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Hey people! This is my new fic!!! Big Grin

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Slowly she lifted her head off her pillow and last night came back. How could she do that? Slip back into her old ways. She jumped up and ran downstairs. As she touched the wooden floor with her bare feet, she gasped because of the cold. She walked into the kitchen and put 3 slices of bread in the toaster. She needed to keep her weight the same, or her doctor would know. She wasn't hungry, but knew she had to do it.
"You alright Hannah?" Josh asked, stood in the kitchen doorway. He'd watched everything. The way she ran downstairs, how fast she was at putting the bread in.
"Yeah... Fine." She lied. Her eyes were filled with fear and Josh had noticed. He walked over to her and gave her a hug.
"What happened?" He asked. Hannah thought for a moment.
"I couldn't help it Josh. It only just hit me that I'd never see him again. I m-made myself sick!" Tears slipped from her eyes. Josh held her. He knew it would happen soon, and now it has.
"It's ok... You'll be ok." He told her. She continued to sob into his shoulder.
"I m-miss him s-so much! I know what he did was wrong but w-when Beth d-died I thought it w-would be better. Why did he d-do this to us? Why did he kill himself?" Hannah cried harder and walked out of the room. Josh stayed where he was and heard her sobbing in the front room. Her toast popped and Josh buttered it then brought it through to her.
"Thanks." She said
"No problem. I'll be upstairs, ok?"
"Yeah, ok." Hannah smiled at him as he ran back upstairs. No more, Hannah. She thought. This stops now. No more...

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read my fiics ... leah... light in the dark and new character fiic .x
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Gaby this is great!
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tis is reali gr8 more soon?!


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Hannah sat back against the door. She was trying to stop the urge, but it was too hard. She stood up and ran into Josh's room, not knowing what to say. She had to have someone there to stop her, to protect her.
"Han? What's up?" He asked her, putting a magazine down and looking concerned.
"I cant do it! I cant fight it!" She whispered, fighting back the tears.
"Have you been sick again?"
"No, but i will be soon. Please help me Josh! I dont want to slip back into my old ways. I cant put anyone through that again."

"Hannah, it's ok. I'll stay with you." He told her. Hannah walked over to his bed and sat down, shaking. She didn't know what to do, she felt so scared and alone. Josh stroked her arm and she smiled at him.
"Thanks." She muttered.
"No problem."

She woke up. It was dark. Hannah looked around the room.
"What-?" She whispered to herself.
Then she remembered. She had to stay in Josh' room. She got up and walked out of the room. When she was on the landing she looked at her phone to see the time.
"Half three?!" She said annoyed. She stormed into her room and got changed. She didn't know why, but she couldn't sleep now. She wanted to get some air. Within ten minutes she was out of the door, walking aimlessly.
She went passed The dog... No sign of life.
Il Gnosh.... Nothing.
She walked over to the fountain and sat on the bench. After a minute she lay down on the stone slab, and closed her eyes.

"Hannah?"
She opened her eyes. It was still dark. She didn't remember sleeping.
"Hello?"
"What are you doing out here?" He said.
Hannah looked around, trying to get her eyes in focus. Eventually, her eyes cleared up and she saw Justin Burton stood in front of her, looking concerned.
"I couldn't sleep at home"
"But you could sleep here?" He laughed, and so did she.
"Why? What are you doing?" She asked, looking at her phone again for the time. It'd just gone 4.
"Couldnt sleep either." He sat down next to Hannah.
Hannah felt awkward. She'd never really been great friends with Justin, but he was here now... For company. She looked at him from the corner of her eye and saw him looking at her. She turned away and smiled, feeling herself go red.
"Right well, I'll go..." Justin said standing up.
"Oh, right... Ok." She gave a fake smile.
"I'll see you around." He walked past her, touching her shoulder on the way. Hannah suddenly felt all warm and tingly.
She stood up and smiled to herself, then started making her way home.

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OMG! Gaby this is great! I love it! Big Grin
YOu have to write more soon!
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this is really good!!!

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wow, Gaby, this is....
Brilliantationlistocial!

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wow, Gaby, this is....
Brilliantationlistocial!

(Razz stole your word!)


*Long gasp* :eek
You stole my word!!!!! Crying

(sorry if you thought i posted more. Maybe tomorrow Big Grin)
 
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wow, Gaby, this is....
Brilliantationlistocial!

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*Long gasp* Eek
You stole my word!!!!! Crying

(sorry if you thought i posted more. Maybe tomorrow Big Grin)
 
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Hmmm..... Ok then. Big Grin I'll do it in a minute. Probebly be up in half an hour if you can wait that long! Big Grin
 
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Crying

I'm sooo upset!
I just wrote loads out and its gone!!! It said there was a connection problem!
I cbb writing it now so i'm sorry!
 
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good story gaby love it
 
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