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i just found this update brillant Gaby
 
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Brill update Gaby!!!!!!!!!!

more soon!!!!!!!please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
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Thanks everyone.
Just a short part now! Smile

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Hannah stormed around the corner and ran into the park, flinging herself onto the grass. Tears streamed down her cheeks. How did life become such a mess? So horrible and un real. It felt, fake some how; like non of this ever happened.
“Han?”
She turned around quickly.
“You’re not there.” She muttered. Am I going crazy? She thought Why am I seeing her again, after all this time?
“Hannah, you are not crazy!” Melissa told her. Hannah rocked back and forth.
“You’re not there.” Hannah stood up and ran.
“Hannah, I’m here and I’m telling you now. You’re getting fat. You really are betraying me.” Melissa walked away, down the path. Hannah put her head in her hands and when she looked up, Melissa was gone. She stood up and wiped the tears from her eyes. She had a choice. Go see her councillor, or do what Melissa said… Her best friend.
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Sorry again about the length! xx
Please comment.
More (hopefully) Tomorrow...x
 
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brillant update Gaby please post more soon
 
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More soon!


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Update tonight ?

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Do i have to???
 
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No if u don't want to!

Whats up ?
 
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I just can't really be bothered Laugh
I need to do AH, Kress and Mcdean though, which is why i'm a little stressed as I've been writing AH for an hour, and keep sratching it all because i can't seem to write!
I'm almost done though.
I'll try and do a teeny bit more of this later.
 
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I'll try and do a teeny bit more of this later.



Cool
Lookiun at ur sig reminded me i forgot to add Hannah to my forum buddies!
 
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AWWWWWWWWWW!
Poor Hannah! Frown
 
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I have added her now! Big Grin

i can't belive i forgot her!!!!! Eek

I have a head like a sieve!!!!
 
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Thanks for the comments everyone!..x
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Running. The one thing Hannah could do well. After everything she’s been through, she hadn’t given up on running. Yes, before she was only doing it so she could stay thin, but now she was doing it to stay healthy. She ran back home. She had to. She couldn’t live with this thought… The thought of Melissa being here again. It was too hard. How could she get better, when she was going to be there, calling her fat?
“Hannah.”
She stopped in the kitchen and turned around slowly.
“What are you doing here?” She asked. He stood there silent.
“I came to apologise.” Justin replied.
“Yeah, well I don’t need your apologies.” She replied, heading back up the stairs.
“Hannah, please.” He grabbed her arm to turn her back round.
“Go away Justin.” She told him.
“No.”
“What?”
“You heard me. I said no.” He said, folding his arms.
“Well then, stay here. I’m going to my room.”
“Hannah, I don’t know why, but I have fallen madly in love with you over the last week.” He told her. She smiled to herself. “Please talk to me.”
She turned back to face him.
“Justin, I can’t.” She replied. “If I get with you, I’ll only hurt you again. I don’t know when, but I will.” She ran out of the room and up the stairs.

Justin burst into her room.
“Don’t you understand? I don’t care if you hurt me, I know you don’t mean it. Hannah, I want to be with you!” He practically grovelled.
“Really?”
“Really.”
Hannah walked over to him and gave him a hug.
“Good, because I really need someone right now.”
“Well, I’ll be here.”
He kissed her. She didn’t respond at first, but then she couldn’t resist. It started off tender at first, but soon became heated and passionate. Maybe now, I can get better. Maybe everything will be ok. Hannah pulled away and hugged him. He held her tight. They felt happy, together, forever.

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Sorry it's not much.
Please comment..x
 
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awww so cute!!!!!!!!

Can't wait 4 Gaby!!!!!!!!!
 
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loved it Gaby please update soon
 
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Absolutely amazing Gaby!!!!!!!!!
I need more!
Now!!!!!


Annie…Xx
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brill updates. Carry on soon xx


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Amazing! Please update soon.
 
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Thank you all for commenting.
Won't be able to write any more of this for 10 days Frown Eek
Sorry.
Keep bumping it up though Smile
Bye..x
 
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10 days!!
Why????
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Actually, sooner than that nnow... But, i'm going to london tomorrow and then center parcs in friday and i dont know if they'll be an internet connection! I'll still be writing it though, just you cant read it.
 
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Hello everyone. As some of you may already know, Gaby has been blocked. You may wonder how I know... Lol. I'm Gaby's cousin, and yeah, I know that sounds dead fake because you probably all think that I'm her, but I'm not. I swear. Soooo, as Gaby's still writing this, I'm going to post more of this. And MODS if you don't want me to, please will you email me and ask me not to. But as I emailed you and asked and you never replied, I'll take it as a yes that I can post more. So more up soon! x


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Where is it?
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Ooh. Forgot. Sorry!
Coming up in 2 mins!


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