this is my firast hollyfiction tell me what you think.

chapter one
Sarah had just got back from a major photo shoot, she had been away for 2 weeks.
So desperate to see craig she went straight round there and didn't even bother to knock on craigs bedroom door.
So she walked straight in and to her surprise, she couldn't believe what she was seeing,she knew deep down he liked someone else, a girl maybe, but not a boy, especially not john paul he was the one who she confided in the most about her and craigs fallouts.
She quickly ran out of the flat unable to keep her emotions inside tears dripping down her face.

* sorry for the spelling mistakes would you like ot see more or not tell the truth

i like this i du normally like craig ad jp fis but i like this

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running down the stairs through the pub all her mascara running down her cheeks, she goes straight to the jubilee gardens and sits there crying.
Someone taps her on the shoulder thinking ti was hannah she quickly turns round but it wasn't hannah it was rhys sarah's first love he had seen her running out of the pub, so he followed to see if she was ok.

ooh carry on lol! i like it x

been in spain for abit so i will write more now

Rhys : are you ok?
Sarah : does it look like it, i just cannot believe he would do this, i thought he truly loved me, and everyone probably thought that he would break my heart like john paul did to hannah but i stood by him.
Rhys : What is the matter sarah ?
Sarah : i found him in bed with someone else ... i probably thought it was a girl bbut nto aboy and not john paul, i trusted him and look now what he ahs done.
Rhys : i had my suspicions but nether thought that it was ahppening for real.
Sarah starts to cry, and rhys goes and gives her a hug.
and he looks at her into her eyes.
Rhys : i never stopped loving you,
Sarah : really
Rhys : i am sorry for everyhtign i did, and i hope we can be friends.

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srah looks at rhys, and she knew he wasn't lieing or taking advantage that he truly meant it.
Sarah : of course wen can be friends i am short on them at the moment hannah is away and so is nancy.
Rhys looks at her and pulls her to him and kisses her gently on the lips, thinking that sarah would pull apart but she didnt they was stood there for a couple of minutes before rhys pulled away.
Rhys: i am so sorry
And with that he runs off home

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"i Don;t want naything else to do with you" sarah shouted down the phone to craig.
"I want you back sarah" he wailed
"i am with rhys now" she said.

Ever since that kiss sarah has fallen for rhys he completed her but he didnt know that yet she was scared to tell him.
"i need soem choclate she said to her self, so off she toddled to the shp in the queue there was someonee behind her.
She turned round thinking that it was craig or john paul, but ti wasn't it was rhys.
Rhys: are you ok?
Srah: yes
And with that she pulled him close,
sarah: i want you she said i don't care what people think after last time but you truly meant it didn't you looking at him romanticly.
Rhys: i did and i dont care if you still do modelling i won't get jelous, because.....
with that he got on one knne and said will you marry me?
Sarah: of course i will.

I will conmtinue if people like it but if they dont i wont

ooh theyr'e getting married?!? continue soon

Sarah had just finished a photo shoot, when one of her friends, jasmine cam across and asked her about craig, so sarah came out with it all, and how she was getting married to rhys, and she also asked jasmine if she thought it was too soon after craig and did jasmine think that sarahs head was so smashed up that she would of said yes ot anyone even jack osbourne.

Jasmine: i wouldnt know sarah this has never happened to me, but youhave been out with rhys before haven't you so you must still love him if you are going in for a second time.
Sarah: yes i know but i mean i would of probably said yes to anyone, i wa so upset when i saw craig and jophn pual together, and rhys was there, i needed some love and reassrance in my life,
OMG you probably think i am right Cow dont you?
Jasmine : of course i don't i think you need to spend time on your own and think clearly of what
you want before somebody or yourself gets hurt.
If you want to be with Rhsy then fine go and be with him, but if not tell him i know he really did break your heart butsometimes yu need ot get over that and start a fresh.
Sarah : you are right i am gonna book me and rhys an holiday to Spain and we are gunna talk through stuff, deep down i do love him, but my heart is still saying craig.

Has they parted jasmine quickly whispered good luck hunny and call me x

are you writing anymore?

loved it
there's not many Rhys/Sarah fic so please post soon!

post more and soon! x lol

are you gonna continue or not?
please do

This is a really good fic, and there's not many Sarah/Rhys fics, so it was a good decision to write one a Sarah/Rhys one.