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and whats Louise's shock?

u'll find out soon, lol! glad u still like it xxxx

You're such a tease!!! LOL! Bet the next bit is really good, it always is! I absolutly love this fic and it is defo my fav!!! Please do more, can't wait for the next bit LOL! xxx

Chapter Fifty-six

The next morning, Louise stood on the balcony of her hotel room in Ibiza. The sun was shining in the azure blue sky, and there wasn’t a cloud in sight. Louise looked down to the hotel’s private beach, with white sand and palm trees, and waves lapping at the shore. She sighed and closed her eyes, feeling the warm sun on her face. It was paradise.

Warren came up behind her, and slid his hands softly down her shoulders and arms, until his hands were resting on top of hers. “Hey babe”, he whispered in her ear, and kissed her hair and neck a little. Louise smiled, his touch making her tingle all over.
“Hey”, she said, without turning round. “This is so beautiful”, she said.
“I know”, said Warren. Louise turned to face him, and kissed him lingeringly on the lips.

“Mmm”, sighed Warren, kissing her back. “I love you”, he said, looking into her eyes.
“I love you too”, said Louise, her heart beating faster. His intense gaze made her weak at the knees even now, when she’d known him so long.

“Do you want to go and get some breakfast?” said Warren.
“Yeah”, said Louise. She smiled. “But first…I want to do this”, she said, and kissed him again, slowly undoing his belt.
“Hmm, sounds good to me”, whispered Warren.
“Good, let’s go back to bed then”, said Louise, smiling.

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Two hours later, Louise walked through the hotel lobby, holding Warren’s hand. She wore platform sandals and a short red dress, with her hair loose. Warren could see the other men standing in the lobby turn round and admire her as she walked past them. He loved that she was all his. They walked out onto the hotel terrace, and sat down.

Warren touched Louise’s chin gently, turning her towards him, and kissed her. “I’m head over heels for you”, he whispered.

Louise smiled. “Why are you being so cute baby?” She put her hand on his knee.
“Cause I love you so much”, said Warren, his heart beating faster.
“I love you so much”, said Louise. “Warren – you mean everything to me”, she whispered, and kissed him again. Warren felt like he was going to melt. He was completely overwhelmed with love.

“So what do you want to do today?” he said, finally.
“Hmmm….lie on the beach all day”, said Louise. “And then go to a bar tonight?”

“Yeh, sounds good”, said Warren. Louise got up to go to the bathroom, and Warren gazed at the view for a few minutes. It really was like paradise here. Then he pulled his wallet out of his pocket, opening it and looking at the photo of the twins that he always kept inside it. He smiled seeing their faces, and felt himself missing them. They were so beautiful, with blue eyes and long blonde hair. He wondered where the blonde hair came from - perhaps it was his mum...?

Louise came back and sat down next to him, interrupting his thoughts.

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another fab post!!
hope they stay happy though lol good 2 have twists though lol

Yeh, really want them to stay happy! Another Fab post! Please do more soon

hey guys, can't stop writing at the moment, lol! here's some more...

Chapter Fifty-seven

“Hi babe – what are you thinking about?” asked Louise, seeing that Warren looked lost in thought.
“Nothing”, said Warren, pushing the thoughts of his mum out of his mind.

“I just got a phone call from Chloe”, said Louise. “Apparently her boyfriend’s been having an affair! How could he do that to her?!” Warren leaned forward so he was closer to Louise.

“Well you did it to Calvin”, he said. Louise frowned.
“Yeah, I suppose. But that was different.”

“Why, cause I’m so utterly irresistible?” said Warren, grinning.
“Yeah, exactly”, said Louise, smiling and putting her arms round his neck. Warren leaned closer to her.
“And because I’m much, much…” he brushed his lips against hers “…better in bed than him.” Louise laughed.

“Warren – you’re so arrogant”, she said.
“Yeh, but it’s obvious”, said Warren, grinning. Louise raised her eyebrows.
“Well – I don’t kiss and tell”, she said, smiling.
Warren laughed. “Nobody that boring can be any good in the sack”, he said, biting her lips gently.

“Well at least Calvin wasn’t completely full of himself like someone else I know”, said Louise, smiling, and running her hands up his arms. He had the sexiest arms she thought, they were so strong and tanned. And secretly she loved his cheekiness, but she would never admit it to him. “So shall we go down to the beach? I bought a new bikini”, she said, kissing him.

“Yeh? What’s it like?” said Warren, grinning.
“Hmmm…it’s hot pink, and very, very skimpy”, smiled Louise, kissing him again.
“Sounds good”, said Warren, kissing her back.

Suddenly his phone bleeped, and he picked it up, reading a text message. He frowned.
“Who is it?” asked Louise.
“It’s Carl”, said Warren. “He heard we’re in Ibiza, and he wants to meet up this afternoon, with Rachel. What do you reckon?”
“Um…yeah, it’d be good to see Rachel again”, said Louise, looking away. She liked Carl, but he’d always been bad news.
“Ok, I’ll tell him to come here”, said Warren, missing Louise’s hint.
“Yeah, great”, said Louise, rolling her eyes.

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A few hours later it was a boiling hot afternoon, and Warren and Carl sat on the hotel beach, drinking beer and watching Louise and Rachel splashing around in the water.
“You got yourself a good one there mate”, said Carl, looking at Louise. “She’s gorgeous.”
“Yeh, tell me about it”, said Warren, taking a swig of his beer and looking at Louise. “You haven’t done bad yourself”, he said, looking at Rachel. “Apart from the fact that she fancied me for about three years.”

Carl grinned. “Yeh, but then she saw sense and got herself a real man.” Warren laughed.
“You better watch it mate”, he said, and Carl grinned. “So how’s the businesses going?”

“Good”, said Carl, lighting a cigarette. “I’ve made a killing, if I’m honest with ya.”
“Yeh?”
“Yeah, I’m still doing all the dealing – smack, coke, E – you name it really. How about you?”
Warren looked at Louise. “Yeh, I still do a bit on the side”, he said. “But I don’t get my hands dirty.” Carl nodded.
“How much money you making?”
Warren shrugged. “I don’t know, about 10k a month probably.” Carl smiled, and shook his head.
“Petty cash, mate. We need to talk”, he said, as Louise and Rachel came running over.

“Hey babe!” said Louise, sitting down next to Warren and kissing him. “The water’s so nice!”
“Yeah it’s gorgeous!” said Rachel. “So let’s see a picture of the twins then!” Louise took Warren’s wallet and opened it. “Awww, they’re beautiful!!” exclaimed Rachel. Carl leaned over her shoulder.

“Good job they inherited your looks”, he said to Louise, and grinned. Louise laughed, and put her hand on Warren’s arm.
“Very funny”, said Warren.

“So are you guys going out tonight?” asked Rachel.
“Yeah, we’re going to Warren’s mate’s bar in San An”, said Louise. “And then going clubbing tomorrow.”
“Cool, let’s all go clubbing together tomorrow then”, said Rachel. “It’ll be like old times! And we should go shopping in the day, too.”
“Definitely!” said Louise. Warren looked at Carl and rolled his eyes.
“Women, eh?” he said.
“I know, they’re obsessed”, said Carl.

“Shut up you two”, laughed Louise.
“I’m going to go and get some more drinks, come on Carl”, said Rachel, grabbing his hand. “See you in a bit.” They walked off up to the hotel, leaving Warren and Louise alone.

“So what was Carl saying?” asked Louise. “Is he still up to his old tricks?”
“Nothing much babe”, said Warren. “We were just talking about how fit you look in your bikini”, he said, grinning.
Louise smiled, and lay down on the sand next to him. “Well I might need some help taking it off later”, she said. Warren smiled, kissing her, and she lay on top of him. “I love you”, she said.
“I love you too”, said Warren, kissing her deeply.

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FAB!!! This fic is so amazin' LOL! Please do more!

Aww! Great!!<3
Let them be happy Lol.x
Do more soon please!!

just caught up...its great!!!!

Please do more....!!! Its FAB!

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hi every1, have done the nxt bit, its very soppy, lol!

Chapter Fifty-eight

Later that night, Warren and Louise had a romantic meal together, then headed to a bar in San Antonio, which belonged to Warren’s old friend Marco.

“This is the bar where we first got together, do you remember?”, said Louise.
“Yeh”, said Warren. “That’s why I brought you back here.” Louise smiled. She looked stunning, in a short white silk dress, platforms and her hair tied back.
“Awww, you can be romantic”, she said, running her hands down his chest and kissing him.

“Yeh, I have my moments”, said Warren, smiling. Suddenly Marco came in, and saw Warren sitting at the bar.
“Ahh, long time no see!” he exclaimed, walking up to Warren and shaking his hand. “You never told me you were coming!”

“Yeh well you know me Marco, it’s always best to expect the unexpected”, said Warren. Louise smiled. “You remember my gorgeous girlfriend Louise, don’t you?” he said, taking Louise’s hand.
“Yeah, of course. I hope you’re looking after him”, said Marco, making Louise smile. “And how are the little girls?” he asked. Warren took out his wallet, and showed Marco the photo. “God, they’re growing up quickly, and they’re so beautiful! Lucky for them they inherited mama’s looks, eh?” he laughed, and winked at Louise.

Warren rolled his eyes. “Not you as well”, he said. “Everybody makes that joke.”
“Awww, and he’s very handsome anyway, aren’t you babe”, said Louise, kissing him.
“If you say so”, said Warren, smiling and kissing her back.

“Have you got drinks?” said Marco.
“Yeh, we’re sorted, cheers mate”, said Warren.

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An hour or so later, Louise stood in front of Warren, cuddling him. “This has been the best night”, she said.
“Yeh?” said Warren, running his hands softly up and down her sides. “Well I know the perfect way to end it”, he said.
“Oh yeah?” said Louise, moving even closer to him. “How’s that?” Warren stood up, his heart beating fast. Then he pulled something out of his pocket, and got down on one knee.

Louise gasped, and everyone in the bar turned round to look. “Louise – will you marry me?” said Warren, opening the box, to reveal a sparkling diamond engagement ring. Louise could hardly speak, she was so shocked and happy.

“Warren – yes!!” she said, laughing. He slid the ring on her finger, and everybody in the bar clapped. “I love you!!” breathed Louise, hugging him tightly.
“I love you too babe!” said Warren, hugging her back and lifting her up slightly.

“Champagne for everybody!” said Marco, laughing, and everyone cheered. “Congratulations!” he said to Louise. “I’ve never seen him look so nervous!” Louise laughed.
“Neither have I!”
“Yeh well if you’d said no I’d never have been able to show my face here again”, said Warren.

The bartender poured the champagne, and they clinked their glasses together, Louise sitting on Warren’s knee.
“We’re engaged!!” she said, still breathless with excitement. “I can’t believe you, Warren”, she giggled. “Where did you get this ring?!!”
Warren smiled. “Katy helped me choose it”, he said.
“So she knew about this!!”
“Yeh”, said Warren. Louise looked at the ring.

“It’s so beautiful!!” she said. “I’m the luckiest girl alive. Well – maybe the second luckiest.”
“Why?” asked Warren.
“Well, Angelina Jolie…” said Louise, laughing.
“Oi!” said Warren. “Are you saying you’d rather marry Brad Pitt than me?”
“Well…” said Louise, teasing him.
“Wait til I get you back to the hotel”, said Warren, running his hand down her back.
“Hmmm, I can’t wait to have you all to myself”, she whispered, and gave him a long, gentle kiss on the lips.
“Mmm”, sighed Warren, putting his arms around her.

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It was 2am, and Warren and Louise walked through the hotel lobby and into the lift. Louise was slightly tipsy, and she leaned against the side of the lift, pulling Warren towards her and kissing him deeply.

“I’ve always wanted to…you know, in a lift”, she said, smiling wickedly and pulling him closer to her.
“Yeh? That’s because you’re a bad little girl”, whispered Warren, kissing her harder and running his hand gently up her legs.
“Mmmm…” breathed Louise. Suddenly the lift stopped, and the doors opened. An elderly couple stepped inside, and Louise giggled.

“Maybe not then”, she whispered. Eventually they reached their floor, and Warren opened the door of their room. The lamps were on, and Warren sat down on the bed. Louise walked over, and stood in front of him. He gazed into her eyes.
"I like this dress babe", he said.
"So you don't want me to take it off", said Louise, smiling.
"Hmmm, I don't like it that much", said Warren. He ran his hands slowly up her legs, pulling up her dress a little. Louise leaned back slightly, closing her eyes. His touch made her go weak inside.

“Lou”, he whispered.
“Yeah?”
“I’m so happy”, he said.
“Me too, I’ve never been this happy”, she said, sitting down next to him on the bed. She felt like she was melting inside, feeling so close to him. “Warren”, she said, feeling like her heart would burst.
“Yeh?” he whispered.
“Make love to me”, she said, stroking his cheek with her hand. “Really slowly”, she whispered, “I want to feel really close to you.”

Warren looked into her eyes, suddenly feeling something deeper than he’d ever known before. “I love you so much”, he whispered, kissing her slowly and softly on the lips.
“Mmmm…” sighed Louise, undoing the buttons on his shirt one by one. She was hopelessly in love with him.

Brill again

you're an amazing writer Sarah!!
Love it!..please do moree!!!!

OMG!!! Another FAB post, this fic keeps on gettin' better, its amazing!!! You should write for hollyoaks LOL!!! Please do more soon....

its sooo brill
please do more

omg sooo good

to be honest I thought it would get very boring at this point with kids involved and everything but...you proved me wrong.
this fic is still fantastic
1 of my favourites at the moment lol

Please do more soon, it GREAT!!!

Omg!!!! awwww...its so sweet...it just gets better and better!!!!

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Omg!!!! awwww...its so sweet...it just gets better and better!!!!

Totally agree!!! This fic is 100% amazin', please do more....I just cant get anough of it, its FAB!!! LOL