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You're reading Cold Mountain? How goes it?


"One day my logic was proven wrong because the tide came in and gave me a sail"
 
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It's pretty good actually, I like it. But I should be reading it for the second time at least so I can take my English Lit AS in January, but I haven't even finished it for the first time yet Frown *panic attack*


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You'll do fine, LJ. You always do! Smile


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The vote of confidence is all well and good but still...*panic attack*


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**hands LJ a paper bag**


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I am a fan of the slapping technique for panic attacks/hysterics. Paper bags are just so boring.

*slaps Jade*

You'll do great sweetpea Big Grin



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Thanks for the paper bag, Becky - but I'm sure Roxy's theory is much smarted. I mean, how can I worry when i'm UNCONSCIOUS??

Tuh.
 
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Been writing-to-distract again...may as well post it, I guess

Just one more time is all I want
Just one more cut to free the pain.
I'll do it again, Use blood as my font.
I just want to keep playing my game.

I've said I'm done,
And yet no one has believed me.
The cuts were gone,
Picking scabs was no longer in me.

You told me there was no point in trying,
that I would never be done.
You sat and listened to my crying,
and thought it was all for fun.

One cut is all I need,
I've tried not to cut,
But I still want to bleed.
I still want the feeling in my gutt.

No one gets it,
They all just laugh.
I just want one more bit,
This could be the last half.

One more cut to ease my mind,
one more stab to fix my crave.
Just one more cut that I have signed,
I'm just a razors slave.


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All you have to look forward to is unconsciousness; but you can never sleep - Jip, Human Traffic

Are you saying you want to be like me? Newbie, cant you see that, I just barely wanna be like me...? - Dr Cox, Scrubs
 
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Well whatever works for you, loz, my love (distracting-wise). I liked the last line - finished it off neatly.

And hey, everyone - I'm sure you've already noticed this but I thought I'd post a link here in case you hadn't.

Raw Cuts

Even if you don't want to enter anything in for it, it might be nice to have a go at writing something and putting it up here. Or, if you're thinking of submitting something and want to field the responses first, post it up for comment. Since there are so many damn good writers here, you've probably all got a great chance of getting somewhere with this so I'd say GO FOR IT! Unless, of course, you're not included in that age boundary (13-18) in which case...bummer.
 
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Ive entered it...but the word count is waaaaaaay over


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*Founding member of LMFAO*
*29th member of the Abby forum fan club*
*16th member of the Carby forum fanclub*

~*~Just because you're paranoid, doesn't mean they aren't really following you~*~

~*~Its a mixture of Jazz and Funk - I call it Junk~*~

All you have to look forward to is unconsciousness; but you can never sleep - Jip, Human Traffic

Are you saying you want to be like me? Newbie, cant you see that, I just barely wanna be like me...? - Dr Cox, Scrubs
 
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Meh, I'm too old :S


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Ahh Emma! I'm not entering it actually - thinking about it got me a little annoyed...


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What annoyed you about it?


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Sounded a little cliche, yknow? Like the kind of thing they give you in year 8 as an angsty outlet - which is all well and good - but I guess I'm in an easily-annoyed mood right now. Well, not anymore, but you get the idea...


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Yeah I get what you mean


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Bump!

I feel some writing is in order to save this thread from the moderators of death - anyone got any offerings?


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Clare put something really great up in my Live Journal community and I think we should all whine at her until she puts it on here. I love it - it's really souper


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I really like that Claire. It's so poignant. My favourite aspect is the ending paragraph because I think it ends it so well. It's beautiful. Ignore your class. Razz


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Clunky? That's not right - I loved it. It's a real task to get a whole story in such few words and you manage it with apparent effortlessness. I dislike your class.

The last line is perfect.


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Its really good, what the hella is wrong with your class?! Liked the last line also


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*29th member of the Abby forum fan club*
*16th member of the Carby forum fanclub*

~*~Just because you're paranoid, doesn't mean they aren't really following you~*~

~*~Its a mixture of Jazz and Funk - I call it Junk~*~

All you have to look forward to is unconsciousness; but you can never sleep - Jip, Human Traffic

Are you saying you want to be like me? Newbie, cant you see that, I just barely wanna be like me...? - Dr Cox, Scrubs
 
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I think it's really good, I don't really feel any cluckiness at all, it's just short and sweet but doesn't feel like it rushes to the point. I like it.


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I didn't see any chickens, either. Wink Razz


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lol, oops!


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Razz It made me smile if nothing else. Big Grin


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Hello.