thanks guys ther wil be more soon xxxx

can't wait !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


This is my fav fic at the mo !

soon isn't soon enough! =)

Hi Just read this was going to read it on FH but well just caught up here.

wonder when Craig shouts at JP for dumping him and starting another secret relationship.

I like Keiron but hypocrit comes to mind

Love the way you have written this story and am enjoying it

thanks guys, heres the next bit sory its taken me so long xxx

Kieron and John Paul walked into the pub, Craig decided to follow them. So he walked in behind them, he saw them standing beside the pool table. Craig walked over to the bar, he felt his jealousy kick in again. He still loved John Paul, how could he not they used love each other so much.
Kieron saw Craig staring over at them, he tapped John Paul on the shoulder and motioned towards the bar, John Paul nodded. Kieron walked over to the bar and stood beside Craig. “Can you not just go back to Dublin?”
“No I want to stay here this is my home!” Craig said annoyed.
“Fine but you do know you have no chance with John Paul?” Kieron asked.
“Yeah we’ll just see won’t we,” Craig said before walking off.

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really good
Craig better not intefere though !

i wonder whar craig's going do

oooooh the drama!
In a good way though. And don't worry about taking a while to post it up: absense makes the heart grow fonder XD
so to speak...
I'm loving this ^_^

I agree - a bit of light relief is good for you! Really enjoying this story - I somehow think Craig is building up to something, no? Btw, did Kieron's new haircut remind you of anyone?

^ his haircut did remind me of someone but I cannot for the life of me think who!
But it happens to me all the time.

i do kinda recognise th hair do bt i dont know wher from x Thanks for th nice comments guys it makes me feel so happy tht u's like it th nxt bit shood be up on saturday coz iv got drama lessons tomro xxxx

i no it's kinda wierd but i like Kieron's hair cut . with eyes and a smile like his he could carry off any look !

can't wait til saturday !

i like his haircut too . heres th next part sory its short xxx

Kieron looked frustrated, Craig was so annoying why should he try and take John Paul away from him. He loved John Paul but then again so did Craig.


Craig was running up the stairs to the flat above the dog. Kieron was really irritating he had stolen John Paul and now he was trying to steal the life he should have had with John Paul. Craig loved John Paul but then so did Kieron.


Kieron walked back to the pool table where John Paul was waiting for him to return with their drinks. “Here you go a pint for you and a pint for me,” he smiled at John Paul handing him his drink.


“Thanks,” John Paul returned Kieron’s smile.

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really good !

brill!!!!!!!

nah now keiron juss looks abit like craig wiv his new haircut lol

more tomro hopefully

Hey Louise!

Can't wait!

sory its taken so long heres the next bit enjoy

Kieron and John Paul went back to the McQueen’s, as they walked into the street someone came up behind them it was Niall.

“Hey guys,” Niall smiled at the pair.

“Hello,” John Paul and Kieron replied in unison.

“So where are you two going?” Niall asked with his arms round the shoulders of the two men.

“Just back to the house, where were you off to?” John Paul asked inquisitively.

“No where really I was just out for the fresh air cause I have been cooped up in my flat for the past few days because I have been unwell .”

“Aw sorry to hear that mate,” Kieron said sympathetically.

“Oh no it’s fine I’m much better now anyway,” Niall said. “ Right well I best be off, I’ll meet you guys in the dog tonight?”

“Yeah ok,” Kieron said nodding his head.

Niall walked off in the direction of the middle of the village, he had an evil smirk on his face he would ruin John Paul’s life one way or another.


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Hey louise
this is great

He better not hurt Kieron or i will be so sad!!!!!!!!

Please Louise don't make him hurt Kieron!!or kill him!!!!!!!!

dun dun dahhhhh

evil nial what will happen next?
this is great

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Originally posted by hollyoakschick:
Hey louise
this is great

He better not hurt Kieron or i will be so sad!!!!!!!!

Please Louise don't make him hurt Kieron!!or kill him!!!!!!!!

Nikki

dont worry i love kieron too!

il try and keep him safe but i cant promise anything the story has its own little life

Thank god!!!!!

Sorry i am a bit emotional just now!!!!!
one min i am happy next i am crying!

U keep him safe or u will have me to answer to!