Hi guys this is my newest idea for a fic it is John Paul and Kieron. I am still a McDean fan but I like JP and Kieron. This is before what’s this week so just imagine that what has happened this week hasn’t happened. So here is my new story.

John Paul was in the kitchen drinking tea when Carmel came into the room.
“Hi Carm” he smiled.
“Hiya Babes! Have you seen my mobile?” Carmel replied.
“Nope sorry sis, When did you last have it?”John Paul asked putting his empty mug over beside the sink.
“I can’t remember, I was on the phone to Calvin when I came in last night. Ah I know I left it in the garden!” she said, before running out of the back door.
John Paul laughed at his sister, he turned around and started filling the sink with water to do the dishes.
“Hello anyone home!” John Paul heard the familiar voice of Kieron call.
“Yeah! ” John Paul yelled back.
Kieron came into the kitchen and saw John Paul doing the dishes.”Do you want me to dry them?”
“Yeah ok thanks, “ John Paul smiled.
Kieron picked up the dish towel and started drying the dishes that John Paul was washing. Kieron put a plate down after drying it and flicked John Paul with the towel.
“Are you trying to start a fight?”John Paul said sarcastically.
“Hmmmm maybe,” Kieron said innocently.
“Oh thats it!” John Paul said. He picked up some bubbles from the sink and blew them in Kieron’s face. He then ran through to the living room. Kieron laughed and ran after him, he started chasing John Paul around the room.
Kieron tripped and fell onto the couch so John Paul jamp on top of him and pinned him to the couch. They were both laughing uncontrollably. As the laughter died they both realised the position they were in so John Paul climbed of Kieron, grabbed his jacket and headed out the door.
Kieron sat on the couch he was so annoyed he liked John Paul alot but he took a vow when he became a priest to not have sex. But Kieron knew that he wanted John Paul so his vow would be broken is not soon then later.

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Nice work - looking forward to seeing what you write next - given tonight's E4 calamity!

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Thanks here is the next part xxx

The next day Kieron was in the bathroom he had just come out of the shower, he was standing in front of the mirror drying himself of. Suddenly the door opened.

“Oh sorry I didn’t know anyone was in here,” John Paul said nervously.

“It’s fine I’m finished now so I’ll just go,” Kieron said, before walking past John Paul and out of the bathroom.

John Paul sighed, every time he and Kieron were alone there was an awkward silence or some small talk. John Paul turned on the shower and climbed into it, he let the water cascade over him. He just wished his troubles would wash away as easily.

Once he was dressed John Paul went downstairs and went into the kitchen. Kieron was in there eating toast. John Paul smiled awkwardly, he leaned over Kieron to get to the mugs that were behind him. His face was inches from Kieron’s, so they both leaned in and they kissed ......


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Amazing keep it goin!.

Carry on plz

hi this is not hollyoaks chick i am her mate abi she has let me read this and all i can say is brilliant !!!!!!!!!!!!!! can u please rite more ????????????


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Kieron was walking through the village, he came to the fountain and sat down. He looked up at the sky. Oh God, why did you put me in to a house with someone as good looking and kind as John Paul? I love him so much but w can’t be together I know that because I am a priest and my loyalty is to you,” Kieron put his head in his hands and started sobbing.

Back at the McQueen’s John Paul had gotten out of bed and went to the bathroom. He turned on the shower and went over to the sink and looked at himself in the mirror. “Oh why God why did I sleep with Kieron? I mean I do care for him but I don’t love him the same way I loved Craig it’s just not worth it, it’s not worth everyone hating me I can’t go through that again,” John Paul let out a big sigh. He didn’t know what he wanted but he didn’t want to mess Kieron around.

Kieron started strolling back to the McQueen’s he saw a two young boys around John Paul’s age walking along hand in hand they were laughing and joking. It was then that Kieron made his choice about him and John Paul.

John Paul was sitting downstairs in the living room flicking through the channels on the tele. He stopped on a channel it had a show called As The World Turns it was an American soap. There was two guys on it they were madly in love Luke and Noah were their names. Anyway they were so in love they went everywhere together and did everything together. It was then that John Paul made his choice about him and Kieron.


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IT me this time hollyoakschick this is amazing
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Kieron walked through the McQueen’s front door.”Hello John Paul.”

“Hi,” John Paul replied quietly.

Kieron walked round the couch and sat down beside John Paul.

“Kieron.”“John Paul.”

They said at the same time. They both laughed nervously. “You go first,” Kieron smiled. “No it’s fine you can,” John Paul said. “Ok then I will, erm John Paul we need to talk about what happened,” he stuttered out.

“Yeah we do,” John Paul agreed nodding his head.

“Well erm... I erm... John Paul I love you,” Kieron eventually got it out.

“Oh Kieron I wish I could say the same but I amn’t sure how I feel about you exactly,” John Paul said hesitantly.

“Oh right well then,” Kieron said looking down. “Lets just for forget it then.” Kieron then got up from the couch.

“No Kieron wait! Please don’t go I don’t want to lose you,” John Paul said grabbing onto Kieron’s arms. Kieron was trying to hold back the tears.

“John Paul you’ve just said you’re not sure how you feel about me and now you’re saying you don’t want to lose me,” Kieron said, slightly angered by what John Paul was saying.


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there should be more in a litle while xxxx

never meant rite now
i hink u r amazing at this
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really enjoying it, and I need cheering up after how horrible JP has been this week. Keep it coming - great story so far ...

thanks so much for the lovely comments hollyoakschick (sory dont know ur name) and aljc100(sory dont know ur name either) heres the next part xxx

“Yeah basically, I really don’t wanna lose you Kieron I do care for you but I amn’t sure if I love you or not. I’m sorry,” John Paul said sincerely.

“Yeah of course you are,” Kieron said disbelievingly .

“No Kieron please, I’m being serious I am sorry,” John Paul said trying to get Kieron to stay.

Kieron sighed he knew John Paul was telling the truth. “Ok then John Paul I believe you i accept your apology.”

“Thank you,” John Paul smiled slightly.

Kieron felt the urge to hug John Paul so he held out his arms. John Paul knew that Kieron wanted a cuddle so he opened his arms and squeezed Kieron tightly. Kieron squeezed him tightly back. They both pulled their heads back slightly and looked into each other’s eyes. John Paul saw the affection no love in Kieron’s eyes. They both leaned in slowly and they kissed. John Paul pulled back “Are you sure?” Kieron nodded and kissed John Paul again. They stumbled upstairs and into John Paul’s bedroom.


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hi it is abi hollyoakschicks best mate abi
hollyoakschick name is Niki
and i have to say this is really good


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This is great stuff. I actually prefer it to what actually happened on Hollyoaks. Please keep writing

Great writing again ... And I'm with Blue Bird Rose, this is certainly better than what happened this week. I'm still angry with JP! I'm Anna btw.

Thanks abi nd blue bird rose nd anna here is the next part xxx

The next morning John Paul woke up an turned over, Kieron felt him move.” Hmmmm morning,” Kieron smiled sweetly.

“Morning yourself,” John Paul said.

“We better get up before your mum wonders where we are cause usually we’re downstairs by now,” Kieron said sitting up.

“Yeah I guess you’re right,” John Paul replied.

Kieron climbed out from under the covers, pulled on some clean clothes and went back over to the bed. “John Paul you have to get out of bed and go downstairs NOW!”

John Paul looked slightly disappointed but he got up and left the room. Kieron knew he had been a bit harsh to shout at John Paul like that but he didn’t want anyone to find out about them because if they did they wouldn’t understand. They would be really judgemental and they wouldn’t understand that he loved John Paul. He walked out of the room and down the stairs. Myra was sitting in the living room watching the tele.

“Morning Kieron love,” she said not taking her eyes of the screen she was glued to GMTV.

“Morning Myra,” Kieron said walking past the back of the couch and into the kitchen.

John Paul was sitting in at the counter. “John Paul I’m sorry,” he said quietly.

“No you’re not Kieron you wanted me out of there and you made yourself perfectly clear,” John Paul said quite loudly.

Myra must have heard John Paul because she came into the kitchen. “Is everything ok in here boys?”

“Yeah,” they both replied gloomily.

“Ok, John Paul love can you do me a favour?” Myra smiled.

“Yes mum what is it?” John Paul replied.

“Can you go to the shop and get us a pint of milk?”

“Yep I’ll go now,” he said before grabbing his jacket and heading out of the front door. He ran all the way to Drive N Buy. When he was in the shop he went over to the fridge and picked up a pint of milk. He walked over to the counter. “Hey Han.”

“Hiya John Paul,” Hannah said chirpily.

“How have you been?” John Paul asked.

“I’ve been fine thanks, what about you?” Hannah asked she could see there was something troubling John Paul.

“Yeah same.”

“Are you sure there’s nothing wrong?” Hannah asked worriedly.

“Positive why?”

“Just wondered, but if there is something wrong no matter what time of day it is promise you’ll tell me,” Hannah said not convinced.

“Promise Han but for just now. Just the milk thanks,” John Paul said putting the milk on the counter.

“75p then,” Hannah said holding out her hand.

John Paul dug his hands in his pockets to find some money, he found a pound coin and handed it to Hannah. “Keep the change.”

“Thanks,” Hannah said.

John Paul smiled and left the shop, he would have to go back home now and try and talk things out with Kieron.

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HI this is really good
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