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Chapter Sixty

Carmel sat in Evissa, eating her lunch with Calvin. Louise’s mum had left the twins with her while she went into town for an hour, and Warren and Louise were due back from Ibiza at any moment. Suddenly the door opened, and Warren burst in.

“Hello my darlings!!” he said excitedly, sitting down on the floor and opening his arms.

“Daddy!!” yelled the twins, running up to him and showering him with kisses.

“Hey! I missed you so much”, said Warren, hugging them tightly. “What's going on? Are you helping Carmel out in the salon?”

“Yes!!” laughed the twins. “Daddy, I want to be a haircutter when I grow up!” said Emma.
“Yeh?” said Warren. "It's not a haircutter babe, it's a hairdresser", he said.
"Hairdresser", repeated Emma.
"That's right", said Warren.
“So do I!” said Lily. “Can I cut your hair daddy?” Warren laughed.
“My hair doesn’t need cutting does it?” he said. “Have you been good while I’ve been away?”

“Yes!!” they said, jumping up and down with excitement. Warren laughed and tickled them, and they giggled loudly.
“Awww, they’ve been as good as gold, haven’t you girls”, said Carmel.

Calvin watched them making such a fuss of Warren, and suddenly felt a knot of jealousy in his stomach. That should have been me, he thought to himself bitterly.

“So did you have a nice holiday?” asked Carmel.
“Yeh, it was really good thanks”, said Warren.
“Did Louise manage to chill out?” said Carmel. Warren looked away, slightly awkwardly.

“Yeh, she’s feeling much better now”, he said.

“Daddy?” said Lily, pulling at his t-shirt.
“What is it sweetheart”, said Warren.
“I love you”, she said, putting her arms round him and kissing him. Warren felt like his heart would melt.

“I love you too”, he said. Suddenly Louise opened the door and walked in. She paused slightly seeing Warren with the girls. It felt a little strange to her, after everything they’d been through in Ibiza.

“Hi Louise!!” said Carmel.
“Hi Carmel!” she said, pulling herself together. “Hi girls!!” she said, kneeling down on the floor next to Warren and giving them a hug.

“I heard you had a lovely time”, said Carmel. Warren looked at Louise uneasily, but she smiled at Carmel.
“Yeah, it was great”, she said. “And…!” she said, smiling and holding up her hand.

Carmel saw the engagement ring on Louise’s finger, and her jaw dropped. “Oh. My. God!! You’re engaged!!” she giggled, excitedly.

“Yeah!!” squeaked Louise. “Isn’t it a beautiful ring?”

“Oh Louise, it’s gorgeous”, gushed Carmel. “I’m so happy for you, we both are, aren’t we Calvin?”

“Um…yeah, yeah – congratulations”, said Calvin. Louise looked at him uncomfortably.
“Oh – sorry, Calvin – I didn’t…”

“Hey, it’s fine”, said Calvin, thinking it was anything but. He looked at Warren, and Warren grinned at him, unable to resist rubbing salt in his wounds. Calvin turned away, angrily. How did it end up that Warren was living the life he should have had?

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is it just me or can you sense some trouble coming...?

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Originally posted by sarah8123:

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Originally posted by Mc.Oaks.Fan:

is it just me or can you sense some trouble coming...?

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Chapter Sixty-one

“Alright Rav?” said Warren, walking into the Loft the next day. “Did you miss me?”

“Ahh the wanderer returns”, said Ravi. “Fancy a beer mate?”

“Yeh, go on then”, said Warren. Ravi took two beers out of the fridge and handed one to Warren. “So, how have things been here while I’ve been away?” asked Warren, taking a sip of his beer. “Any problems?”

“No mate, it’s been smooth sailing”, said Ravi.
“Yeh? That’s what I like to hear”, said Warren. “You hired that new barmaid yet?”

“Well I’ve got someone in mind”, said Ravi. Warren looked at him and grinned.
“Oh yeh? What’s her CV like?”
“Well, she’s got some very good qualifications, if you know what I mean”, said Ravi.

“That’s what I like to hear”, said Warren, taking a swig of his beer.

“I’d like to take her for a test drive just to be sure, but I’ve heard Mercedes have excellent handling.” Warren laughed.

“Well I’d know all about that”, he said.
“No, you and Mercedes?” said Ravi.

“Yeh”, said Warren. “Been there, done that.”
“And?” said Ravi. Suddenly Louise came up the stairs and walked over to them.

“Hey, what are you two talking about?” she asked, putting her hand on Warren’s shoulder.
“The new barmaid”, said Ravi. “I’ve got someone in mind.”

“Oh, sorry – I should’ve told you not to bother”, said Louise. “I’ve found someone.”

“You what?” said Ravi. “Who?”
“Nancy Hayton.” Ravi’s face fell.
“Nancy?”
“Yep”, said Louise. Suddenly her phone rang, and she answered it.

“Gutted!” said Warren, grinning.
“Aww can’t you put in a good word for Mercedes? I haven’t got laid in weeks!” said Ravi.
“How desperate are you?” said Warren.
“Er…very?” said Ravi.
Warren laughed. "Well at least you're honest."

Louise snapped shut her phone and walked back over to them.
“So, what do you reckon babe?” she asked. “I think Nancy is perfect.”
“I’m not convinced”, said Warren, looking at Ravi. “Has she even done any bar work before?”

“Well – no, but she’s hardworking, punctual, efficient – just what this place needs", said Louise.

“Yeh but – we also need someone who can pull in the punters”, said Warren.

“You mean – someone with big boobs and a short skirt?” said Louise, sarcastically.

“Well yeah, now you mention it”, muttered Ravi. Louise rolled her eyes.
“I don’t think you need any more distractions”, she said. “Besides, there’s too much testosterone flying around in here as it is. In fact, I think Nancy will be a good influence on you”, she said, and walked into the office.

“But I want a bad influence”, said Ravi, making Warren laugh. “Right, I’m just nipping out for lunch”, he said.

“Ok”, said Warren. He walked into the office and shut the door behind him. Louise was sitting on the desk, and he walked over to her and stood in front of her.

“Hey”, she said, running her hands down his chest and smiling. She looked at her watch. “Do you want some lunch?”

“Maybe”, said Warren. “It depends what’s on the menu." Louise ran her hands down his chest and smiled.

“Me”, she said. Warren kissed her on the lips.
“Mmm, very tasty”, he whispered, gently pulling her towards him as she undid his belt.

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Chapter Sixty-two

Half an hour later, Ravi came back up the stairs. “Warren?” he called.
“Alright?” said Warren, coming out of the office.
“Oh, there you are”, said Ravi. “I’ll look after the place while you go and grab some food if you want.”

“Nah – I already had lunch”, said Warren, looking at Louise as she walked out of the office.
Ravi raised his eyebrows.
“I see”, he said. Louise walked up to Warren and gave him a long kiss on the lips.
“I’ll see you later my darling”, she said, holding his hands.
“Yeh, see you later babe”, he said, holding her hand as she walked away.

“You’re completely smitten aren’t you?”, said Ravi, seeing Warren’s eyes following her down the stairs.

“You could say that”, said Warren, walking behind the bar and grabbing two beers. He handed one to Ravi.

“The thing is”, said Ravi, “You and I – we’re surrounded by proper fit girls, on a nightly basis.”
“And most of them are gagging for us”, said Warren, jokingly.
“Well I like to think so”, said Ravi, laughing. “So don’t you ever want to…have a bit of what you fancy?”

Warren took a sip of his beer. “Yeh well I would have done before Louise”, he said. “But when I met her, it changed everything.” He smiled. “I remember when I first saw her.”

“Oh yeah? And how long did it take you to get her into bed?” asked Ravi, cheekily.
“Much too long”, said Warren. “But she wasn’t exactly no strings attached.”
“How do you mean?”
“She was married”, said Warren.
“Oh yeah?”
“Yeh – to my best mate.”

“Really?” said Ravi, laughing. “So what happened to him then?” Warren looked away.

“He was murdered”, he said.
Ravi frowned. “Are you serious? Poor Louise!”
“Yeh well he wasn’t exactly a model husband”, said Warren. “He threatened her, smacked her about, cheated on her.”
Ravi shrugged. “Sounds heavy”, he said. “So when did this happen?”

“Just leave it mate, yeh?” said Warren, suddenly.
“Sorry, I didn’t mean to…”
“…yeh, I know”, said Warren. “It’s just – I like to leave the past in the past.”
“Yeah, course – no worries”, said Ravi.

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Later that day, Warren walked into Evissa. Carmel and Louise were standing around, drinking tea and talking to Calvin.

“Alright babe?” said Warren, walking up to Louise. He looked at Calvin. “Come to get your nails done?” he said.

“No, actually I just wanted to let Louise know that things are moving forward with the murder investigation”, said Calvin.

“Oh yeh?” said Warren, staring straight back at him, without even flinching. “Don’t tell me you coppers are actually doing some work for a change.”

“Aww, Calvin works dead hard, don’t you?” said Carmel, kissing him. Warren rolled his eyes.

“Yeah – we’re taking this case very seriously”, said Calvin, glaring back at Warren.
“I’m glad to hear it”, said Warren. “Whoever did this deserves to be behind bars for a long time.”

“Oh, don’t worry – they will be”, said Calvin.
“Yeah, don’t worry Louise”, said Carmel, turning to her friend. “We’re going to catch whoever did this to poor Sean!” Louise smiled weakly, and Warren laughed.

“So you’re working with Calvin are you Carm? Then I’m sure it’ll be case closed in no time”, he said, sarcastically.
“Aww, thanks Warren – that’s dead sweet of you!” said Carmel, missing his sarcasm.

Calvin frowned at Warren, then turned to Carmel. “Right, I’ll see you later princess, yeah?”

“Ok, be careful!” said Carmel, as Calvin walked out the door. Louise slammed her mug down on the desk and walked into her office. “Is she ok?” asked Carmel.

“I don’t know, I better just…” said Warren, following Louise into the office and shutting the door behind him. Louise sat on the desk, her head in her hands.

“Louise! What’s up?” said Warren. Louise looked at him.
“Warren – what do you think?!” she said. Warren rolled his eyes.
“Look, if it’s Calvin…”
“…Of course it’s Calvin!” said Louise. “It feels like everyone’s watching us!” Tears came into her eyes.

“Babe, they’re not”, said Warren, taking her hands. “And don’t worry about Calvin. He’d be out of his depth in a paddling pool.” Warren looked into her eyes, and swallowed. “Come on babe, don’t lose it now”, he whispered. Louise took a deep breath, and ran her hands down his chest, holding onto his t-shirt.

“How can you be so strong?” she asked.
“Because you have to be”, whispered Warren, leaning his forehead against hers.

“I just – I don’t want to lose you Warren”, said Louise.
“Lou, you’re not going to lose me”, he said. Louise pulled away, and looked around the office.

“You know – Sean beat me up in here, gave me a black eye. But no-one remembers any of those things, do they?” said Louise, a tear trickling down her cheek. “In the papers, they just call him an ‘upstanding business man’ and a ‘respectable member of the community’. It makes me so angry.”

Warren looked away. “I know”, he said. “Listen, I've got to get back to the Loft”, he said, wiping away her tears. “Are you going to be ok?"

Louise breathed out. “Yeah, I’ll be fine”, she said, pulling herself together.
“Ok – see you later”, said Warren. He walked out of the office.

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Originally posted by sarah8123:
hi guys, did the nxt bit, its not very dramatic at the moment lol, hope its not 2 borin! theres some drama coming up soon tho!

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