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thanks hers the next part xx

The ambulance came, they asked John Paul if he wanted to come with them and John Paul’s reply was. “Of course I do, he’s my boyfriend!”
“Ok,” the ambulance guy said quite scared at John Paul’s outburst.
Once they were in the back of the ambulance, the paramedic hooked them up to a machine. He said to John Paul it was to check his heartbeat.
They arrived at the hospital ten or so minutes later, the paramedics took Kieron inside John Paul was following them.
They took Kieron to a room and the nurses came in and hooked him up to lots of machines. John Paul stood outside the room till they had finished sorting Kieron.
John Paul walked into the room, he went over to Kieron’s bed and sat down on it. He took Kieron’s hand in his, “I love you Kieron with all my heart.” John Paul kissed Kieron’s hand but then the machine made the noise John Paul had been dreading BEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEP.



please comment xxxxxxxx


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Eek

More soon please!

Can't wait til the next update!
 
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Love it!!
Do more soon!!!!!!


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i can't breathe brill update please update soon
 
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ooooooo nooooooooo!!!! Hope it's going to be alright - fingers crossed. Don't keep us in suspense!


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I neeed fic!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
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I've caught up with this and holy sh!

Kieron cannot die, not like that! It's just so cruel.


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Louise i am missin u and u r fics!!!!!!!!!! Frown
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I need an update Louise!


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Hurry up tommorow

i think thats when my Crazi Louise is back!
xxx Hug

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LOUISE !!

I CAN C U!
 
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Louise

Gaby me Michelle Cokey

are talkin in the off topic


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thanks all, heres the update this part is for Nikki since shes not so hyper today!

John Paul didn’t notice anything for those few minutes, he didn’t notice the doctors and nurses fill Kieron’s room so quickly, he didn’t notice them telling him to leave the room, he didn’t notice them shocking Kieron. John Paul was not aware he was walking away from the room, but even though his heart told him to stay at the hospital his legs had a mind of their own and they continued to move all the way back to the McQueen’s.

sory its short!! xxxxxxxxxx


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Thanx!


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brill update

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great update louise please update soon
 
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oh no!

I want moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee. =)


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Any updates today Louise ? Big Grin
 
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Go on Louise - you know you want to ... Cool


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update as promised for all my forum buddies!! Big Grin

The next day John Paul was woken up by the sound of Michaela singing Mercy by Duffy rather terribly. He put the pillow over his head and tried to go back to sleep.
He heard a soft knock on his door,” Come in,” he mumbled into his pillow.
John Paul heard the door handle turn. “John Paul love I have something to tell you,” he heard his mother’s voice she sounded concerned.
John Paul lifted his head up. “What is it mum?”
“It’s Kieron love, he’s in hospital!” Myra choked out.
“Is he still alive?”
“Yes he is love,” Myra said.
John Paul didn’t bother replying he quickly pulled on some jeans and a top and left the house, he ran all the way to the hospital.


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The next day John Paul was woken up by the sound of Michaela singing Mercy by Duffy rather terribly


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that made me Laugh!

Kieron! Hug
 
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