Matilda Marie burton-smith was walking through some place called “hollyoaks” with her family.they were moving in after her cousin was having problems.
“mattie!a little help?”a guy called
“as if!!that thingll break my arm!”she called
he shook his head.liam james burton-smith found his little sister a funny girl.at 17,he was sure she was going on 21,unlike her twin.
“need a hand”she asked
“if its not too much trouble”he called loud enough for matilda to hear
“don’t need me then!im off to explore”she walked away,leaving her struggling siblings
She walked around and saw a salon,a club,and an alley.she made her way towards the alley,when she saw a young guy leave through a club door.
“that has to be him”she thought to herself
“JUSTIN!”she called. He turned around
“can I help you?!””he asked slowly,confused
“don’t remember me?”she asked.“giant sunnies,toffe chunk ice cream with strawberry sauce and a chocolate flake in the snow?!”she asked
“matilda?!”he asked.she smiled
“oh my god …..”he hugged her. “what are you doing here?!”he asked letting go
“your mums worried about you,but she cant face coming back here,and liam got expelled from college,so we had to move,so we moved here”she answered. “im sorry about mel & sophie.and ali.im sorry I havent kept in touch”she said sadly. He hugged her again and kissed her blonde wavy hair
“don’t worry,its in the past.your here now”he let go of her. “wheres everyone else?!”he asked confused
“moving in”she smiled
“need a hand?”he asked
“probably.last I saw liam and em were struggling with a huge tv”
“come on.ill give you a hand”he sighed jokingly

kl i really like it! carry on soon plz!

Natalie! A new fic?!
Brilliant x
I like it!
You better continue the other one though!
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gaby!a new fic!
course im going to continue my other one
and the one i found the other day
and another
hehe
fun!

thanks for the comments!!!!!
will write more soon,just wondering atm.....

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heres a lil bit:
Matilda,liam and Justin were sat on liams bedroom floor playing on his xbox360
“and I-am-the winner!!”Justin cheered
“are any of you going to help?Justin?!”
“em-jay!”he hugged her
emma-Jayne burton-smith was completely different from her twin,but also the same in many way.for one,matilda loved her long blonde wavy hair,whereas emma-Jayne loved her short blonde hair with its red streak in the left hand side.but both girls loved to steal each others clothes,and blame things on liam when hes too drunk to remember.and although mattie was more girly,she was into the same guy things that Emma-Jayne was.
“when did you get here?”she asked
“Ive been here a while,but liam said you doing the dreaded habit of smoking”he joked
“hey!it was my last one!im qutting!”
“she says that after every one!”matilda joked
“shut up mat!no.this time I mean it.they say smoking ruins your prettyness”emma-Jayne told them
“so,are you saying youve been smoking forever then?”Justin joked
“hey!”the girls shouted,unimpressed
“just kidding”he held his hands up.
“girls?liam?we need to talk about school and college!”a womans voice called from downstairs
“haha!”Justin joked as the 3 of them dragged themselves down the stairs to what they had been dreading the most

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Matilda and emma-Jayne pulled in front of hollyoaks high gates.
“I suppose…..”emma-Jayne started. “its not TOO bad”
matilda switched the car off. “its school.how bad can it be?”
The girls got out of the car,and made their way up to the gates,before stopping,and looking at the sign.
“what do you reckon its like?”matilda asked her sister
“no idea.ready to find out?”emma-Jayne replied
“as ill ever be!”
The girls walked through the gates to the main office
“matilda & emma-Jayne burton-smith”matilda told the receptionist,who looked down her list
“the new girls?6th form?take a seat.mrs Webster wont be long”
15 minutes later,a women came rushing along the corridor towards the girls
“matilda & emma-Jayne?”she asked
“yes?”emma-Jayne answered
“follow me”she started rushing off,the girls grabbing their things and going after her
“im sorry about the rush.long story.this is the 6th form common room-amy barnes!out!-im afraid I don’t have time to show you myself….sasha and Joshua….show these 2 around the school for me please.any teachers with a problem refer them to me”and she hurried off
“wow.shes pretty”josh thought to himself as a young blonde girl laughed at something her sister had whispered in her ear. “well,they both are,but….theres something about her”
“im josh”he said,walking over to them,his eyes fixed on matilda
“emma-jayne.this is my sister matilda”emma-Jayne answered
“hi matilda”josh said
“mattie.please.or Maddie.either.just not matilda”she smiled
“im sasha”emma-Jayne turned to look at sasha,and the colour left her face,she looked ill
“em?are you okay?”matilda asked
“im fine.shall we look around?”emma-Jayne answered,and walked towards the door

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Natalie Darling!
This is brilliant!
More of your other fic now?
Then more of this?
More of everything!!!

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Just read all this and it's really good!
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tiny little bit

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“so what are studying?”josh asked matilda shyly,walking slowly down a corridor.theyd lost emma-Jayne and sasha
“psychology,media,law and sociology”she nodded.“how about you?”she asked
“music,also media and psychology and English lit”he answered
“so you’ll be in some of my classes?”she asked
“looks that way”he answered
“be my coursework partner?”she asked.joshs face lit up
“but,what about your sister?”he asked excitedly
“well…..shes doing drama,textiles,and,funnily enough,media and psychology.but we spend to much time together anyway.and we arent joined at the hip.we don’t want to give off that impression.were our own people.so…..what do you say?be my partner?”she smiled
“yeah…..okay.id like that”he answered sweetly
“okay”matilda laughed.“he seems…..different.good different”she thought
“okay.so im starving!who does a girl have to screw to get some food around here?!”
“uhh…down the hall and turn right and the canteens in the left”he pointed
“well lets go!”she joked,grabbing his hand and running down the corridor

that last bit was dedicated to lorna,as shes away on her hols for a bit,so we wont be able to catch up for a while

Lol. Dedicated to Lorna? Why her if she cant read!?
More! Now! even though your probebly in bed!
Write in your mind and transfer it! Lol.

Love this! x

Well i miss the lorn,and i thought she should know.this bit is for aimee,who the mods STILL wont reply to.rude!

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Matilda and Josh were walking through the village sharing a bag of chips,before sitting by the statue.Matilda opened up a pot of curry sauce,and took a chip,dipping it in
“want some?”she gestured the sauce towards Josh
“im good thanks.that stuffs horrible”he picked up a chip,and dipped it in his gravy. “gravy?”
“im okay thanks”and dipped another chip in her sauce.
Happily sitting in silence,Matilda was eyeing up the neigbourhood-and talent as a young guy walked passed on his phone.Matilda wolf-whistled,and he turned around
“whistle for a hottie!”she laughed
“Josh!keep your mates under control.desperate isn’t cool”Josh felt angry
“so why are you doing Mercedes?”he asked
“grow up Josh!sorry mate.yeah,so if we meet at…..”
“some sort of bitch fight I don’t know about?”Matilda joked,biting a chip
“that’s my brother.Rhys”Josh answered,being a bit off with her,and taking a chip.Matildas eyes widened
“oh my god.how embarrassing.sorry.oh my god.I whistled your brother”Matilda went pink
“its fine.really.hell be in his element now”Josh carried on eating
“okay……..(takes another chip)………..I need to go home”she said quickly,getting up and knocking the chips over,and curry sauce down her leg
“damn it!…..whats going on over there?!…..HEY!”

~~~~~5 mins earlier~~~~~
Sasha and Emma-Jayne were sitting in il gnosh,waiting for Emma-Jaynes takeaway drink
“I know”Emma-Jayne said
“excuse me?”Sasha asked,surprised
“I know.that your on drugs?”Emma-Jayne asked
“shhh!I don’t know what your talking about”Sasha acted dumb.Emma-Jayne scanned Sasha body and face
“fine.I just know a dealer.good mate.owes me a couple of bags of coke.and a few es.I don’t need them”Emma-Jayne said matter-of-factly.Sasha was all ears
“oh yeah……maybe I could help you shift it?”she asked
“oh no.id give it away to whoever wants it.I couldn’t take advantage of someones addiction by making them pay for it”
They sat silently for a bit.Sasha couldnt stay still.Tony then handed Emma-Jayne her drink
“sorry.machiene broke”he said,handing a drink over to her
“its fine”she said sweetly.“how much do I owe you?”she asked
“2.25 please.are you okay Sasha?”he asked,opening the till and taking the money
“fine.why wouldn’t I be?”she asked harshly
“no reason.you just look a bit pale”he replied,giving Emma-Jayne her change
“thanks”Emma-Jayne smiled,getting out of her chair and heading for the door.when they got outside,Sasha couldn’t hold it in
“okay.ill have the drugs.please.I need them”she begged
“you don’t”Emma-Jayne answered.
“I…..I know…..I just want to experiment
Wolf whistle
“whistle for a hottie!”
“Josh!keep your mates under control.desperate isn’t cool”
“so why are you doing Mercedes?”
“grow up Josh!”
Emma-Jayne rolled her eyes
“the girl has no shame”she turned back to face Sasha. “I lied.I have no drugs.but you have to stop.you have no idea how it will mess you up”
“you lied?!you bitch!you have no idea!you stupid-”she launched herself at Emma-Jayne
“HEY!”Matilda shouted.she ran over to the two of them,followed by Josh,who pulled them apart,holding Emma-Jayne back
“what the hell is going on?”Matilda demanded
“ask her”Emma-Jayne answered.the three of them waited for Sasha to answer
“she seems to think I want some drugs.that I want to share some with her!”Sasha acted disgusted
“what?!”Emma-Jayne laughed slightly in disbelief
“excuse me?”Matilda asked
“shes sad.needs a life…..druggy”
"you bitch!"Emma-Jayne shouted,trying to force her way out of Joshs grip,which had tightened.Matilda punched Sasha full on in the face.
“you have no idea,do you?come on Em.I need to change”

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