 7

j:but its 5 now

s:yeah well i have to get ready

j:you look gorgeous trust me he kisses her on the cheek

s:dont you will make me blush

j:sorry well emm 7 yeah bye

s:byee
 
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hmmmm, Justin and Steph.
I'd never have thought of that one!
Could be interesting, please carry on!


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I voted for him to be with Steph Big Grin
Please carry on


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Yay! More soon?
Glad you listened to everyone who said Steph!
 
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yay!! you done steph, i was hoping you would!! cant wait for more!! Big Grin


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more tonight Big Grin
 
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justin was looking at the ground when he knocked someone over.

justin;omg im so sorry louise let me help you up

louise;its ok justin wow you look hansom were you going

justin;im meeting steph in the su bar

louise;oh right so you guys are on a date then

justin;yeah i suppose you could call it that

there is an awqward silence between them

justin;well how are you and warren

louise;might aswell call it quits were done

justin;im so sorry louise come here

they hug but it lasts a bit to long. justin pulls away

justin;well emm anyway if you ever need to talk just call me

louise;yeah well i might just hold you to that

justin;well i better ago steph will be waiting night

Louise watches as he walks away

louise's thoughts

why cant all men be like justin.
 
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Really Gooood! Big Grin
 
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Really good
I wonder whats going to happen with louise
carry on please


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justin was sitting in the su bar talking to steph he couldnt stop staring at her.

I bet i look an idiot sitting staring.

steph;i better go its getting late

justin;let me walk you back who knows what could happen with you looking like that

steph;thanks you dont have to

justin;no i no i dont but i want to

steph;ok lets go then

they get outiside

steph;oh my god its freezing

justin takes his jacket off and wraps it around her

steph;thanks your so sweet

justin smiles

steph;well her we are thanks for a great night wish it didn't have to end

justin;well it doesn't

justin kisses her on the lips but pulls away

justin;oh my god im so sorry

steph;no dont be

she grabs his hand and pulls him inside

louise is walking past and watches it all from a distance her heart drops

louise's thoughts

oh my god hes with steph looks like i have to go back to warren normally justin is there to keep me company now that him and katy have finished he has been spending nights there

louise walks away after a while
 
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The next night steph had to go on a trip with frankie so justin stayed at warrens.Justin gets out of the shower with a towel on.

justin;louise were is warren

louise turns around to se justin half naked

louise;emm he is emm away out

justin;aww ok sorry i used the hot water

louise;justin for god sake

justin;sorry

justin goes to walk in his room

louise;no im sorry justin come and keep me company pleaseee

justin;you sure

louise;yeah so did you have fun with steph

justin could sense the sarcasim in her voice

justin;what is worng with you tonight

louise;nothing!

justin;i cant deal with this im going to my room

a few hours later justin was still in his room.louise was sat wondering wat to do

justin was sitting on his bed thinking then there was a knock at the door.

justin;louise wat do you want

louise;can i come in

justin lets her in and she sits on his bed

justin;there is nothing to say you flipped for nothing

louise;i know im really sorry

justin;why did you flip

louise;dont you get it

justin;what

louise;i like you ..alot

justin;what about warren

louise;i dont care its you i want

justin stands up

justin;no i can't do this

louise;you dont really like steph do you

justin;yes i do so louise please get out of my bedroom

louise runs out of the room in tears
 
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more Soon Please!! Big GrinBig Grin
 
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Haha, surves you right Louise!

Great x

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hah louise!! update soon please!!


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steph and justin were in the dog having a quiet drink.

justin;so what do you want to do today then babe

steph;have a lazy day in my flat its empty all day

justin;sound good

justin leans over the table and kisses steph

warren;awryt mate

justin;warren what you doing here

warren;me and louise wanted a drink and you were here so we thought we would join you

justin;well excuse me ive got to go to the toilet

louise:yeah me too

justin walks ahead off louise trying to avoid eye contact. justin walks into the mens toilets and he thinks louise went into the ladies but she has followed him in.

justin;louise what are you doing

louise;about the other night

justin;it was a mistake i know

louise;no it wasnt i want you

justin;louise! some one might come in

louise locks the door

justin;look im with ste..

befor ehe could finish louise lunged a kiss on him

justin;what are you doing

louise;what does it look like

justin;no im not doing this to steph

justin storms out
 
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bad Louise! Maybe she'll get lucky third times round Wink


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Haha! I thought he said he was with Ste at first then I realised.

More please!
 
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ohhh louise you nasty little.....!! hahaha

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weeks went by and steph and justin were talking

justin;steph you know these past few months have been greatand i wanted to know if you would...

steph;omg are you asking me to marry...

justin;wow no i was going to ask if you would move in

steph;oh right

justin;sorry if i got your hopes up or anything

steoh;no im glad im not ready for that

justin;good so wats my answer

steph;what about warren what does he think

justin;he said it is cool

steph;what about louise

justin;what about her justin snapped

steph;what does she think

justin;oh right emm she doesnt matter so will you

steph;of course i will

she gives him a cuddle.

back at the flat steph is moving her stuff in

louise;what are you doing

justin;shes moving in

louise;no she isnt

justin;yeah she is warren said she could

louise storms out causing steoh to drop a box

justin;ill go

justin walks down the steps to see louise sitting on a stair

justin;what the hell is worng with you seriously

louise;justin get away from me

she begins to cry

justin;louise you ok

she ignores him

she stands up to walk away justin pulls her back and pulls her into a cuddle.she sobs into his shoulder

justin;louise what is wrong

she looks at him and kisses him he doesnt pull away he suddenly pulls away when he hears steph shout

justin;i better go emm i will see you later

louise watches him walk away she sobs again
 
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