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The Dog

Jack:Jack: Darren, this debt thing is getting out of hand.

Darren: I don't know, don't ask me I'm not the best when it comes to money, you should know that now.

Jack: Well I can't tell Frankie can I!

Darren: Why not.

Jack: Because she will get all worried and blame it on herself for adopting Newt. Plus we can find a way to pay the debt off and she will never know an we can go back to normal.

Darren: I got it

Jack: You wasn't listenng to me were you, but carry on.

Darren: Loan shark, she will never know.

Jack: No it's too risky.

Darren: Well I don't know then

Darren walks off and puts a £2 coin in the fruit machine. Jack takes a deep breath and walks into his home and sits on the sofa, he takes his mobile of the coffee table and looks at his contacts and highlights Gary, a loan shark from his past and presses "Send Message" he said "Gary I Was Wondering If You Could Give Me A Loan Of £50,000" he replies "Sure Thing Jake Meet Me Outside The Dog" and Jack replies "It's Jack By The Way 2pm"

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The Dog

Jack: Darren, this debt thing is getting out of hand.

Darren: I don't know, don't ask me I'm not the best when it comes to money, you should know that now.

Jack: Well I can't tell Frankie can I!

Darren: Why not.

Jack: Because she will get all worried and blame it on herself for adopting Newt. Plus we can find a way to pay the debt off and she will never know an we can go back to normal.

Darren: I got it

Jack: You wasn't listenng to me were you, but carry on.

Darren: Loan shark, she will never know.

Jack: No it's too risky.

Darren: Well I don't know then

Darren walks off and puts a £2 coin in the fruit machine. Jack takes a deep breath and walks into his home and sits on the sofa, he takes his mobile of the coffee table and looks at his contacts and highlights Gary, a loan shark from his past and presses "Send Message" he said "Gary I Was Wondering If You Could Give Me A Loan Of £50,000" he replies "Sure Thing Jake Meet Me Outside The Dog" and Jack replies "It's Jack By The Way 2pm"

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Glad to see you're a United fan!!
Still buzzing on the Champions League final...my bro soo lucky to be there lol!
Anyays welcome to the forum my name is zakiya


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really good Big Grin

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