Rhyrah is my own name for rhys and sarah despite the whole mum sleeping with the boyfriend thing i still think tere's a link
this is set just after amy andjosh come back from Hiding and ive made it te whole neville noel an mum thing happens right then

SARAH'S OV

i cant stn this craig doesnt even listen all he atlks about is this and that not listening to me! amy came back today and josh got taken away i had to speak to him, josh not craig, theres something here which is just not right, something underneath he smooth surface lies cracks and lies and i have a feeling they revolve around josh, i leave a drunk craig and walk over to the ashworth's hannah answers and josh is ehind her, i hearshouting in the background i peer through the gap between there heads seeing a stranger trying to help a upset rhys i push past his brother and sister and go and comfort him, hes hands shaking as he holds his head in his hands, i grab his wrists and make him look at me he hugs me tightely

sarah: rhys are you alright whats happened?

rhys: im not who you think i a

sarah: what are you talking about rhys ashworth?

rhys: im not an asworth, well i am just not there dads one

sarah: rys what are you on about?


sorry first try at a rharayh fic andi think its the first one comments appreciaed

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just read and this fic is great.
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hannah: sarah leave it

sarah: no what does he mean?

josh: stay out of it

sarah: maybe i dont want to!

sarah turns back to rhys and looks ino his eyes

sarah: what do they mean?

rhys: neville aint my dad

josh: dont call him that

rhsy: what am i supposedd to do live a lie and call him dad?

noel: i dont deserve to be your dad your to smart and cool and up there im just a low life

neville: noel just go away

noel goes to leave but sarah grabs his wrist

sarah: how?

noel: you're not very bright are ou girl?

rhys: dont, my mother sept with their uncle whos their dads brother and then she left him and went to neville, who bought me up as his own. but now its time to move on

sarah: rhys he is your dad he took care of you like a dad and stuck by you this man may share your dna bu that doesnt make him your dad at heart

hannah and josh hugged rhys who was denyin it all

rhys: no im fed up i cant live a lie when deep inside i know the truth

neville: come on son

noel: im gon na go

sarah: dont u dare were gonna sort this out.

noel: youve been here five minutes and youve already dug yourself comfy hole

hannah: shes my best friend rhys's ex josh's girlfriends sister and she moved here same time as us, she has more of a plae in our hearts than you ever have or will

sarah: hannah please

josh: sarah stay, you (looking at noel) just wait in the hall i eed to tlak to ou

rhys looked into sarah's eyes and somehow he knew she had been rough it before

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This is reli gd please continue!!!

this is fab.
i can actually see this happening.
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sarah: come on let me get a drink down you

she clung to his hand and guided him to the SUbar where she got the drinks in and set up a pool table.

rhys: how comes when i look at you i can tell you've been through it before, and yet you haven't

sarah: rhys ashworth you do not know every thing about me

rhys: but you call mike dad

sarah: in my heart he is, he looked after me he ironed my clothes he feed me he brought money to our house for necessities

rhys: but he doesnt share your DNA

sarah: DNA? yeah right i dont care about that stuff, but you see were different because you do.

rhys: neville isnt my dad and if i call him dad ill feel guilty cos in my heart i know he aint Hannah and Josh's uncle is and hes dying

sarah: what so some guy you hardly ever see comes up one day says his dying and claims to be your dad. what does dad mean to you?

rhys: can we change the subject?

sarah: fine then, have you got the white stripes new official album?

rhsy: no when did it come out

sarah: i thought youd be the first to get one it came out yesterday.

rhys: things have been going on

sarah: craig doesnt like them so i hardly get to listen to it do you wanna come over and listen to it?

rhys: ok after this game

he smiles at her as she breaks the balls perfectly with the cue and takes a swig of her beer

rhsy: your turning into a bloke

sarah: dont you ever say that.

rhys: well dont act like one then.

Hunni xxx

fabby
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i like this! xx continue plzz

this is reli good i can defo c it happening!!!!

she slaps his am playfully they carry on with the game

sarah: i wonfair and square

rhys: pfft yeah right i let you win

sarah: huh coming form the bloke wholost every one says tht!!!

rhys: lets go listen to that new album

sarah lets her self in and rhys follows her to her room where they sig along word for word to there favourite tracks, the doorbell went but neither of them heard it each immitating guitar or drums as the doorbell went craig came up

craig: why do you like... this... crap? whats he doing here?

srah: he needed cheering up and he wanted to hear the new album

rhsy: look i better go

craig: no stay ill go i no when im not wanted

sarah: crai shut up just lave ok

rhys: no hes your boyfrien ill go

rhys walks out the room as sarah turns the music off he lets himself out as craig shoots dirty looks at the now closed front door

sarah: craig it was only a laugh craig he just needed cheering up hes been through a tough time.

craig: yeah bet that was all an act, you know i bet he has you wrapped round his little finger your so gullable


sarah: get out!

she pushes craig out o her room and down the stsirs where hereluctantly walks out she leans against the front door sinking down crying before retreating back to her room where she realises rhys has left his phone

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Still reli gd!!
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ohh next part plzz lol

lol thanks firsti didnt gt any responses but nowi d its nyce to e the first to do a rhyrah fic!

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sarah picked up his phone and out of interest knowing she shouldnt flicked it open she was shocked to see his bacground was of her and him one day when she had come back form school she smiled to herself as she flicked through his other photos she couldnt help herself most of thm were of her, she decided shed give te phone back latr when she met up with hannah to go to the dog and meet... *sighs *.... craig.

she grabs her jacket which was flung on her bed and headed out to go explain but not befre bumping into gilly, awkward

gilly: hey look do you wanna go fo a pint just lik as friends

sarah: sorry im busy im going out with hannah and craig

gilly: oh i understand, wait aint that rhys's phone?

sarah: yeah heleft it t mine

gilly: he was round yours?

saah: i was playing him the new album i got he needed cheering up

gilly: i could give it back to him if you want?

sarah; er thanks but no id rather give it to him in person * blushes* i need to talk to him bout something

just then craig walked up

craig: what is it get back with all our ex's day?

gilly: gosh man were just talking

craig: talking cn lead to alot of other thins!

Hunni xxx

ps could you see this hppening?

Hunni xxx

i can see this happening
i liked sarah nd rhys together befor he turned into a little sod lol and now hes all upset i think it could happen

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just caught up and this is GREAT!
cant wait to read more.

keep on posting im really liking this
if only this wouold really happen!

THANKS SOOOOOO MUCH IT HELPS ME ALOT!!!!!

gilly: i'll just go i can hear... er someone calling my name

craig: yeah drink it in cos this is the closest youll get

sarah: craig youve gone over the line ill tealk to you later just get lost

sarah stalked her arms crossed when she bumped into her dad

dad: alright whats happened?

sarah: nothing look have you seen rhys?

dad: fortunately no.

sarah: oh cos i found his phone and i wanted to give it to him

dad: oh well hopefully you wont find him

sarah:Thats Mean!

dad: yeah well he desreves it

sarah: e's been through a tough time

dad: sarah HE CHEATED ON YOU WITH YOUR OWN MOTHER!

sarah: i mean recently

dad: he doesnt deserve your attention

sarah: well maybe its the only attention hes getting at the moment

sarah walked off in the direction of he SUbar to find rhys she needed to talk to him and fast

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aww poor rhys. they are all being mean to him except sarah
cant wait to read more.

Thanks Yasmin For You

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she looked around but couldn't spot him and soon decided to look else where, she walked out careful not to bump into any one else she didnt want to speak to. in stead she bumped into hannah who wasnt bothered by rhsy more bothered in where JP was

sarah: wheres rhys?

hannah: i dunno do i?! call him

sarah: i have his phone

hannah: where would he go?

sarah: hannah why do you think im asking you i have no idea! wait check the dog

hannah: why me? why cant you

sarah: avoiding craig

hanah: what this time?!

sarah: long story look please just do it and call me when you find him

hannah: fine

hannah walks off in the direction of the dog as sarah goes the opposite way to search the loft

sarah looked around and asked clare but she hadnt seen him and no one else had when she got a disturbing call from hannah.....

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A disturbing call from Hannah

*thinks of possible stuff*

Hannah: Sarah, I love you.

Sarah: I love you too!

*thinks of more*

Hannah: I'm a frog

*thinks of another*

Hannah: I'm Hannah by day... Craig by night